
Windfall Life
by Crane Bar
About This Novel
He is Lin Ning, with the appearance of a tractor, the temperament of a Ferrari, and the wealth of Cullinan. He is really rich and has never been to his hometown. The land in his hometown was expropriated and he was given tens of millions. I have never met my biological mother, so she came and gave her a building.
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Official(5)Scraped 1d ago
There's a reason why the main character looks like a retard and no one reads it!
What is this? Is it from a male video? Why after reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the woman has been playing the male lead in KFC, and she also said that she will prevent the male lead from being robbed later, so at least you have to write about her sincerity towards the male lead, right? I feel like you wrote this woman in a condescending way. I don't know what other people think, but I don't like it, because it feels like the readers regard the male protagonist as their own property, and their interests cannot be lost at all. Writing like this makes me think of only one word, cheap. And this male protagonist, have you ever thought about why the woman suddenly changed her temperament? Why do you feel like you're still a bitch? No change? You are writing this for a novice. In the words of those who have no brains, you can't read it with your brain. But after reading more than ten chapters, I don't feel any better. Isn't it a slow-burning novel? But even slow-burning content shouldn't be like this. When you write this kind of content slowly, you can still read it in one word, cheap. But it would be okay if the consequences for this woman were to be more serious later, which would be equivalent to being thrown into the cold palace, but I don't know how many people would see it later.
It should be that the male and female protagonists swap identities, and the female protagonist has memories.
Are there any similar recommendations? I really like this one, but it's not enough.
How I write the main character makes me feel more and more shameless, obscene, disgusting and alienating~~ Is it my problem?
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Official(5)Scraped 1d ago
There's a reason why the main character looks like a retard and no one reads it!
What is this? Is it from a male video? Why after reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the woman has been playing the male lead in KFC, and she also said that she will prevent the male lead from being robbed later, so at least you have to write about her sincerity towards the male lead, right? I feel like you wrote this woman in a condescending way. I don't know what other people think, but I don't like it, because it feels like the readers regard the male protagonist as their own property, and their interests cannot be lost at all. Writing like this makes me think of only one word, cheap. And this male protagonist, have you ever thought about why the woman suddenly changed her temperament? Why do you feel like you're still a bitch? No change? You are writing this for a novice. In the words of those who have no brains, you can't read it with your brain. But after reading more than ten chapters, I don't feel any better. Isn't it a slow-burning novel? But even slow-burning content shouldn't be like this. When you write this kind of content slowly, you can still read it in one word, cheap. But it would be okay if the consequences for this woman were to be more serious later, which would be equivalent to being thrown into the cold palace, but I don't know how many people would see it later.
It should be that the male and female protagonists swap identities, and the female protagonist has memories.
Are there any similar recommendations? I really like this one, but it's not enough.
How I write the main character makes me feel more and more shameless, obscene, disgusting and alienating~~ Is it my problem?













