
The Demon Emperor Chases His Wife: the Bloodthirsty Concubine
by Starry Night
About This Novel
She is the underground ace killer of the 21st century, unparalleled in elegance and ruthlessness. She is known to everyone in the Tianjin Kingdom as a foolish young lady who is neither loved by her father nor loved by her mother. She is looked down upon by the world and bullied by her relatives. When she opened her eyes, she became her, holding a red umbrella, dressed in red, arrogant and wanton, and torturing scum along the way. He is the most outstanding prince in the Cang Ling Kingdom. Because of his talent, he is jealous of his father and jealous of his brothers! When he met her, he said: "Yuan'er, no one in your life but me will dare to marry you. Anyone who marries you will be killed without mercy, so you have no choice." The man said with an arrogant expression, "Oh? I didn't expect that the Demon Emperor would have such a strong taste that he would actually like a good-for-nothing, faceless girl like me. However, if you dare to marry her, why don't I dare to marry her." Everyone in the world knew that the Demon Emperor was bloodthirsty, ruthless, and ruthless, but he gave her all his iron-blooded tenderness throughout his life. Welcome to the Mengbaolai fan group, this is a night sky belonging to stars, group number: 640372718
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Official(104)Scraped 23d ago
Call for roles
I'm collecting roles for you little cuties. I won't necessarily use those with names. I'll screen the suitable ones. Come and sign up. I'm waiting for you here...
The content, pronouns are messed up, and the punctuation is terrible. What was originally a good novel suddenly became boring.
Geer is great
Ge'er~ The Lun family is here to see you~ Your writing is very good and vivid. It can make readers addicted to it and make readers feel as if they are immersed in the scene. Your writing is very overbearing and can make readers feel deeply. Let readers be immersed in the scene. Your male and female protagonists are portrayed very well~~ You will not miss every detail! ! ! You write very well! ! Come on [It's better than Yunshang's book] You have to persevere, I also want to be a master of ancient Chinese in the future~ right? The Lun family loves you the most~ah! ! As for the keyboard, is it really broken? Do you have to pay for it? ·
I am preparing to sign a contract. I will let everyone know when the signing is successful. Thank you for your support. I love you.
Great!
Ge'er, I read your book today and was very touched, so I'm going to leave a review and give you some suggestions. 1. At the end of each sentence, remember to add punctuation marks, as well as the character's language. Remember to add punctuation marks at the end of the double quotation marks. 2. Paragraphs should be clear, and each paragraph should preferably not exceed one mobile page. Otherwise, others will feel dizzy when they see words filling the screen of a mobile phone, so they will abandon the article. 3. Character's emotional creation, action description, and language description. Of course, emotion is also the most important. It should be delicate and preferably different, so as to highlight your characteristics and attract more people. 4. Emotions should be advanced layer by layer. On the surface, it is calm, but in fact, it is turbulent. The above 4 points are my personal opinions. But Geer also has many advantages. 1. It has a good grasp of the complex psychology of the characters, making the plot more vivid, concrete and attractive. 2. The characters are vivid in your writing, and can easily arouse other people's associations, as if they are actually there. 3. Don't be sloppy, be refreshing, make people feel happy when they see it, and make people feel that their choice is right. 4. The cover is very beautiful, super beautiful, very beautiful, don't leave it if it's beautiful~~ Ge'er, keep working hard, I believe you will get better and better! I think highly of you and show my heart😽
Can you update it faster? I can't wait.
The heroine is very crazy, domineering, and very handsome. I like the heroine so much😘. Good luck to the author. It would be great if he could update a few more chapters. How about the author😘
My little cuties, I wish you a happy Dragon Boat Festival
Come on, great job
Brother is awesome, not bad, keep up the good work
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Community(0)
Official(104)Scraped 23d ago
Call for roles
I'm collecting roles for you little cuties. I won't necessarily use those with names. I'll screen the suitable ones. Come and sign up. I'm waiting for you here...
The content, pronouns are messed up, and the punctuation is terrible. What was originally a good novel suddenly became boring.
Geer is great
Ge'er~ The Lun family is here to see you~ Your writing is very good and vivid. It can make readers addicted to it and make readers feel as if they are immersed in the scene. Your writing is very overbearing and can make readers feel deeply. Let readers be immersed in the scene. Your male and female protagonists are portrayed very well~~ You will not miss every detail! ! ! You write very well! ! Come on [It's better than Yunshang's book] You have to persevere, I also want to be a master of ancient Chinese in the future~ right? The Lun family loves you the most~ah! ! As for the keyboard, is it really broken? Do you have to pay for it? ·
I am preparing to sign a contract. I will let everyone know when the signing is successful. Thank you for your support. I love you.
Great!
Ge'er, I read your book today and was very touched, so I'm going to leave a review and give you some suggestions. 1. At the end of each sentence, remember to add punctuation marks, as well as the character's language. Remember to add punctuation marks at the end of the double quotation marks. 2. Paragraphs should be clear, and each paragraph should preferably not exceed one mobile page. Otherwise, others will feel dizzy when they see words filling the screen of a mobile phone, so they will abandon the article. 3. Character's emotional creation, action description, and language description. Of course, emotion is also the most important. It should be delicate and preferably different, so as to highlight your characteristics and attract more people. 4. Emotions should be advanced layer by layer. On the surface, it is calm, but in fact, it is turbulent. The above 4 points are my personal opinions. But Geer also has many advantages. 1. It has a good grasp of the complex psychology of the characters, making the plot more vivid, concrete and attractive. 2. The characters are vivid in your writing, and can easily arouse other people's associations, as if they are actually there. 3. Don't be sloppy, be refreshing, make people feel happy when they see it, and make people feel that their choice is right. 4. The cover is very beautiful, super beautiful, very beautiful, don't leave it if it's beautiful~~ Ge'er, keep working hard, I believe you will get better and better! I think highly of you and show my heart😽
Can you update it faster? I can't wait.
The heroine is very crazy, domineering, and very handsome. I like the heroine so much😘. Good luck to the author. It would be great if he could update a few more chapters. How about the author😘
My little cuties, I wish you a happy Dragon Boat Festival
Come on, great job
Brother is awesome, not bad, keep up the good work









