
School Beauty's Personal Expert
by Silence
About This Novel
He practiced the Heaven-defying Art with strangers since he was a child, joined the most mysterious special forces, and became a terrifying and terrifying killer. After a failure, he retired early, but became the personal bodyguard of the daughter of the school beauty. Because he accidentally provoked some mysterious cultivators, he gradually led to a world of cultivation beyond the secular world...
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Official(10000)Scraped 16d ago
Be with me for several years...
I also think it's well written, Good for several years Not bragging at all, Seriously, I have read so many novels that the content is not the same. Some novels can no longer be read after more than 1,000/2,000 chapters. The more they read, the more childish they become, the more they read, the more verbose they become, and the more they read, the more boring they become. This is the only one I've persisted in, and it's not bad.
I seem to have fallen in love with you
An unpredictable accident, a sudden heroic rescue of a beauty. From then on, Su Yurou fell in love with Leng Xuan, fell in love with her, and lost control. Once she met Leng Xuan, she lost her life. I wonder if this will happen? I feel that Su Yurou is really attentive to Leng Xuan. For a girl like her, it doesn't matter if she doesn't fall in love. If she really cares about someone, she will definitely be full of love for that person. In fact, to be honest, Su Yurou and her cousin Su Zhenggang also like his sister to be with Leng Xuan, right? After all, Leng Xuan is capable. He has seen Leng Xuan's ability before, and it is still above his own ability, so if they can be together, then Leng Xuan can help him whenever possible. After all, he is now a new official and needs capable people of his own, and Leng Xuan is a capable person. Sister Su Yurou, have you thought about how to chase your brother Leng Xuan? I heard that when a woman pursues a man, there is a veil between them. Come on, keep an eye on you~ To predict what will happen in the future, please pay attention to ""School Beauty's Personal Expert" Topic discussion 1. Do you think a relationship between a woman chasing a man can be successful? 2. Men chase women, women chase men, which one do you prefer? 3. I wonder if Su Yurou can succeed in chasing after her, hehehe.
fine .
It's pretty good. In fact, the ending is perfect. His son is destined not to come back to him. After watching who Leng Xuan is for so many years, I believe I understand who he is and will always have regrets. So the ending is pretty perfect, just a bit pity, but it still leaves us with endless reverie.
Thank you, this large novel has been with me for more than 6 years. Sometimes I shed two tears and sometimes I am happy and excited. Such wonderful memories. I can remember Leng Xuan's name for a lifetime. If I have a third child, there will definitely be the word Xuan!
This book is very good (⊙o⊙)
Can you add a little romantic color to this book? Why do you like to use "wry smile" to describe Leng Xuan every time he faces Ling Xuejiu? Also, since Leng Xuan took the initiative to accompany Ling Xuejiu to the hot springs, and it was Leng Xuan who proposed that the two of them take a bath alone, why is there no romantic atmosphere? Could it be that the male protagonist you created is a fool? Since he is a fool, why bother? When the color content should be rich, you ignored it, and when you shouldn't say it, you just talked nonsense. Can you focus on the key points and describe the host and heroine more? The excitement of a story does not lie in talking too much, and readers are not stupid. You don't have to go into too much detail about unnecessary words. Even if you write 10,000 or 100,000 chapters without focusing on the hero and heroine, it will only make readers feel disgusted in the end. I hope you can capture the readers' hearts more.
Don't appreciate it, don't be jealous
How long is this book of yours? If you don't know how to read it, then you can read it in a long way. The authors of the stories in these units range from modern times to martial arts. The brain must be good at thinking in order to write. If it were you who wrote it, you would have messed up the characters and plot.
Run, run quickly
When you see these rubbish books, you must run away quickly and don't waste your time fighting over the plot and writing. If you run too slow, I'm afraid that your IQ will drop too much, so I'll give you a reminder with this book review🔥 Alas, online articles are really a gold mine nowadays.
