Daming: My Son, Please Come Out of the Mountain, Lao Zhu, Please!
by Rice Vinegar Vinegar Vinegar
About This Novel
Traveling through the Ming Dynasty, Zhu Yi originally just wanted to be a leisurely and silly son of a landlord, but unexpectedly he regarded Zhu Yuanzhang as his biological father. "Dad, there are constant disputes in the court, please stay at home and take care of yourself!" "Your backer Hu Weiyong is going to fall. Dad, you should run away quickly!" "Dad, look at my latest invention of the flintlock gun. If each servant has one, we will definitely be able to save our family property when Zhu Di is in trouble!" Until one day, my biological father transformed into a bright yellow dragon robe. "Son, look who I am! Son, please come out of the mountain, Lao Zhu, please!"
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Official(9)Scraped 2mo ago
It's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish
It's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish
Xiaobai's novel, you can tell at a glance that this is the first time I've written this kind of novel.
What an idiot. Zhu Yuanzhang is so unbearable. He is also the founding emperor after all. Zhu Biao is not that unbearable.
There is a problem with Chapter 22.
Does the protagonist know Zhu Yuanzhang's identity?
Don't you even know when Queen Ma died?
Empress Ma died behind Zhu Biao. Are you kidding me? Empress Ma died fifteen years after Hongwu.
A novel about the cuckold's soul wearing a cuckold
A brainless and enjoyable article, just read it without thinking.
A dog's head saves one's life. It's just a novice. It's fun without any brains.
baffling
How did the male protagonist know that the person in front of him was Queen Ma?
It's true that the writing is not good
If the author's writing style had been in this style, it would have been unreadable. It would have been too trivial and situational. This is not writing a novel, this is writing a screenplay. What I hate the most is this kind of situation-describing dialogue that appears inexplicably without explaining the cause and effect. This kind of headless and tailless style belongs to foreign literature. This style is difficult to control. If it is not written well, it will become a white text. The time, place and characters are not introduced clearly at first. In addition, the story type is not attractive, the logic is not clear, the character story is unreasonable, and there are a lot of poisonous points. The level really needs to be improved.
Pure, pure, pure, pure stitch monster! ! !
Pure, pure, pure, pure stitch monster! ! !
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Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 2mo ago
It's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish
It's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish, it's rubbish
Xiaobai's novel, you can tell at a glance that this is the first time I've written this kind of novel.
What an idiot. Zhu Yuanzhang is so unbearable. He is also the founding emperor after all. Zhu Biao is not that unbearable.
There is a problem with Chapter 22.
Does the protagonist know Zhu Yuanzhang's identity?
Don't you even know when Queen Ma died?
Empress Ma died behind Zhu Biao. Are you kidding me? Empress Ma died fifteen years after Hongwu.
A novel about the cuckold's soul wearing a cuckold
A brainless and enjoyable article, just read it without thinking.
A dog's head saves one's life. It's just a novice. It's fun without any brains.
baffling
How did the male protagonist know that the person in front of him was Queen Ma?
It's true that the writing is not good
If the author's writing style had been in this style, it would have been unreadable. It would have been too trivial and situational. This is not writing a novel, this is writing a screenplay. What I hate the most is this kind of situation-describing dialogue that appears inexplicably without explaining the cause and effect. This kind of headless and tailless style belongs to foreign literature. This style is difficult to control. If it is not written well, it will become a white text. The time, place and characters are not introduced clearly at first. In addition, the story type is not attractive, the logic is not clear, the character story is unreasonable, and there are a lot of poisonous points. The level really needs to be improved.
Pure, pure, pure, pure stitch monster! ! !
Pure, pure, pure, pure stitch monster! ! !
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