The Little Daughter-in-law Who Traveled Through Qi San
by Yzmb
About This Novel
I traveled through the 1970s and became a little lolita. I didn't have enough to eat or clothes to keep warm. I had nothing to worry about. I had a doting sister on the left, and a childhood sweetheart on the right who was a warm little sweetheart. There were also a group of followers behind me. Beautiful and happy days came to me. Male version: Hmm, it should be my little daughter-in-law.
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Let me make it clear first that I have only read the first hundred or so chapters so far. I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing method or something else, but I always feel that the people around the heroine use some methods to force the heroine to do certain things. Although it's for the heroine's good, the intensity is too high, and they also forget that the heroine is just a child. It's very tiring to watch.
I can only say that it's a pity. It's embarrassing to read. The whole article reveals a kind of "hard humor" that is not humorous but has to be humorous. This makes it look childish and embarrassing. In fact, it is harmless without humor. If you just write it in plain language, this article should be okay...
boring
I just want to know if the heroine was three years old before she traveled through time? It's so childish, just worrying about everything with a kid all day long. Although the body she traveled through was also a child, her soul is an adult after all!
I want to say that since you have written space, don't make it look like waste
In an article like space, you either have to write about its characteristics, or you don't write about it. If you write about the space, it's as if there is no space at all. So why write it in? Just don't write it in, isn't it? Do you have to write it in just to make up the word count?
When I saw that the heroine picked up the jade pendant but had room for it and didn't want it, I thought she could die again.
Experience tells me that authors need encouragement
After reading the comment section, in fact, even if it doesn't look good, just comment and comment. Don't give a rating. This rating will affect the author's mood. If you don't like reading it, just turn around.
Looking at Tiexin, they didn't treat their family well in their hometown, but their family betrayed them. In the Northeast, it's how they treat the villagers well, and then it's how the villagers look down upon them. When I arrived in Beijing, I paid a lot for tutoring for students, and then the students scolded them behind their backs... I wondered, are all the world's supercilious people? There are some people who are ungrateful in life, but it's not like everyone would step on their benefactors.
I think the heroine was written to waste.
I've been reading this for so long and I don't know what the story is about. The heroine always has a lot of inner activities and talks nonsense. I can't stand it. I always feel like she has a mental problem. I can't stand it anymore.
This writing style is really addictive. It takes me a long time to talk about trivial matters. I skipped and read. The progress is not as slow as usual. I can't stand it any longer. I gave up the article.
It's really boring, the plot is too watery
As a time-traveling woman, when she encounters a jade pendant that sucks blood, she even says that she doesn't dare to use it even though it's a space, and she actually hides the jade pendant! I was drunk too. Rather, it's a long and lengthy story with no real plot. It's really hard to watch a story like this.
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Official(218)Scraped 6d ago
title
Let me make it clear first that I have only read the first hundred or so chapters so far. I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing method or something else, but I always feel that the people around the heroine use some methods to force the heroine to do certain things. Although it's for the heroine's good, the intensity is too high, and they also forget that the heroine is just a child. It's very tiring to watch.
I can only say that it's a pity. It's embarrassing to read. The whole article reveals a kind of "hard humor" that is not humorous but has to be humorous. This makes it look childish and embarrassing. In fact, it is harmless without humor. If you just write it in plain language, this article should be okay...
boring
I just want to know if the heroine was three years old before she traveled through time? It's so childish, just worrying about everything with a kid all day long. Although the body she traveled through was also a child, her soul is an adult after all!
I want to say that since you have written space, don't make it look like waste
In an article like space, you either have to write about its characteristics, or you don't write about it. If you write about the space, it's as if there is no space at all. So why write it in? Just don't write it in, isn't it? Do you have to write it in just to make up the word count?
When I saw that the heroine picked up the jade pendant but had room for it and didn't want it, I thought she could die again.
Experience tells me that authors need encouragement
After reading the comment section, in fact, even if it doesn't look good, just comment and comment. Don't give a rating. This rating will affect the author's mood. If you don't like reading it, just turn around.
Looking at Tiexin, they didn't treat their family well in their hometown, but their family betrayed them. In the Northeast, it's how they treat the villagers well, and then it's how the villagers look down upon them. When I arrived in Beijing, I paid a lot for tutoring for students, and then the students scolded them behind their backs... I wondered, are all the world's supercilious people? There are some people who are ungrateful in life, but it's not like everyone would step on their benefactors.
I think the heroine was written to waste.
I've been reading this for so long and I don't know what the story is about. The heroine always has a lot of inner activities and talks nonsense. I can't stand it. I always feel like she has a mental problem. I can't stand it anymore.
This writing style is really addictive. It takes me a long time to talk about trivial matters. I skipped and read. The progress is not as slow as usual. I can't stand it any longer. I gave up the article.
It's really boring, the plot is too watery
As a time-traveling woman, when she encounters a jade pendant that sucks blood, she even says that she doesn't dare to use it even though it's a space, and she actually hides the jade pendant! I was drunk too. Rather, it's a long and lengthy story with no real plot. It's really hard to watch a story like this.
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Traveling through 73 years, yzmb's book is not guaranteed to be a scam, it's very fat, let's kill it
Time travel to become a little loli, the days of no happiness are here.
Very good modern writing
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