Those Years When I Was an Apprentice to Uncle Jiu

Let me tell you in advance that I have not tested the poison. I am the person who is most likely to abandon books. There are many reasons for abandoning books. I personally think that a few conditions for a successful novel will make it easy to become a god. First: Emotions. For a successful book, the emotional aspect is the most difficult. But everyone doesn't like the anti-inflammatory theory, so they basically abandon the book when it comes up. I'm not saying that it's impossible for the protagonist to be ambiguous. Many authors are like that. They can't grasp the feeling, but they have to grasp it. Until later, the relationship between the protagonist and N heroine was discussed online. To be honest, disgusting! Disgusting, extremely disgusting. There is also a woman who has an affair with the protagonist, but then dies for the protagonist, and then the protagonist doesn't react at all! Hello. . You don't have any emotions, why were you having such an affair with that woman earlier? ? Nausea! Disgusting, extremely disgusting! That's my first point The second point: plot, for a successful novel, the plot needs to be clear, and the plot is the main thing. It is undeniable that the plot of Zombie Taoist Master is difficult to grasp, but it is not impossible to grasp. If you don't force the plot, it will be pointless. Really, what a shame! I teach the author a method. You can use the first sight of the protagonist to discover the plot. Isn't he handsome? For example, if you all think there is something suspicious about Lao Ren, okay, let's just let the doubts appear on their own. The protagonist asked Er Sha to make up for the mistake. Then when the protagonist went to Lao Ren's house, he was called back to get something by Lao Lin and discovered it. Isn't this plot awesome? ? How many more chapters can you put together? The third point: skills! Hey hey, I just want to ask some authors! It must have been hard for you to write up your advanced skills! ! ! But why did the front end disappear inexplicably after just a few chapters? ? In the past, fights in novels could be calculated chapter by chapter, because the authors were so smart and had so many skills! No matter if he is awesome or not, he can take out everything he got before. Now you are lucky enough to have worked hard to make it up and just leave it to have a baby? ? Is there a finale yet? ? ? Point 4: Items, very similar to point 3. Some authors don't know what they think. The items you were lucky enough to get and put them in your bag are eaten by rats. The author performs magic tricks for readers. Many people should understand what I say. You really can't remember it, so you used it on the spot, such as getting the Blood Bodhi after going through all kinds of hardships, etc. But within a few chapters it disappeared, yes, it disappeared! Isn't it delicious when you used it on the spot? Make up at least three hundred words. After introducing the functions and effects, I can still come up with three hundred words! That's all money! Isn't it delicious? Fifth: Chapter skipping, hey, when you are writing the plot, look at the previous chapter, okay? The front is on the earth, the back is flying into space, and the back is beyond the universe. Understand? This is a metaphor, a metaphor! That's all I want to say above. Suddenly I realized that compared to this, I still have the talent of being a male god. Tsk tsk╮(￣▽￣)╭

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