All Beasts Become a Phoenix: the Miracle Doctor and the Crazy Concubine Fall Off the Horse Again!

The author wrote very well at the beginning, but he ran out of inspiration or something, but the reader hasn't figured it out yet, and it's already over. Didn't he say that he promised Chi Li to find his true body? The love story between the male and female protagonists didn't even get written much before it ended with them getting married. And isn't Yan Xi's father trapped somewhere? Why did it suddenly come back? Generally speaking, the first part is very well written, but the second part is too rushed and there is a lot left unfinished. It was sudden and inexplicable. According to the idea of ​​​​this book, I think the author should write three to four thousand chapters, because there are many clues buried. When it is written, it will be a very interesting Yidu fantasy work, and there will be no clichés, but it will end before the 1,000 chapters. The first part is played very slowly, and then it ends suddenly and violently. Alas, it's really hard to calm down.

This is really the best book I have read so far. The author writes very well in the front, linking each link. Every time I read it, I feel very wonderful. Moreover, the author writes very high-level in the back. However, the author writes a bit less and the content is not very complete. I think this good book needs at least more than a thousand chapters to read. However, the author only wrote 871 chapters, which is really disappointing. For example, the Kamikaze (Yan Feng, the disciple of the ninth generation of Yanxi) in the book does not have an ending. I I really want to know why he pushed Yan Xi into the water. In the tenth life, he didn't seem to want to hurt Yan Xi at all. I felt that he looked confused and a little confused. There is also where Aunt Wang (Wang Ji) went and why the author didn't write it. In fact, the author did write the ending a bit hastily. I haven't seen Yan Xi (Di Ge) reunited with her real parents and uncle. In the book, Yan Wufeng only mentioned that Su Yue went to pick them up. It's just a pity that Lian Chengye and Yan Wufei were not mentioned in the ending, and Yan Chushi's cultivation was not told to me. My favorite character in this book is Chi Li. When I read the past events of Chi Li and Yan Xi (Di Ge) later , I cried while watching it😭, I really cried while watching it, it was so touching😭, I had the same feeling the second time I watched it, Chi Li is really super arrogant, but he is really nice to Yan Xixi (Di Ge), with Chi Li as a character, I think this book is very good, but why didn't the author write more about Chi Li? I really wanted to see how Chi Li got along with Yan Xixi Moyu after he reshaped his body, but the author didn't mention it. This is simply the most regretful thing I feel about this book. I feel like crying😩. Overall, this book is very good. I highly recommend it to everyone. Now I am looking forward to the author's next book. I hope the author can write more about Chi Li in the next book😂

Everything about this book is good, but it is too slow to read, and the author hurts here and there. I hope the author is in very good health and can give us more updates!

The author is great, he writes really well, keep up the good work! But the author, the first few chapters are quite complete, but the later chapters are completely missing. The author, if you have time, can you fill in the missing chapters? Otherwise, if a good book is missing a chapter, it really doesn't need to be updated. Even if it is finished, it will still be a novel that will not be popular, and it is very likely to be criticized. Don't get me wrong, author. I don't mean any harm. Your writing style is still very good. If you correct the missing chapters, more people will like to read it. But except for a few missing chapters, the whole book is still very good, come on! I'm looking forward to it. I hope you can write this book well and don't let it end unfinished! ! ! ! Don't mess up! ! ! ! Maybe it's a little early to tell, but I really hope you write shit. Come on! ! ! Come on! ! Come on! ! !

I really want to see how Yun Xiaohan feels when he knows the truth? Yun Xiaohan didn't know who saved him. If Yun Xiaohan knew the truth, would he regret it for the rest of his life? Because a fake person hurt his real savior, will Duanmu be reborn or will he only have fragmentary memories of his past life?

This is the best fantasy novel I have ever read. Although it is a bit unfinished due to some reasons, it is really very nice. In addition, little comrade Ji San really won my heart, the fairy friendship ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤

I was speechless and annoyed to death. Every time the heroine could explain something clearly in a few sentences, she wouldn't say it. She would just let others talk and describe the thoughts in people's hearts. It only took 1.2 Sentences, but it was still very long. For more than 300 chapters, the heroine is still pretending to be a man, pretending to be an ugly girl, and has not revealed her identity at all, which makes people feel extremely frustrated. There are a lot of enemies, and they are not dealt with completely every time. In more than 300 chapters, at least 6.7 Forces have been offended, and they are all big forces. They are chasing the heroine every day and bullying the heroine's family members. The heroine clearly knows that the family can't buy elixirs in the pharmacy because of her offence, so she does not help the family to deal with it, leaving her family members to worry about it for hundreds of chapters. The villain can write several paragraphs about scolding the heroine, and the heroine can't even say a single sentence. Ran is anxious every time and can make people angry to death.

