Stars Ancient Realm

Please give some suggestions for this book (purely suggestions, I just hope the book will be better, nothing else, huh) 1. The author's writing style is very good, superb, and the descriptions are also very vivid and detailed, which can create a sense of picture, the language is smooth, and it is easy and smooth to read, so I won't say anything else in this aspect. It is impeccable, let alone my humble opinion. I just hope that the author will pay more attention to the typos in the article... 2. I mainly want to talk about the content. First: I feel that the protagonist is full of obstacles. He has a sacred weapon and bones, a big boss who guides him, and a group of close friends who are extremely talented. He has had an easy journey of cultivation and has not suffered any hardships. (Although the protagonist has been said to have setbacks, he has only mentioned them, as if he only has arguments without arguments.) The number of people he has come into contact with is even pitiful, and he has not experienced the dangers of the human heart and the warmth and coldness of the world. How can one stand on top of the world without falling into the deepest darkness and despair? These are mainly reflected in the fact that when the protagonist encounters danger, he does not think about retreat, how to survive, but how to join forces with his partners. (It makes people feel that the protagonist relies too much on external objects and outsiders. If the protagonist is left alone, he has no artifacts and bones. Compared with others, he is just more diligent and smarter. His achievements are just due to good luck and good luck, and these top-notch artifacts are basically given to him for nothing.) The protagonist will not even worry about his life at all. It's not that there can't be cheats, but the cheats must be moderate. Readers can't see only the weapons and Worcester's achievements and ignore the protagonist's own strength. Second: There is too little description of the protagonist. The readers are not even familiar with the protagonist, so they arrange a bunch of companions next to him. As a result, the protagonist is not worthy of the name. It feels like the halo of the protagonist has been taken away. The impression of the protagonist is basically not only calm. When reading, there is no sense of immersion. Third: The protagonist's team is ridiculously strong. They can be beaten in seconds at the fifth level. What's the use of their cultivation? This is only the first or second level. It's so heaven-defying. It only has artifacts and bones that can be compared to other people's cultivation for most of their lives. It's not good, okay? Fourth: There is nothing to watch, no contradictions, the protagonist's journey is too smooth, and the plot seems bland. I hope the author can add some interesting points, such as pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, and someone behind the scenes to seize the treasure. Or some thrilling and tortuous plots. The main purpose is to hope that the protagonist can be independent, face danger alone, fly out of the protective circle, work hard on his own, come into contact with some insidious people, learn from them, and become a strong person through his own efforts. Um. . Actually I haven't finished reading it yet, so the comments may be one-sided, don't mind 😊 Hope to adopt the reasonable suggestions 😘

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Here I would like to recommend a book by a friend, "The Block Sword Maker of Minecraft". This book was first published on another platform, but something went wrong when a friend transferred it to QQ to read. The order of the first few chapters was wrong. Overall, the writing is pretty good, and my friends have been revising it and trying to solve the problems in the work.

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What a great writing style. I am indeed a fan of Pigeon.

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