I Am a Machiavellian in the System World
by Xingdansheng
About This Novel
This article is different from traditional system articles. The main line is the disputes surrounding the entire system world, including the overt and covert struggles between various systems, as well as the light and dark sides of the system world. The protagonist was not well portrayed in the early stage. By the way, the author went to cultivate immortality (to practice writing, and the writing is too scummy). I just used the title to recommend the companion article "After Becoming a Divine Envoy" (some of the content here is related to this article. The heroine occasionally makes a cameo in this article, but the world in it is not the world in the system world)
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In fact, I was deceived by the [statement] in the copy. In fact, the subject matter of this book is good and very novel, but the author's writing skills are a bit lacking and cannot fully support it. Through the dialogue, it can be seen that the heroine in the book should be a person who is afraid of death, lacks care, is timid, and respects others. However, the dialogue description is a bit too procrastinating. It is recommended to use demeanor, action and other descriptions in addition to dialogue to set it off. The description of the characters is also too plain, no matter how timid they are in life and death (dangerous), they should still be able to stimulate some potential (yes, that is the power of the ancient times), or they may be afraid of death but are analyzing (calculating) something in their hearts. The system should be a Tongzi who was severely abused by the previous host. He is a bit insidious and selfish, but he still has a conscience, protects his shortcomings, is arrogant, and is a bit bully and afraid of the strong (?). The shortcoming is that most of the dialogue is used to create the image, and it should be described from many aspects. (This is what I personally think) The above is purely a personal opinion. After all, everyone has different ideas. Maybe what I said is wrong. After all, I'm not good at pointing out mistakes. The author works hard and the subject matter is great. I look forward to it~ You just need to practice your writing and other things more, come on~
Changed the title of the book to "I'm a Machiavellian Man in the System World"
Introduction: Instead of working for others, it is better to take charge and be the boss yourself!
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In fact, I was deceived by the [statement] in the copy. In fact, the subject matter of this book is good and very novel, but the author's writing skills are a bit lacking and cannot fully support it. Through the dialogue, it can be seen that the heroine in the book should be a person who is afraid of death, lacks care, is timid, and respects others. However, the dialogue description is a bit too procrastinating. It is recommended to use demeanor, action and other descriptions in addition to dialogue to set it off. The description of the characters is also too plain, no matter how timid they are in life and death (dangerous), they should still be able to stimulate some potential (yes, that is the power of the ancient times), or they may be afraid of death but are analyzing (calculating) something in their hearts. The system should be a Tongzi who was severely abused by the previous host. He is a bit insidious and selfish, but he still has a conscience, protects his shortcomings, is arrogant, and is a bit bully and afraid of the strong (?). The shortcoming is that most of the dialogue is used to create the image, and it should be described from many aspects. (This is what I personally think) The above is purely a personal opinion. After all, everyone has different ideas. Maybe what I said is wrong. After all, I'm not good at pointing out mistakes. The author works hard and the subject matter is great. I look forward to it~ You just need to practice your writing and other things more, come on~
Changed the title of the book to "I'm a Machiavellian Man in the System World"
Introduction: Instead of working for others, it is better to take charge and be the boss yourself!
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