In fact, Yun Xiaohan is really pitiful. His relationship with the heroine was destroyed by Mo Yu in his first life, and now his relationship with the heroine was destroyed by the reborn Duanmu Rou. They were destroyed in both lives. He should have been fine with the heroine. Although I was very angry when I saw him asking him to take the heroine's essence and blood, he was unfair and selfish in order to repay his kindness. But in fact, many people in real life are other Everyone has this problem. It is neither unusual nor uncommon to hurt one person in order to be good to another person. He just has a very deep obsession. Because he can't hold on to anything and has nothing, he can only hold on to the childhood feelings and repay a small favor at all costs. However, he is repaying the wrong person. But after all, there is also an innocence in it.

Come on, author! The writing is very beautiful. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is that they hope to wait until the female protagonist becomes stronger before they can be together. This is my suggestion! [Emot=default,14/]

It is indeed attractive, but the foreshadowing is too deep, the middle paragraphs are not connected, and the ending is written all at once. It feels like there are potatoes at the beginning (the plot in the first part is too heavy), chopsticks in the middle (very monotonous, the plot is a routine, and the summary is the process of constant provocation and then being slapped in the face), and a kitchen knife at the end (a series of foreshadowings, cutting through the mess quickly, but it is very uncomfortable, and it feels like the outline of the idea is written directly). Why are there so many provocative people? I write too much and it makes me upset. The key is that I haven't found a character who is both old and powerful, and also unpredictable. If I create a few such characters instead of always writing about provocative people, I think the article will have more charm. The key is, shouldn't a big boss who has cultivated to a high level of strength be very calm? He gets angry at every turn, very impersonal and boring. I want to write about everything, it's so messy. Those who write about the planes will have a complete process, but the end will just fill in the holes, and the explanation is too hasty. There is no process for writing about refining medicine. It is explained in half of the "ancient books". Is it explained by the protagonist's extraordinary talent and the protagonist's halo? Contract Phoenix Weapon Refining, this actually doesn't have anything to do with it, it's pointless to point this out, and there will be no connection later. Earrings. This is a big flaw. As a commonly used utensil for the heroine, it is said that it was given by her uncle. In fact, the origin is unknown. Why not just say that it was found in a secret place? Later on, the male protagonist hated this earring, and the article did not explain it. In the end, it did not tell the origin. Is it appropriate? Ancient book on beast control. Oh my god, it's so outrageous, it's too much I remember this thing correctly. It seems to be something in the heroine's mind. It is a super cheat, a brainless and cool thing. Her strength depends entirely on it. Realm. I'm convinced, brother. Dear author, what were you holding back at the beginning? You are not in a hurry to grow in strength. You keep writing routines about being slapped in the face after being ridiculed. Aren't you tired? In the later stage, the contracted phoenix had an excuse to increase its strength. The contract was clicked, and the realm surged. Did you have indigestion from "eating" in the early stage? The growth in realm is very inconsistent, and the process of her hard work cannot be seen. The reader only relies on the reader to figure out the ancient martial arts skills left behind in the previous life? The disciple in his previous life spoke of the wind (divine wind). Let me go, you don't remember anything later. Why are you digging when you can't fill all the holes? You didn't explain the real reason for your death in the previous life, and it was brought out by grabbing the Phoenix Fruit in this life. You didn't investigate it later... Long Peipei transformed. I'm convinced. Why did you write it out if you didn't fill it out later? I'm angry. The Dark Temple and the Light Temple, right? What's the point of what you wrote? The male protagonist also said he was the Holy Son of the Dark Temple? Spiritual meal. I'm so impressed, I really don't know how many times I've said it. Long Peipei is the spiritual chef, the family relic kitchen knife, and the grandmother who buys rice cakes. Okay, here are a few incidents. This introduction is of little use and makes the article more confusing. Contract beast. Okay, that's great. I don't want to comment. Just make it happy. Waistcoat. Is it okay to just put the name upside down? The broken body of the male protagonist. The article clicked on the left eye and arm. What does it mean? It's very confusing. Do you really want to write anything? Li Qingming. I don't know if I missed it. Did you mention your identity later? Just say that they are of the same race as Li Qingdi (Qing Yi)? Maple without clouds. It's very baffling. It was arranged just to find out the whereabouts of the heroine's father? The jade pendant left by Aunt Wang. Is this hole a bit big? The article also didn't write about the power of the heroine's mother. Why don't you just not write about it? Murong Chong ended with a hasty ending without explanation. Pay instructor. What's the point of always saying that his strength is declining? If you don't write about the recovery, why do you want to point it out? On the tenth day of the lunar month. What does this dragon role mean? Then he pointed out that the human-animal hybrid has no connection with the latter. Mysteries. The idea is quite new but very boring. It only relies on grandpa's use and the ending fills in the mystery of grandpa's life experience and the origin of mysteries. Is it interesting? This foreshadowing was not used well Academy. Does the exemption quota received at the beginning have anything to do with it later? There is also the Eighteenth Academy, right? If you don't write about it, why would you spend so much ink on it? Qingxuan College, beautiful dean, what do you mean by writing this? Just pointing it out is worse than not writing it. In the inner courtyard of Apocalypse College, if you point out a college competition, that's it. Isn't it interesting if you don't write it down later? The hand is stretched too long, the foot is too wide, and the content is loose and cannot be returned to the original place. The center is not clear, and I want to write about everything "like rain and dew".