Deyun: Starting from Douxiaoshe

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Do you understand? (￣∀￣) Have you seen it? ? ?

The writing is too slow. In fact, there are some things that don't need to be talked about in such trivial terms. What's more, the writing doesn't look like a protagonist. Apart from being smarter (many of them are clever) and smart people, there are no advantages (how many in Deyun Club are not smart or smart?). I don't feel that there is any advantage over others.

It would be best to take Liu Xiening away. Please

Come on, it looks good, I like it very much, please update, please update

Come on come on! It's fun to watch 😊! ! If you post more, I will reward you.

The writing is okay, but when it comes to cross talk, the sense of immersion is a bit poor, and the overall story is very draggy. The three hundred chapters are all about Douxiaoshe. It would be better if I make more progress and write other chapters. After all, not everyone likes to read the content of Douxiaoshe all the time.

The first point is written too slowly. The second point is that I really don't see the protagonist. The third point is that the protagonist has been in Deyun Club for 5 or 6 years, and if the typhoon is like this, Lao Guo will push it instead of ignoring it at all.

When you write a book, just write it well. If you don't have ink, there is no need to write so many crackling narrations. You might as well find more cross talk jokes to sweeten the meaning. There are so many unnecessary, crackling narrations that look boring.

Recently there was a book called "Crosstalk, there is no big or small thing on the stage, but there are new graves off the stage." The jokes in this book are pretty good. I didn't find your latest chapter "Cross Talk, Teacher Gao Recognizes Godfather" funny at all.