Wear it Quickly, Baby, Love Me Again

This book is actually quite good for us, but I still want to ask some questions (although I may not be able to write them myself^O^). First, a common problem with most fast-traveling novels is that the rhythm is not grasped well. The pace of this article is not procrastinating, but too fast. It seems that this book does not rely on ups and downs to win attention, but a warm and fresh route. However, the pace is too fast, and the warmth cannot be felt, because I feel that I know the ending as soon as I read the beginning, and there is no particularly memorable feeling. I feel that it was completed in one go. People's abilities are constantly cultivated. The heroine is, and so are we for a long time^O^. If possible, lengthen it appropriately, instead of slowing down the progress, you can describe it in more detail. Although it is a quick-travel text, we still need to make an exquisite quick-travel text☺☺ Secondly, the characters are not vivid enough. After watching a plane, in my mind, the image of the protagonist is not three-dimensional and has no impression. Instead, the supporting characters attract my attention and are closer to life. The image of the protagonist does not make me feel very profound. The description of the heroine makes me not realize that she was a business boss before. I don't know whether the description of the male protagonist wants to take the innocent little brother route or the evil and cold route. I think it is aimed at the taste of the majority of women. It may look cool on the surface, but in reality it is sultry and coquettish. Of course, we have to change our taste. The male protagonist is the same person, so his personality will definitely change slowly. The same goes for the female protagonist. We can gradually change from aloof to humane. Third, the writing is not immersive enough. The description of the scene is too bland. Although we are taking the route of sand sculpture, I think there should still be warmth. Sand sculpture cannot impress people, but warmth and the tenderness shown are the most touching. The image of the heroine can be positioned in the direction of the gentleness of the outside sand sculpture. Appropriate more descriptions of expressions can better make the characters three-dimensional. These are the three major issues I have summarized. If the author adopts my suggestions and wants to communicate with me, I will be very happy~>3<

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When I saw it before, there were only six pictures. , I have collected it now that I have a lot of articles. It's really good.

It's almost finished. I don't know which aspect of the chapter you all prefer. I personally prefer the aspect of the pure emperor's scheming concubine. It's really sweet! !

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