
Longyou Pawn
About This Novel
In the summer of the sixth year of Wude, Li Bing came to this world and witnessed the barbarism of the barbarians, the so-called prosperous age of the Tang Dynasty, and all the darkness hidden under the so-called prosperous age. Where should Li Bing go? Should he accept everything incompetently, or should he defeat Li Er, the emperor of the ages, and become the helmsman behind the scenes of the prosperous age...
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Official(75)Scraped 24d ago
Test everyone
As we all know, in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Lu Bu is known as a domestic slave with three surnames. So the question is, what are the surnames of the slaves of the Kong family in Shandong?
Can be seen, relatively average
After reading about 10 chapters, the protagonist was a gangster in his previous life, and he actually knew how to use a knife. There are also some plots that are not very reasonable. Is it reasonable for Ma Shu to be made of pure iron? As a resident of a pastoral area in the northwest who is exposed to wind and sun every day, is it reasonable to set up a Lanling Prince and wear a mask? Is it reasonable to be afraid that the enemy will see the "handsome" face and despise the protagonist? And where did you get the courage to gather thousands of people in the early stage? You are a frontier soldier. Isn't this a proper rebellion in ancient times? Even escorting a caravan is unreasonable. What kind of caravan needs thousands of people to protect it? A border prince only has thousands of guards, right?
Is it boring to read one novel if it is 50% similar to another? It's okay to learn from it, but half of the content is over.
sameness
Although the writing is good, it doesn't come out to praise Li Er. It's a bit boring to watch too much of this. In fact, modern people can't stand Li Er's character of being a success-loving character. People from later generations can't erase their inner sense of superiority no matter how miserable they are. Even if he is forbearing on the surface, he still has the heart to be a king. Modern people have the mentality of not wanting to be a general or a good soldier. This is traditional education.
Too many typos
Doesn't the author check before uploading?
Is it wrong? Isn't the Guanlong Group a Guanzhong family? Cheng Yaojin, Qin Shubao and others belong to the Shandong Group. There is something wrong with this writing.
The writing is very good. I look forward to the following chapters where the protagonist will conquer Shi Yanran and seal the wolf to Juxu. I hope you can create another champion in the Tang Dynasty. I also hope that you can let the protagonist use the knowledge of the time traveler to make the prosperous Tang Dynasty a little more prosperous and let the people of the Tang Dynasty live a better life.
Looks great, great support~~
The writing is smooth and flowing, and the suspense twists and turns are all very delicate and beautiful.
Is it wrong? Isn't the Guanlong Group a Guanzhong family? Cheng Yaojin, Qin Shubao and others belong to the Shandong Group. There is something wrong with this writing.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(75)Scraped 24d ago
Test everyone
As we all know, in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Lu Bu is known as a domestic slave with three surnames. So the question is, what are the surnames of the slaves of the Kong family in Shandong?
Can be seen, relatively average
After reading about 10 chapters, the protagonist was a gangster in his previous life, and he actually knew how to use a knife. There are also some plots that are not very reasonable. Is it reasonable for Ma Shu to be made of pure iron? As a resident of a pastoral area in the northwest who is exposed to wind and sun every day, is it reasonable to set up a Lanling Prince and wear a mask? Is it reasonable to be afraid that the enemy will see the "handsome" face and despise the protagonist? And where did you get the courage to gather thousands of people in the early stage? You are a frontier soldier. Isn't this a proper rebellion in ancient times? Even escorting a caravan is unreasonable. What kind of caravan needs thousands of people to protect it? A border prince only has thousands of guards, right?
Is it boring to read one novel if it is 50% similar to another? It's okay to learn from it, but half of the content is over.
sameness
Although the writing is good, it doesn't come out to praise Li Er. It's a bit boring to watch too much of this. In fact, modern people can't stand Li Er's character of being a success-loving character. People from later generations can't erase their inner sense of superiority no matter how miserable they are. Even if he is forbearing on the surface, he still has the heart to be a king. Modern people have the mentality of not wanting to be a general or a good soldier. This is traditional education.
Too many typos
Doesn't the author check before uploading?
Is it wrong? Isn't the Guanlong Group a Guanzhong family? Cheng Yaojin, Qin Shubao and others belong to the Shandong Group. There is something wrong with this writing.
The writing is very good. I look forward to the following chapters where the protagonist will conquer Shi Yanran and seal the wolf to Juxu. I hope you can create another champion in the Tang Dynasty. I also hope that you can let the protagonist use the knowledge of the time traveler to make the prosperous Tang Dynasty a little more prosperous and let the people of the Tang Dynasty live a better life.
Looks great, great support~~
The writing is smooth and flowing, and the suspense twists and turns are all very delicate and beautiful.
Is it wrong? Isn't the Guanlong Group a Guanzhong family? Cheng Yaojin, Qin Shubao and others belong to the Shandong Group. There is something wrong with this writing.












