Marvel's Gravity Demon

It didn't take long for me to collapse after using the ability for the first time. It was still the kind of use where I understood the ability. The next day after the protagonist got some sleep, he used his ability for the second time. He fought with a group of people first, and the group killed one person and escaped. The protagonist used his ability to fly behind and follow them. Then he fought with others at their base, using heavy machine guns and other things. After the fight, the protagonist was not even close-up of his weakness, and he was still in a funny mood. Is there too big a gap between the protagonist's ability to use it twice before and after? I just wanted to take a nap, and with such an imprecise plot at the beginning, I didn't dare to read further.

It's good to watch, but every time the protagonist is manipulated by others, I feel very uncomfortable watching it. Moreover, the protagonist is really big-hearted, and he always falls into the trap of others. Writing a book is not easy, please come on, author

After reading only a few chapters, I feel like there is nothing new, 1. The yellow race among a group of Europeans (why the protagonist is so prominent) 3. The beginning of Iron Man (you may not believe it when I tell you, I knew there would be Iron Man after the third page)

The main character seems to be mentally retarded

Author, have you watched Women's Federation 4? I think the ending is okay, but it's a pity that the widowed sister died.

After reading it, it was suggested that IQ is online. It is recommended not to read it. If your IQ is lowered, don't blame me for not giving the prompt╰|･ิД･ิ |Beautiful guy passing by

Brother, do you dare to write any worse? I read a novel earlier, which is about entertainment in Marvel. Your book is not much different from the previous one. People who are busy do not do it, but have to be a dog licker (the part where I work as a consultant for SHIELD). I don't even know what you are writing?

It's very well written, but I don't know why no one reads it. But I hope the author won't be discouraged. There are still people who are silently supporting me behind the scenes. I hope the author can keep his original intention in mind and move forward! Fighting!

I dare not make random comments, for fear that later someone will use the Qinglong Yanyue Sword to teach me how to comb my hair in the middle, use the Fangtian Painting Halberd to peel apples for me, use the Chuanguo Jade Seal to smash walnuts for me to eat, climb high-voltage wires to play the Dongfeng Po for me, use the Dinghai Shen needle to knit a sweater for me, and then call me Xiu'er.

Gravity affects too many things, including time (general relativity). I don't need to use my originally awesome superpowers, but rely on the demon body? No brains at all