Entertainment: Break up with the School Beauty, Turn Around and Chase the 85 Flower

1. The content and text are smooth. 2. The male protagonist has developed into a multi-level film and television singer, and has won word-of-mouth and box office awards. 3. Be objective in your evaluation of roles, and criticize actors who have questionable positions. You should not criticize Hong Kong and Taiwan actors and directors like many Chinese entertainment novels, and call yourself "brother" because you look down upon yourself. Suggestions 1. The heroine or supporting actress doesn't have enough roles. Although the title of the film has 85 Flowers and it does win over Liu Shishi in terms of plot, Liu Shishi's role is not enough. 2. The female protagonists have more or less developed the halo of wisdom. Although the male protagonists can act, sing, do business, have good looks and money, the female protagonists do not feel any entanglement with the harem. How can they say that they need to pave the way for a change in their relationships? Some of the female protagonists even have foreshadowing plots, but they do not directly fall in love with her. 3. The male protagonist plans to wait until the female protagonist and female supporting characters have children to quit the industry or to become singers instead of actors. The feasibility of this is doubtful for some people. Although some women like money and have no career ambition, some actresses are very career-oriented. Although they also like money, they prefer to be in the spotlight. It has attracted much attention. For example, Fan Xiaopang can be very rich but still find a way to make a comeback in a foreign country. Therefore, it is theoretically impossible for some female protagonists and supporting actors to quit the industry or change their main career from actors to singers. Moreover, even if a singer has good songs, he may not be popular. Being popular is determined by many factors.

The dozens of chapters about participating in the singing competition are so wordy and unnecessary, can't they be simplified? It's not on the shelves yet, so I don't see any desire.

There is too much nonsense, please stick to the topic and don't use metaphors like this or that. Readers don't want to read it. It's just an entertainment article. It doesn't need to be too popular.

It's about a three-and-a-half-star rating. There's no forced intelligence reduction, and the descriptions of the supporting characters are pretty good, but the content isn't that exciting, and the pace is a bit slow.

The back part is too studly. Although I read the harem novel Teddy, at least each character should be different in your heart, with different degrees of importance. What you wrote is that I really like you and accompany you all the way. They are all of the same status as the people you just met. They are all dealt with in the same routine.

It's a good book. Can there be less popular science?

It's just too delayed. So there is no problem with filling in the content.

The book is okay, the writing is cool, but a bit bloated. If I write it this way, I will probably write 3,000 chapters in 10 years.

I just saw Pay, and I don't understand why I suddenly got involved with Gao Yuanyuan? Still delivered to your door!

There are a lot of pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots