Starting from the Western Han Dynasty, Traveling Through Ancient Times
About This Novel
In order to seek self-protection and self-protection, the young man practiced immortality and understood the great truth, traveled back to ancient times through the river of time, pursued the secrets of heaven and earth, befriended the human emperor, accompanied the emperor's daughter, painted for the world of mortals, and became a chess player in the world. And it all started in the Western Han Dynasty, when he protected young Xuanyuan from leaving the Youxiong tribe. Author: I want to write a story about the virtues of immortals and saints and the struggle of human beings. It will not involve too many plots such as Long Han, Lich, Conferred God, Journey to the West, etc. That have been poorly written.
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
The sixth day without book reviews...
The content of this book is very good, very good, very good, very good, very good
Let's talk about my humble opinion.
This book explains too much. When writing, I don't write from the perspective of the protagonist, but from the perspective of the author, which obviously has a sense of decryption. This is from the reader's perspective. From the perspective of the protagonist, it feels very uncomfortable. The protagonist is completely ignorant. This is already known to the readers. In addition, the sentences are fluent. It's just that the storytelling isn't great.
The story is pretty good
The plot is still somewhat interesting, but the overall story is a bit hazy, and it feels like it was pieced together from many individual inspirations.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
The sixth day without book reviews...
The content of this book is very good, very good, very good, very good, very good
Let's talk about my humble opinion.
This book explains too much. When writing, I don't write from the perspective of the protagonist, but from the perspective of the author, which obviously has a sense of decryption. This is from the reader's perspective. From the perspective of the protagonist, it feels very uncomfortable. The protagonist is completely ignorant. This is already known to the readers. In addition, the sentences are fluent. It's just that the storytelling isn't great.
The story is pretty good
The plot is still somewhat interesting, but the overall story is a bit hazy, and it feels like it was pieced together from many individual inspirations.
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