A book with the most rubbish protagonist character
This is the most trashy book I have ever read with a protagonist. I don't know what kind of person the author wants to set the protagonist to be... Nothing but bad decisions
Brainless work that makes me collapse
After reading Chapter 3008, I really don't want to force myself to read anymore. This is the first time I have given up on a novel. I wanted to just walk away, but the author's writing style gave me, a rustic and vulgar person, the courage to write. First, be kind and soft-hearted. The protagonist's journey from a young military career to the country's number one soldier, a man stained with blood and killing, how could he be a kind-hearted person? How could a kind-hearted military king endanger his own safety? Where do your teammates live and die? Where are the national interests? But the author made the protagonist feel like he has no redeeming qualities except the protagonist's halo. The protagonist in the article can step on any dog. Second, he has no IQ. In this article, except for a very few parts that reflect the competition in IQ, at other times, no matter the protagonist, supporting role, or supporting role, they are all people with worrying IQ. It is said that the most ruthless imperial family is the most ruthless, but the young masters of the family are all a bunch of stupid people. They don't care about beautiful women, only for their own selfishness, and do not take the interests of the family seriously. In other words, they all feel like a group of nouveau riche. Many family heads are the same, passionate and impulsive. This is really embarrassing to me. If a family that has been passed down for a long time only maintains its survival due to passionate impulses, can such a family really be passed down for such a long time? The author lowered the protagonist's IQ, but those poor sidekicks didn't even have basic IQ. Third, there is no logic. In many places in the article, the author's logical thinking is confusing, he writes randomly, and there are many inconsistencies. It's no wonder that the characters in the book have low IQs. The author's IQ determines the character's IQ. In fact, it is okay to have a low IQ, but the author wanted to write some passages that reflected his high IQ, but the result was that the whole text was nondescript and embarrassing. Fourth, he likes to talk about women. Ninety-nine percent of the entire text uses women to introduce the following text. It seems that the characters in it are just like what I said above, they are all stupid people. At the end of every short story, something happens to one or several women around the protagonist, which then triggers the writing of the following chapters. Due to time constraints, there are still many speechless things that I won't list here one by one, but for me, the above four points are enough reasons for me to abandon the book. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it!
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Official(10000)Scraped 16d ago
Be with me for several years...
I also think it's well written, Good for several years Not bragging at all, Seriously, I have read so many novels that the content is not the same. Some novels can no longer be read after more than 1,000/2,000 chapters. The more they read, the more childish they become, the more they read, the more verbose they become, and the more they read, the more boring they become. This is the only one I've persisted in, and it's not bad.
I seem to have fallen in love with you
An unpredictable accident, a sudden heroic rescue of a beauty. From then on, Su Yurou fell in love with Leng Xuan, fell in love with her, and lost control. Once she met Leng Xuan, she lost her life. I wonder if this will happen? I feel that Su Yurou is really attentive to Leng Xuan. For a girl like her, it doesn't matter if she doesn't fall in love. If she really cares about someone, she will definitely be full of love for that person. In fact, to be honest, Su Yurou and her cousin Su Zhenggang also like his sister to be with Leng Xuan, right? After all, Leng Xuan is capable. He has seen Leng Xuan's ability before, and it is still above his own ability, so if they can be together, then Leng Xuan can help him whenever possible. After all, he is now a new official and needs capable people of his own, and Leng Xuan is a capable person. Sister Su Yurou, have you thought about how to chase your brother Leng Xuan? I heard that when a woman pursues a man, there is a veil between them. Come on, keep an eye on you~ To predict what will happen in the future, please pay attention to ""School Beauty's Personal Expert" Topic discussion 1. Do you think a relationship between a woman chasing a man can be successful? 2. Men chase women, women chase men, which one do you prefer? 3. I wonder if Su Yurou can succeed in chasing after her, hehehe.
fine .
It's pretty good. In fact, the ending is perfect. His son is destined not to come back to him. After watching who Leng Xuan is for so many years, I believe I understand who he is and will always have regrets. So the ending is pretty perfect, just a bit pity, but it still leaves us with endless reverie.
