
People Are Yearning for Live Streaming of Rural Life
About This Novel
Peach Blossom Temple in Peach Blossom Mountain, Peach Blossom Village under Peach Blossom Temple. There was a mushroom house living next door, and Qin Chu was live broadcasted accidentally... Everything started from here
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(121)Scraped 23d ago
Very good, the writing is terrible. Keep up the good work.
Not bad!
After reading a few chapters, I saw that Ling Shui was left for me and I didn't want to read it. Can we write something about the human world? Return spiritual water.
Where is my daughter?
I've been writing recently, but I'm not interested in reading it anymore. The main character just sings, picks up girls, and has all kinds of desires every day! Or he's on a business trip for half a month, doesn't he still have a daughter? Where did that daughter go? Not even mentioned at all? Is this the character of the daddy? Are you planning to give the protagonist a father who abandons his daughter? Then knowing that Nannan was abandoned, what if she is given away or abandoned by the protagonist again? Then the character of the protagonist's dad also collapsed? It's such a mess, can it be written with some rhythm? [Emot=default,12/]
What the hell are you writing? Why don't you check the content and read it smoothly? If you don't know how to write, just read a few more times how other people write and use words! Compare it with your own to see how wrong you are. You haven't graduated from elementary school. You have enough typos to write another novel! Messy
Rating
Community(0)
Official(121)Scraped 23d ago
Very good, the writing is terrible. Keep up the good work.
Not bad!
After reading a few chapters, I saw that Ling Shui was left for me and I didn't want to read it. Can we write something about the human world? Return spiritual water.
Where is my daughter?
I've been writing recently, but I'm not interested in reading it anymore. The main character just sings, picks up girls, and has all kinds of desires every day! Or he's on a business trip for half a month, doesn't he still have a daughter? Where did that daughter go? Not even mentioned at all? Is this the character of the daddy? Are you planning to give the protagonist a father who abandons his daughter? Then knowing that Nannan was abandoned, what if she is given away or abandoned by the protagonist again? Then the character of the protagonist's dad also collapsed? It's such a mess, can it be written with some rhythm? [Emot=default,12/]
What the hell are you writing? Why don't you check the content and read it smoothly? If you don't know how to write, just read a few more times how other people write and use words! Compare it with your own to see how wrong you are. You haven't graduated from elementary school. You have enough typos to write another novel! Messy



























