Passionate Years: Days of Fishing and Hunting in Beidahuang

The beginning is good, but the later characters are too stereotyped. The company commander, camp commander, and regimental commander were all written down as if they were drawn from a template. The supporting characters are becoming less and less humane, too NPC. In the later period, my passion burned over every little thing, and the food I cooked and the things I invented were not worthy of this emotion. Very inconsistent. At the end of Chapter 100, the reader feels that the author has no mood swings and the writing is cold, but he insists on writing with burning passion. It's very inconsistent and embarrassing to read. There is really no need to be passionate about Zhang Zhang. Spend more time polishing the protagonists and supporting characters

After winter, each company is basically fine. At the same time, all their nests last year are finished and they need to continue digging today. Then the problem arises. When it is time for the autumn harvest, why don't they transport all the grain to the first base, and at the same time select five to ten people from each company to continue production in the sub-base brick factory, and build all the winter houses of each company nearby. After the autumn harvest is completed, some people focus on building houses, while others go to the upper reaches of the river to cut wood, float it directly down the river, and pile it all on the dock near the river, waiting for it to be brought back after snow in winter. The more dispersed people are, the less likely they are to centralize and branch production. . . Finally, I am curious about one thing, how to solve the problem of lighting for the protagonist. . .

So far, it's been very, very, very, very, very, very good! 👍👍👍 The plot (development progress, advancement rhythm, etc.) Is reasonably arranged, the characterization of the main characters is very successful, the diction, word choice, sentence structure, and logical connection are very clear (yes, I am already writing a composition - a narrative), and there are no problems with daily common sense issues (people, things, technology, etc. In the context of the times). It's very enjoyable to watch and I can't stop watching it! Continue to maintain the momentum of progress, and the free starting point and Q reading monthly pass will be given to you later (it was originally distributed to other books😑), so you can get the results. Don't follow the example of the rotten dog egg next door and regress. What the hell are you writing? It's boring to read and I don't want to subscribe anymore😥

The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

This is the first time I have seen someone writing about Beidahuang, and the writing is not bad.

It's okay, but it's just too little. Can't it be updated with 10,000 words every day?

So far, the whole book is very attractive. A group of pioneers are building their home bit by bit along the way. Each character has its own characteristics, which makes people feel very immersed in the story.

Reasons for recommendation: There is no golden finger in this article. Although the protagonist uses modern knowledge to change his life, the basic life and wasteland development process of the first batch of Beidahuang people at that time are still basically acceptable. But caution the author. Some boundaries in writing this kind of writing. According to today's latest chapter, you are almost there again. . . Add some developmental discoveries to the protagonist. 1: Toilet paper. Beidahuang is rich in forestry resources. It is the protagonist next to the river. It is very suitable for starting toilet paper. The technical content is extremely low. It belongs to any unit: no need to discuss and order directly. . But you need to pay attention, here is: the most basic papyrus. Two: River use. There is a river near the protagonist, but the transport capacity of the river seems to have been neglected. . You can send the chopped wood directly down the river. Three: Water, whether it is domestic water, water for various productions or water for irrigating the ground, the protagonist seems to have forgotten the simplest thing: canals. . . . Four: Medicines. . . If medicines are insufficient, a variety of peppers will do. . . . . . . Five: You have raised ducks, but where are your chickens? . . . Where's the chicken? . . Six: You can burn bricks. Have you considered the burning point? There is no big tank. . .

Before I read this novel, one of the novels that I am still following is "Siheyuan: Progress from Railway Mechanic". This novel started out very well, but now it is a little different from this novel. This is the case with online novels. No matter how good they are at the beginning, they start to become dull. I usually only spend money to read one novel, and I only follow two others. I only spend free coins to read chapters other than 48 novels.

I just watched a little bit. But the author is obviously following the trend, the writing method is still old-fashioned, there is no new idea, and the writing is not good. Moreover, there are many mistakes in common sense, which makes it difficult to enjoy it. It would be better to say that this book has always been a small pleasure, not a great pleasure. Typos and common sense errors led to the break of Shuangdian, which made it unhappy. Others write too much, and write too many dark and calculated things, which makes it uncomfortable. If you really want to write, you can just add a few sentences to your essay when comparing the protagonists. Don't write it in chapters. You write too much about this kind of intrigue, and there is no big punishment. People who are neither dead nor crippled jump out to stir up trouble all day long. You don't really feel good about it, do you?