The Road to Ordinary Live Streaming

Cast your vote! This is my first time reading this type of article. Not bad.

There has been a recent shortage of books. Just reading around, I feel that the personal pronouns you wrote are a bit confusing. But since this is your first time writing a novel, I'll forgive you. I always feel that there is something in what you write. Ha ha. Keep up the good work, it's too little now. Not interesting to watch.

I came here from someone else's book club. Actually, I think your writing is okay, but the one-sentence paragraph is too long. It will be much more pleasing to the eye if you modify it.