Start with Cross Talk

I have read more than 230 chapters, and the writing was better at the beginning. However, the portrayal of the master of Chinese quintessence made me want to abandon the book. A master of Chinese quintessence gives people a sense of selfishness and greed. I feel that the portrayal of this character is not good. Second, the protagonist's character is not good. Although he was a copycat, for a brand new form of folk art, he took too lightly the composition of lyrics and music, so he casually agreed to twenty songs. The further I read, the more I wanted to give up the book. Just some of my personal opinions, thank you and goodbye.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I got the impression that the protagonist is a person who has no family affection or love at all. Before time travel, the protagonist already had a wife, and even the children were several years old. However, just after time travel, he left his wife and children behind and began to pursue a beautiful woman. He wanted to say that he loved that beautiful woman but could not say it out loud and still wanted to cry. The parents of the original owner of the body he occupies have never called to say they are safe. Although they are not your parents, they are the parents of the original owner of your body. You should also care about them, both mentally and logically. I would like to say that if the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, he shouldn't write them at the beginning. It's a flaw that makes people feel uncomfortable. Of course, I'm just making a suggestion. The content is pretty good.

There are too many poisonous points, so I won't go into details as they are summarized above. If you have the strength to dare to write poisonous points, you should write a round story! Take a look at what you wrote... [Emot=default,19/] It doesn't make my heart slip at all.

Are you not crazy? How long do you spend reading novels a week? How about you recommend some good ones?

The emotions written in the opening chapter are too deep, and it makes people unable to let go of their lovers, parents, and especially children. Once they leave the house, they forget the feeling. After that, they are not in the mood to read any more. It's a bit of a drama. It's better to write an orphan in front, so that I can still substitute it. I couldn't stand it anymore and had no choice but to abandon the book. Come on, I hope the more you write, the better

Not bad! The author wrote the article carefully. Crosstalk is a craft that is easy to write, but difficult to become popular. The author's writing is also great and thoughtful. But as a reader who has read the genuine book and voted for recommendation, I would like to make some small suggestions! We have a lot of typos, so I suggest you review it carefully!

[Remove the cause of misfortune] People who randomly search for happiness in the world are the most unfortunate people in the world. Don't compare blindly, happiness will always be there; don't lose yourself, self-confidence will always be there; don't beg for happiness, self-esteem will always be there; don't be greedy, be contented, be content; don't be too vain, be leisurely; don't doubt everything, true love will always be there; don't live a complicated life, happiness will always be there; don't hate society, live in harmony. Happiness is in your own hands.

The protagonist's personality is too much, haha! Improper outlook and hypocritical character

I wish the author could add more cross talk scenes later on, it feels like there are less and less of them.

What have you written since Charge? ? ? ? Shit? What a waste of my money. It's dull, not funny, and embarrassing.