Quick Wear: Feeding the Male Protagonist
by Yilu Peanut
About This Novel
Xiaotian, who was in trouble in the real world, was already dead, but accidentally entered the world of the book, and lived again in the place of the female supporting characters with different identities and different circumstances, but none of them met a happy ending!
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Official(41)Scraped 26d ago
I hope you can read my opinion
I hope you can change the style of the story. The same story is all about changing the soup without changing the medicine. I hope I can make a breakthrough and torture the male protagonist a little bit
This is my personal opinion.
Is every story like this? It's because he likes her because of some things that caused them to be lonely for the rest of their lives. That's it. Every world is like this. Isn't there any change? It's boring to watch like this. And is the heroine always this innocent? Won't you change your personality? There were also those who said they wanted to torture the male protagonist, but they never did. Every time, the male protagonist said, "Be my girlfriend," and they reconciled immediately. It was true. . [Emot=default,28/]
The big book is very good😊
I saw this book when I was casually flipping through it. The writing style is very good, but the words "oh" and "what" behind the characters' speeches can be reduced appropriately, because it seems a bit pretentious. Also, can I write a small side story to explain clearly what happened to the original heroine😊. Finally, the type of fast travel is too single. Most of them are campus, ancient, and CEO. You can write about other types of planes, such as the military, entertainment industry, fantasy and supernatural, etc. You can add more types. Okay, this is my advice to Dada. Finally, I wish Dada's book will sell well and be prosperous. I hope Dada is familiar with me😊
The author is great. , It's not that I don't like the article you wrote, but I really can't see any tricks. The heroine is too simple. Every interface is the same. Sometimes I can't distinguish between the past and my memories. I hope that the author will be able to think quickly and create better articles so that readers can read different articles. Come on, I love you, okay.
Your evaluation of this book, hehe~
I hope you will read this book review. I have just started reading this book, and I have only read the first part, but overall it gives me a good feeling. The way Xiaotian died was not so exaggerated, unlike other books where he died after taking a sip of water. So this approach is acceptable. It can be seen that Dada's writing style is very good and it is very comfortable to read. I wonder if Dada has any experience in writing novels? For example, I have written novels on other websites because the writing is really beautiful. I really envy the love between Xiao Tian and Lin Ziye. It's not too dramatic, it's just a peaceful life, they like each other and care for each other. That's it. That's enough. Some advantages of big articles: 1. Clear thinking. The origin of the story is well described, and the love between Xiao Tian and the male protagonist is also just right. 2. The writing is beautiful. The article makes people feel comfortable to read, and the beautiful writing is a major advantage of writing novels. 3. The character description is in place. So far, Lin Ziye has a relatively dull face and a calm personality. His temperament changes drastically after he has not fallen in love. At most, he is more open-minded and realistic. (In real life, will a calm person become lively and active because of falling in love? No way!) 4. There is no deliberate attempt to discredit the heroine. The heroine has some small thoughts, but the author also emphasized that she is not inherently bad. This aspect also feels very good. There are many advantages, but there are also some shortcomings. When writing a long paragraph, you can divide it into paragraphs appropriately. Otherwise, one paragraph will take up most of the screen and feel unreadable. The dense black fonts are like reading a long composition... Just divide it into paragraphs appropriately. Just a small reminder, I don't need to describe it so much. I prefer to read the emotional lines (just my personal opinion) So far, I hope this book review will be of great help and the articles will get better and better! (Please reply~)
Isn't it 1Ⅴ1? Is there a fixed male protagonist?
I can't even understand it
The author's writing is not good, and it's obvious that he is a novice. From the first chapter to the fourth chapter, I can't tell what you are writing. I only know who the protagonist is. It is very confusing. For those who have read the novel for seven years, this book is not suitable for old book fans.
Author of Brain Pain
If you don't know how to write about apocalypse, interstellar, western fantasy, immortality, and vampires, how can you break it? !
