Movie King Big Star

1. The girl Qi, I didn't look back to know if she was the heroine. If she was, Shen Nong would have died when he came. The first time they met, she had a sprained foot and directly ordered the passerby to help her. The second time they deliberately arranged a chance encounter, Qi thought she was following a crazy person and called the police. After she came out, she said it didn't matter, she was a beauty after all, disgusting! More than 30 chapters into the book, a chance encounter was arranged, and here's the key point: every time the protagonist meets Qi, he will say that he won't think about it again, and then the author arranges a chance encounter, which is annoying. 2. The timeline is super confusing. The filming of Liangjian was in 2004. The protagonist used "smartphone" to go to "WeChat" to search for training courses "on the Internet". Note that WeChat was released in 2011. The Apple 3GS mobile phone was launched in 2009. Smartphones were not popularized in China until 10 years ago. Moreover, I heard from book friends (Liang) Sword), I also filmed part-time (both are pretty good), and based on the salary in 2004, it was usually around 1,000. If you perform a group performance for 120 a day, have a hot pot meal for a few hundred, and the rent is 800, this is unreasonable. Let's take into account the time later (both are pretty good). 3. The author gave the system to the protagonist in the first chapter. Until the 20th chapter, the protagonist has used the system four times in total (the system is limited to once a day). Once he used it, he simulated a rich person, and the rest of the time he was writing it all, or it was his own personal product. He worked harder and so on. Facts have proved that he did not work hard. 4. The author often slaps himself in the face. As mentioned earlier, he has become accustomed to big scenes and dead people in simulation training (simulation of the battlefield), but after the fourth simulation, he vomited after seeing brain matter. Such scenes are not uncommon. 5. There are few words and punctuation, which makes it really confusing to read sometimes. That's it, hope it's of reference value!

The descriptions are quite good in all aspects, but the writing is too detailed, which makes people feel that this book is very slow. There is no excitement, no excitement.

The fountain is beautiful because of the pressure; The waterfall is spectacular because there is no way out. Water without pressure and power will only become a pool of stagnant water! The same is true for people. Without pressure, people's potential will not be developed, and their wisdom will not blossom! As the saying goes: Birds cannot fly without wings, and people cannot achieve anything without ambition. If you put a little pressure on yourself, you may find that you are better than you thought. If you have the spirit of never giving up and the attitude of going all out, you will be amazed that you can also create miracles!

This writing method of putting together plays from different eras for the protagonist to participate in made me feel like I was skipping a play. When I was filming the last movie, I felt like the main character was ten years ago, but suddenly the main character jumped to ten years later to film the movie. It might be said that this is a different world with a different timeline. But we who read novels are still people of this world after all, and those dramas are the timeline of this world in our thinking and memory. Seeing such interspersions will cause confusion in thinking, and it will be difficult to bring ourselves into the scenes of the novel. The above is just my personal opinion and does not represent anyone else's.

It looks so much like the global movie star that it is suspected to be plagiarism.

There are so many words in a paragraph, sometimes more than 100, so it's just a single paragraph, and it's continuous. This is not a problem. The problem contains a lot of nonsense and has nothing to do with the plot. The recommendation index is 0.

It doesn't look good, it's too poisonous! Everyone thinks that the author should either stop writing about the system, and if he wants to write, he should be awesome. Entertainment articles are just enjoyable articles. What you write makes you feel uncomfortable. If you want to be funny, you are not funny, so why write entertainment works? Writing other types of words would be much better than this!

If all the limelight has been stolen by women, why write a protagonist? Whether the heroine is Qi Xueying or not, the most important thing is how the protagonist pursues the heroine. The gap is too big. This book definitely needs eunuchs.

Let's start from the assassination of the Golden Horse Award, to the conflict with the company. I found that the author forcibly created a tragic character for the protagonist. The entire novel is full of complaints from various authors. I hope there are less such things. I read novels to relax. Many of the contents are too deliberate and too bloody.

Don't tell me it's Qi