Thank you, this large novel has been with me for more than 6 years. Sometimes I shed two tears and sometimes I am happy and excited. Such wonderful memories. I can remember Leng Xuan's name for a lifetime. If I have a third child, there will definitely be the word Xuan!
This book is very good (⊙o⊙)
Can you add a little romantic color to this book? Why do you like to use "wry smile" to describe Leng Xuan every time he faces Ling Xuejiu? Also, since Leng Xuan took the initiative to accompany Ling Xuejiu to the hot springs, and it was Leng Xuan who proposed that the two of them take a bath alone, why is there no romantic atmosphere? Could it be that the male protagonist you created is a fool? Since he is a fool, why bother? When the color content should be rich, you ignored it, and when you shouldn't say it, you just talked nonsense. Can you focus on the key points and describe the host and heroine more? The excitement of a story does not lie in talking too much, and readers are not stupid. You don't have to go into too much detail about unnecessary words. Even if you write 10,000 or 100,000 chapters without focusing on the hero and heroine, it will only make readers feel disgusted in the end. I hope you can capture the readers' hearts more.
Don't appreciate it, don't be jealous
How long is this book of yours? If you don't know how to read it, then you can read it in a long way. The authors of the stories in these units range from modern times to martial arts. The brain must be good at thinking in order to write. If it were you who wrote it, you would have messed up the characters and plot.
Run, run quickly
When you see these rubbish books, you must run away quickly and don't waste your time fighting over the plot and writing. If you run too slow, I'm afraid that your IQ will drop too much, so I'll give you a reminder with this book review🔥 Alas, online articles are really a gold mine nowadays.
A book with the most rubbish protagonist character
This is the most trashy book I have ever read with a protagonist. I don't know what kind of person the author wants to set the protagonist to be... Nothing but bad decisions
Brainless work that makes me collapse
After reading Chapter 3008, I really don't want to force myself to read anymore. This is the first time I have given up on a novel. I wanted to just walk away, but the author's writing style gave me, a rustic and vulgar person, the courage to write. First, be kind and soft-hearted. The protagonist's journey from a young military career to the country's number one soldier, a man stained with blood and killing, how could he be a kind-hearted person? How could a kind-hearted military king endanger his own safety? Where do your teammates live and die? Where are the national interests? But the author made the protagonist feel like he has no redeeming qualities except the protagonist's halo. The protagonist in the article can step on any dog. Second, he has no IQ. In this article, except for a very few parts that reflect the competition in IQ, at other times, no matter the protagonist, supporting role, or supporting role, they are all people with worrying IQ. It is said that the most ruthless imperial family is the most ruthless, but the young masters of the family are all a bunch of stupid people. They don't care about beautiful women, only for their own selfishness, and do not take the interests of the family seriously. In other words, they all feel like a group of nouveau riche. Many family heads are the same, passionate and impulsive. This is really embarrassing to me. If a family that has been passed down for a long time only maintains its survival due to passionate impulses, can such a family really be passed down for such a long time? The author lowered the protagonist's IQ, but those poor sidekicks didn't even have basic IQ. Third, there is no logic. In many places in the article, the author's logical thinking is confusing, he writes randomly, and there are many inconsistencies. It's no wonder that the characters in the book have low IQs. The author's IQ determines the character's IQ. In fact, it is okay to have a low IQ, but the author wanted to write some passages that reflected his high IQ, but the result was that the whole text was nondescript and embarrassing. Fourth, he likes to talk about women. Ninety-nine percent of the entire text uses women to introduce the following text. It seems that the characters in it are just like what I said above, they are all stupid people. At the end of every short story, something happens to one or several women around the protagonist, which then triggers the writing of the following chapters. Due to time constraints, there are still many speechless things that I won't list here one by one, but for me, the above four points are enough reasons for me to abandon the book. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it!






