I haven't read it yet, so give me a good review first, thank you very much. . .
push
It's great🥰It's my first time watching Kuaiwen from beginning to end
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Official(41)Scraped 26d ago
I hope you can read my opinion
I hope you can change the style of the story. The same story is all about changing the soup without changing the medicine. I hope I can make a breakthrough and torture the male protagonist a little bit
This is my personal opinion.
Is every story like this? It's because he likes her because of some things that caused them to be lonely for the rest of their lives. That's it. Every world is like this. Isn't there any change? It's boring to watch like this. And is the heroine always this innocent? Won't you change your personality? There were also those who said they wanted to torture the male protagonist, but they never did. Every time, the male protagonist said, "Be my girlfriend," and they reconciled immediately. It was true. . [Emot=default,28/]
The big book is very good😊
I saw this book when I was casually flipping through it. The writing style is very good, but the words "oh" and "what" behind the characters' speeches can be reduced appropriately, because it seems a bit pretentious. Also, can I write a small side story to explain clearly what happened to the original heroine😊. Finally, the type of fast travel is too single. Most of them are campus, ancient, and CEO. You can write about other types of planes, such as the military, entertainment industry, fantasy and supernatural, etc. You can add more types. Okay, this is my advice to Dada. Finally, I wish Dada's book will sell well and be prosperous. I hope Dada is familiar with me😊
The author is great. , It's not that I don't like the article you wrote, but I really can't see any tricks. The heroine is too simple. Every interface is the same. Sometimes I can't distinguish between the past and my memories. I hope that the author will be able to think quickly and create better articles so that readers can read different articles. Come on, I love you, okay.
Your evaluation of this book, hehe~
I hope you will read this book review. I have just started reading this book, and I have only read the first part, but overall it gives me a good feeling. The way Xiaotian died was not so exaggerated, unlike other books where he died after taking a sip of water. So this approach is acceptable. It can be seen that Dada's writing style is very good and it is very comfortable to read. I wonder if Dada has any experience in writing novels? For example, I have written novels on other websites because the writing is really beautiful. I really envy the love between Xiao Tian and Lin Ziye. It's not too dramatic, it's just a peaceful life, they like each other and care for each other. That's it. That's enough. Some advantages of big articles: 1. Clear thinking. The origin of the story is well described, and the love between Xiao Tian and the male protagonist is also just right. 2. The writing is beautiful. The article makes people feel comfortable to read, and the beautiful writing is a major advantage of writing novels. 3. The character description is in place. So far, Lin Ziye has a relatively dull face and a calm personality. His temperament changes drastically after he has not fallen in love. At most, he is more open-minded and realistic. (In real life, will a calm person become lively and active because of falling in love? No way!) 4. There is no deliberate attempt to discredit the heroine. The heroine has some small thoughts, but the author also emphasized that she is not inherently bad. This aspect also feels very good. There are many advantages, but there are also some shortcomings. When writing a long paragraph, you can divide it into paragraphs appropriately. Otherwise, one paragraph will take up most of the screen and feel unreadable. The dense black fonts are like reading a long composition... Just divide it into paragraphs appropriately. Just a small reminder, I don't need to describe it so much. I prefer to read the emotional lines (just my personal opinion) So far, I hope this book review will be of great help and the articles will get better and better! (Please reply~)
Isn't it 1Ⅴ1? Is there a fixed male protagonist?
I can't even understand it
The author's writing is not good, and it's obvious that he is a novice. From the first chapter to the fourth chapter, I can't tell what you are writing. I only know who the protagonist is. It is very confusing. For those who have read the novel for seven years, this book is not suitable for old book fans.
Author of Brain Pain
If you don't know how to write about apocalypse, interstellar, western fantasy, immortality, and vampires, how can you break it? !
I haven't read it yet, so give me a good review first, thank you very much. . .
push
It's great🥰It's my first time watching Kuaiwen from beginning to end
