Urban Djinn
by Ghost Valley Immortal Master
About This Novel
Are you a gambling god? Is it awesome? I have the most powerful thousand skills in the world - super memory. You are just a scumbag in front of me. Are you the number one expert in the Elephant Race? So powerful that no one can match it? I laughed, you actually competed with giants. Do you still pick up leaks? Is it necessary to go to such trouble? Even if I pick up a random stone on the ground, I can sell it for 100,000 to 80,000 yuan. What I rely on is not my eyesight, but my face. If I say it is a priceless jade, who dares to say no? Chen Dasheng, a lovelorn man, accidentally obtained the inheritance of the ancient giant spirits and became the only descendant of the giant spirits on the earth, launching a magnificent counterattack.
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Official(263)Scraped 1mo ago
I hope the author can give me an explanation. I feel very uncomfortable right now.
First of all, let's make it clear: I'm not giving you one point because the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, I really enjoyed reading this book and I became fascinated while reading it. However, there were many places where the plot didn't match up, which made me uncomfortable. For example, in Chapter 80, why did Chen Dasheng teach Liu Yunshi boxing that the first few moves were taken seriously? I blushed at the end of the lesson and then in the next paragraph, there was still a scent of fragrance in the air. According to the plot, there should be a very important paragraph in the middle where Chen Dasheng confessed but it was not written at all. Moreover, there were many places like this in the previous paragraph. I will not explain them one by one. I hope the author can give an explanation.
Very good novel! Come on!
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit sloppy
There can't be too much brightness at the end.
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Abandoned the book. The Golden Buddha was snatched back, but no expert in Tibet came to pick it up. There was only one person. He also said how important this living Buddha was. So many people were snatching it, and they had to send it back. They didn't dare to sit down. If someone tried to take it, the country would not let them go! I didn't even think twice when I wrote this plot.
It can be said to be a very conscientious work. The characters here are all ordinary people, living an ordinary life, and they are still trying 99% to not be eliminated by society. There are busy cars, luxury cars, and ordinary workers pushing tricycles to sell goods. It is made with a conscience and is worth watching.
Some suggestions
First of all, the author's writing is generally good, but let's find some faults. I feel that the first half was described too quickly. The protagonist's growth should be accompanied by an opponent who can restrain him. Secondly, the description of inner activities is a bit sparse, especially when Chen Dasheng shuttles back and forth between the mortal world and the free world. Are the mortal world and the free world different? The worldview and values that have been formed since childhood will definitely be different when you return to the mortal world for the first time and later when you return to the mortal world. The author does not describe it. I feel that the protagonist's journey from the mortal world to the Xiaoyao world is more like Changsha returning to Beijing. Also, why is it used the other way around?
There's always something I can't connect to
Some chapters are missing a lot
A very nice book
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Official(263)Scraped 1mo ago
I hope the author can give me an explanation. I feel very uncomfortable right now.
First of all, let's make it clear: I'm not giving you one point because the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, I really enjoyed reading this book and I became fascinated while reading it. However, there were many places where the plot didn't match up, which made me uncomfortable. For example, in Chapter 80, why did Chen Dasheng teach Liu Yunshi boxing that the first few moves were taken seriously? I blushed at the end of the lesson and then in the next paragraph, there was still a scent of fragrance in the air. According to the plot, there should be a very important paragraph in the middle where Chen Dasheng confessed but it was not written at all. Moreover, there were many places like this in the previous paragraph. I will not explain them one by one. I hope the author can give an explanation.
Very good novel! Come on!
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit sloppy
There can't be too much brightness at the end.
? ? ? ? ? ?
Abandoned the book. The Golden Buddha was snatched back, but no expert in Tibet came to pick it up. There was only one person. He also said how important this living Buddha was. So many people were snatching it, and they had to send it back. They didn't dare to sit down. If someone tried to take it, the country would not let them go! I didn't even think twice when I wrote this plot.
It can be said to be a very conscientious work. The characters here are all ordinary people, living an ordinary life, and they are still trying 99% to not be eliminated by society. There are busy cars, luxury cars, and ordinary workers pushing tricycles to sell goods. It is made with a conscience and is worth watching.
Some suggestions
First of all, the author's writing is generally good, but let's find some faults. I feel that the first half was described too quickly. The protagonist's growth should be accompanied by an opponent who can restrain him. Secondly, the description of inner activities is a bit sparse, especially when Chen Dasheng shuttles back and forth between the mortal world and the free world. Are the mortal world and the free world different? The worldview and values that have been formed since childhood will definitely be different when you return to the mortal world for the first time and later when you return to the mortal world. The author does not describe it. I feel that the protagonist's journey from the mortal world to the Xiaoyao world is more like Changsha returning to Beijing. Also, why is it used the other way around?
There's always something I can't connect to
Some chapters are missing a lot
A very nice book
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