
The Female Supporting Role Shines Brightly
by Nature Is The Most Beautiful
About This Novel
[The heroine is so sexy and handsome, the hero is beautiful and well-behaved! There is no cp in the first two worlds. If you want to see cp, you can jump directly to the third world. Bai Lu, the first god king in the ancient god world, has a forgiving heart and maximum fighting power. Since he accidentally bound the system, all the tricks Bai Lu had set for himself over the years have come in handy. The various Honkai Impact protagonists who have lost their way to Sunshine Avenue inexplicably: What grudges are there? Bai Lu: No grudge, no grudge, it's all Xiao Qiao'er's fault. System: Little Puppy: I'm not! I don't! Don't talk nonsense! The villain bosses whose cores have been changed from all walks of life: Master, I want to kiss, hug, and lift you high! Bai Lu (with a look of disgust): Stupid apprentice always loses his IQ online, can I return it? This article is also known as "The Master Is a Straight Girl with Cancer", "My Disciple Gets Angry easily", and "Master and Disciple are bound to die".
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Official(49)Scraped 3d ago
I'm not a troll, this is a sincere suggestion
This is your book. I still like the general setting, but I really can't describe the content. If you want to foreshadow, then you should do it seriously, but it won't work if you use plot cards for foreshadowing. The plot is a plot, and you still have to follow it seriously, otherwise you will read it. When it comes down, it will give the reader a feeling of being in a fog, and the whole book cannot be connected at all. You need to have an outline, but you still have to follow the plot of each small world, otherwise the book will be very confusing. A small world is a small world, and the outline of the whole book is an outline. This is a quick travel duck. Dad, since you choose to write about fast time travel, you have to make the plot of the small world well, and then add the overall outline of the entire book to each small world, rather than mixing the two. If you mix these two things together, the readers will be confused. This is not to question the setting of your book, but to sort out your writing and stop confusing it. After all, I still like the setting of this book. I hope you can take this suggestion seriously. If you don't, I can't do anything, but as encouragement I will still give you five stars. Come on, thank you very much.
The slap in the face came too quickly
I would like to say sorry to all the little fairies who are following this post (><) I promised to resume four updates on the 10th, but I broke my promise. I won't explain much. It's all my fault. I will resume updating as soon as possible. I won't raise the flag again. Life is full of surprises. The slap in the face comes too quickly. I'm afraid.●●
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This book is being serialized. Fairies are welcome to leave messages. You can also tell me in the comment area what type of stories you like to read. Finally, remember to give it a five-star rating. I love you (•͈ᴗ⁃͈)ᓂ- - -♡!
I beg you not to stop updating
I'm really afraid that one day I won't be able to hold on anymore, my love for Da Da will fade away, and I will finally delete this book from my bookshelf. Also, if there is a reason for the discontinuation, I hope you can explain it appropriately so that we will not give up easily. I hope you will be a responsible company and we will always support you. I wish you well...
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Damn you scumbag for not updating yet Missing? Squeak
Please update it soon. I really want to see it.
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Official(49)Scraped 3d ago
I'm not a troll, this is a sincere suggestion
This is your book. I still like the general setting, but I really can't describe the content. If you want to foreshadow, then you should do it seriously, but it won't work if you use plot cards for foreshadowing. The plot is a plot, and you still have to follow it seriously, otherwise you will read it. When it comes down, it will give the reader a feeling of being in a fog, and the whole book cannot be connected at all. You need to have an outline, but you still have to follow the plot of each small world, otherwise the book will be very confusing. A small world is a small world, and the outline of the whole book is an outline. This is a quick travel duck. Dad, since you choose to write about fast time travel, you have to make the plot of the small world well, and then add the overall outline of the entire book to each small world, rather than mixing the two. If you mix these two things together, the readers will be confused. This is not to question the setting of your book, but to sort out your writing and stop confusing it. After all, I still like the setting of this book. I hope you can take this suggestion seriously. If you don't, I can't do anything, but as encouragement I will still give you five stars. Come on, thank you very much.
The slap in the face came too quickly
I would like to say sorry to all the little fairies who are following this post (><) I promised to resume four updates on the 10th, but I broke my promise. I won't explain much. It's all my fault. I will resume updating as soon as possible. I won't raise the flag again. Life is full of surprises. The slap in the face comes too quickly. I'm afraid.●●
bubble
This book is being serialized. Fairies are welcome to leave messages. You can also tell me in the comment area what type of stories you like to read. Finally, remember to give it a five-star rating. I love you (•͈ᴗ⁃͈)ᓂ- - -♡!
I beg you not to stop updating
I'm really afraid that one day I won't be able to hold on anymore, my love for Da Da will fade away, and I will finally delete this book from my bookshelf. Also, if there is a reason for the discontinuation, I hope you can explain it appropriately so that we will not give up easily. I hope you will be a responsible company and we will always support you. I wish you well...
renew
Damn you scumbag for not updating yet Missing? Squeak
Please update it soon. I really want to see it.











