Two-dimensional Comprehensive Comic Story

I have read the two-dimensional daily life written by Xiao Longjun, and this one. The character descriptions are very delicate, the emotions are well written, and the writing is really good. Looking forward to it.

Are you going to write about other worlds this time? If you are considering writing, please have a few less female protagonists. There were so many female protagonists in the previous books that I can't even read them. Last but not least, please be sure to write more about Yui and Yukino's Tachibana.

On April 28th, I took a day off. It's the first time I've taken a leave of absence since I started writing. Not Kavin, just want to be lazy for a day. V(◦'ωˉ◦)~♡

Multiple female protagonists, comprehensive daily comics. If you don't trade in stocks, you will occasionally learn in vain. The first two books, one has 1.63 Million words and the other has 2.33 Million words. "Second Dimension Option System" "Daily Stories in the Second Dimension" QQ reading is free. Please give me recommendation votes and monthly votes. (This book covers more than one world. For details, please refer to the two books above and select some of them.)

Have a lazy day and continue to update tomorrow. (I have one chapter left to submit for my new book, and I'm starting the second one. I wrote 13 chapters at the beginning of my previous Invincible article, and I can't finish it. I'm going to submit the second beginning to the editor first.)

The author's writing is great, and it completely makes up for all my fantasies. I like the emotional line very much. This is the best anime fanfic I have ever read in QReading. The writing is really great, so cheers for the author! Never be a eunuch! Finally, I wish the author that this book will be liked by more people and become more and more popular! 😘

But it's difficult to deal with too many female protagonists, especially those who have no emotional basis and are uncomfortable to watch. As far as Asuma and Kurenai are concerned, I personally think it would be better to separate them. As for the name, it's mainly a Chinese name, which is quite inconsistent, but the name Su Yu is fine. Finally, I would like to thank the author for reading the comments carefully. I wish you better and better writing skills.

As far as the previous book is concerned, before Tokyo Ghoul, it was very well written for 2D and some XP lovers. The emotions were in place and the ability made the soul of Chuuni burn. But when it came to Naruto, I couldn't stand it anymore and just grabbed women, just like ntr. First of all, it is actually a Japanese comic, and I personally feel that it makes more sense to use a Japanese name (there are no such things as exchange students in a world like Naruto). Then, don't take in too many girls, and don't write them as stallions. It will be uncomfortable to read. One or two from different worlds can be understood, but it would be better if they could not be brought back to the main world. If there are too many girls, it will be impossible to write, and it will be embarrassing to look at. If there are only one or two in the main world, it would be better to bring them back from the comics. Also, don't use NTR. Only if there is an emotional process can it be truly fascinating and give readers a better sense of involvement. Finally, as far as abilities are concerned, it would be good to extract a few abilities from the sub-world and then go in and look at it. Otherwise, it would be difficult to write about being invincible right away. Unless it is the kind of person who only plays as a god in the sub-world and randomly finds a female character, it is quite comfortable, but don't make the sub-world a mess. The change of the plot is important, but the fast pace and ntr will be disgusting.

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Some Kavin, take a day off. It's really tiring to double-book, and there are only ten chapters of the new book in the archives. This book will enter the middle period after the summer vacation travel chapter is over. It's still early to be finished, and there is still one female protagonist who has not yet appeared. The story of this heroine has appeared before... That's the one... Dating with seniors, watching fireworks displays with seniors, hanging out with seniors...