Da Qin: My Eldest Son's Identity Has Been Revealed

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There is nothing else I want to say, except that Zhao Gao can be bettered. After all, he is the most popular person around Qin Shihuang now. Even if he doesn't like him, he still needs to have a good relationship. Moreover, Zhao Gao is not a eunuch. He is just a eunuch, not castrated. He has children in history. After all, his showing kindness to the protagonist can be appropriately softened.

Bian Que was from the Three Kingdoms period and was killed by Cao Cao

As a novel, this is okay, but it is a bit imprecise, because Qin Wangzheng was only 7 years old when he was brought back to the country. If he was born in the Zhao Kingdom and was unable to raise an army, it would be impossible for the Qin Kingdom to live among the people, right?

Can the author speed up the process? Because this kind of war is the most interesting, the general is like Huo Qubing, with an extremely powerful dynasty behind him, and he quickly advances to attack Greece.

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I use a plus/minus point (star) system for rating. This is also my first book review. First of all, I give five points to Brother Zheng and Brother Meng De. I would like to thank Brother Zheng for his heartfelt performance and Meng De for his friendly guest appearance. Then there are serious book reviews. Let's talk about the advantages first. From my personal point of view, I really appreciate the idea of ​​"I would rather let the world down", and of course there are experts from all walks of life. Among them, my most respected idols are Brother Zheng and Brother Meng De. This is also my original intention and reason for entering the trap. Among them, the treatment of Zhao Gao is very consistent with my thoughts. The so-called people who do not serve themselves will be destroyed by heaven and earth, especially in such an era. Although he was a traitor, in which dynasty was there no so-called traitor? A foolish king favors villains, but a wise king will also take advantage of villains for his own benefit. It can be said that this part is still good, and I can add one point. Next comes the shortcomings, and I have to say that there are still many shortcomings. One of the most serious problems is the system problem. Author, don't you have an outline? The system gave a lot of technology and then retired? Is it because it is too weak without technology in the early stage, but too strong with the system in the later stage? Then you can write it in a different way. There is no need to lose readers under the guise of systematic writing. Different people have different preferences. There are many readers who come here just for the system text, but the system disappears inexplicably and they don't want to read it anymore. Some people don't like the system text, but this book is still labeled as a system text. This alone has lost many readers. I don't know if the author can come around in the future, but this can be considered a big failure. The second is the historical issue (after all, it is a Shuangwen, so the historical issue is not ranked first). Maodun killed his father in the first year of Qin II, but now the First Emperor has just unified the world, so there is a bit of a gap between them. The attitude towards Confucianism is also slightly unsatisfactory. There are people in Confucianism who are close to Legalism. For example, Xunzi, the only Confucian I like, advocates that human nature is inherently evil, and was also the teacher of Li Si and Han Fei. This is not reflected. Another point is the issue of character design. There are some differences between the character design of Zhang Liang and the historical records (although I don't really believe in the history written by the victor). There is no problem with Xiang Yu's image of a reckless man. Then there is the point that I find most uncomfortable, the problem of describing major events. In the early stage, the part where the protagonist knew his life experience was okay, mainly because later on, I saved chapters for more than a month, and finally got to the point where everyone knew the truth, but when I saw it, I was a little disappointed, it was very bland, and it didn't capture the "cool" point of the story. I didn't feel "cool" in my heart after watching it, which made me very uncomfortable. Especially later on, the author became more and more sophisticated, and even some of the characters collapsed. I felt that the most severe collapse was Jiang Lu. It is normal to have that kind of psychological change, but the author did not write out the feeling of that change at all. It felt very abrupt and had a sense of character collapse. But speaking of water, there are places to add water ahead, such as Luo Yue and Kuaishou. They can obviously catch them all in one go and avoid future troubles, but they have to delay and release them again and again, which is a bit disgusting. There is also the war. When fighting the peninsula, I directly used the routine of fighting the south again. Even if you use it, you have to wait a little longer. I skipped this paragraph directly, and it did not affect the subsequent reading at all. However, some introductory text is not harmful. After all, it is a free book. This kind of water is okay, and it can also increase your knowledge. Above, a total of four points will be deducted. Finally, came the part that persuaded me to quit. As I said before, I entered the trap just for my brother Zheng. Until Qin Xuan went to sea, I had the mentality that I would pursue whatever I wrote... Dear protagonist, I know you are the protagonist, and you will definitely succeed in the end. Even when your ambitions are inflated, I don't think it's okay. But you are about to travel far away. Who knows if you will be able to come back in a few years? At least when you are in Xianyang City, or at least when you are in China, you let the First Emperor ignore the government affairs. You thought very well, and I thought very well at the time. You control the government affairs naturally, and the First Emperor can live a few more years, but what do you do before going to sea? Are you afraid that there is not enough chaos in the country? Do you know that your brother just rebelled? Although you have almost mastered all those people in history, do you know if another one will pop up tomorrow? Furthermore, what if something happens to the Huns? Are you in the country? It's okay if the author doesn't cause you any trouble, but what if he doesn't want you to succeed smoothly and has to do something like counterinsurgency? Good for you, you are the protagonist, where is my Brother Zheng? Although my brother Zheng is said to be an emperor throughout the ages, what if the author destroys my brother Zheng on a whim? ! I gave up after seeing this, and I don't know how it will develop in the future. I really want to know the follow-up. How is my brother Zheng doing? Friends who have been following him, can you tell me? (Maybe I will continue to chase?) Above, another point will be deducted. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his hard work in coding and showing us such a world. Thank you to the friends I met. Because of this book, I got to know you (although you may not know me). Thank you to those who have been sticking to @cigarette addiction. Above, add one point. Friends, we are destined to meet again!

Let's change the writing. Aren't Donghuang Taiyi and Luo Yue dead long ago? It's really outrageous. This is a fantasy novel about palace battles. I might as well write a new book.

Please give me a solution. Please give me a name, a surname of Wang, a name with soil, mountain, or ten in it, or the radical "capital". It is best to bring all three. Thank you, everyone. [Emot=default,84/]

Rubbish, the main character has a worrying IQ, has no brains to show off, is full of questions, and is speechless.