Quickly Wear It, I Just Want to Become a God

Collected. Let's mention a few small bugs first! The first is the heroine. The heroine said that she has been in the ward since she was eight years old because of illness. Then when she and Xu Fan founded the company, she also said that the heroine has outstanding abilities. When did she learn to do business? Then there is the stock that bankrupted the heroine's brother overnight. Although this is a novel, I still have to say, this is too fantasy! Then there is the story. It is too simple. You can write it in more detail. The story is not interesting at all, and then it cannot attract readers. I don't know what the rest of the story will be like, but there are so few people writing about fast travel without CP, I'm short of books. I hope you will work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง. This guy's writing is pretty good and there are no typos. If anyone sees me, please reply to me and let me know if there are any changes later, otherwise I will not have the motivation to continue reading. Summary: Come on!

The writing style is funny, etc... And the most important thing is that it fits my aesthetic! Hahaha... I've finished reading it all. The author will update it soon. I won't rush you. Hahaha...

I'm going to give you an update. As a quick travel novel without cp, it's already very good in my opinion. Compared with many worlds that say cp, in fact, many worlds are about getting married and falling in love (which makes me feel like using other people's bodies to fall in love), or directly conquering other people in each world, or directly slicing souls, and the heroine is also weak from the beginning (it is explained at the beginning that the heroine and the system are both It's very weak) and gradually grows stronger, and it feels super awesome. It's not the kind of awesomeness from the beginning. It's exciting, but it lacks a sense of immersion as a reader. Moreover, the relationship between the heroine and the system is also good, and there is a sense of warmth, rather than a relationship of mutual use or mutual hatred. The heroine and the system are equal. Although the system loves points, it loves its friends more. And the foreshadowing of the work is also very good. The buried thread is very long but it is also slowly revealed. It makes me feel that the identity of the heroine may not be that simple. Come on o(≧v≦)o, I hope the update speed can be faster, I look forward to it! Everyone has different opinions, whether good or bad, just follow your own heart (the original intention of writing this novel, etc.). This work is great in my opinion. It is your lovely child, so don't give up on it easily (whether it is for three-dimensional reasons or other reasons), come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Every time the heroine performs a task, the task object uses the name of the tasker, not the other person's own name. It feels like the heroine is not fulfilling other people's wishes, but her own past lives. Why should the author bother? Even if you don't bother to name it, haven't you ever thought that such a missionary heroine is not fulfilling the wishes of others, but fulfilling the wishes of her former self? It feels like you are picking the peaches you grew yourself, but you are picking them in the name of peaches grown by others. I hope that the author must have a meaning for the people who publish wishes to other worlds. They don't even have a name, and they all use the name of the heroine. I am also confused.

The most obvious point: the heroine is very dependent on the system. The purpose of the heroine entering the mission world is to complete the mission and gain points. She never thought of taking this opportunity to strengthen herself. The heroine is very weak! Weak in every aspect!

Have you deposited your manuscript? Is it too big? Has it been significantly updated?

Looking forward to the exciting story behind! ! ~~~

👍! ! Very exciting, looking forward to the next story! ! ! 📝📖

Good, good, good, good, good, good! When will it be updated?

Is it updated yet? Is it updated yet? Is it updated yet?