A Good-for-nothing Female Partner Becomes a God in the World of Immortality
by Luo Meier
About This Novel
Xiao Liyue never thought that one day she would be so angry that she would die of a heart attack due to the female cannon fodder in the book. After time travel and rebirth, she became a little waste with no spiritual roots and no innate spiritual power. Her whole body cultivation relied on the pills given by her father as the head of the family to break through and build the foundation. And how could she, who had always refused to admit defeat or accept her fate, be willing to be a little waste? So Xiao Liyue began to get involved crazily. While the male and female protagonists were busy falling in love, she was busy practicing. While the male and female protagonists are busy competing with others in a battle of wits and courage, she is busy practicing in seclusion. Even when the relationship between the male and female protagonists has problems, she is still busy leading her apprentice to practice. Anytime and anywhere, as long as she, Xiao Liyue, is around, there will inevitably be a small incident involving involution. Occasionally she would be angry with the male and female protagonists, pick up some opportunities for the male and female protagonists, level up and fight monsters, she was very busy.
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Official(15)Scraped 22d ago
To be honest, I read it very carefully, but the writing was really messy. In the beginning, it was written that my apprentice likes me. I originally accepted this setting. But then I was told that I didn't like him, but just obsessed. As a result, I watched some vampires popping up and telling fortunes. It was a bit too messy, but overall, it's okay.
The writing is novice, the plots are many and confusing, and the cultivation of immortality is written as a romance
This article is a bit of a novice, so I can barely read it. The heroine's training is rarely described. Every time she contracts a spiritual pet, she will be upgraded quickly, and she will jump a few levels when she gets the chance. Many details are inconsistent: for example, her body was destroyed before she ascended, and she stayed in space for ten years. Liuli is two years older than her, so why is Liuli only 22 years old after her ascension? For example, her curse was said to disappear in the ancient world, but why is it still there in the future? There are many unexplained things, such as why her spiritual power level is only ten points? What are the benefits of having all her attributes? The rest is completely a romance novel. In the end, it was written that the male protagonist had been reincarnated a thousand times to find her, but unfortunately it still failed to express deep feelings. It feels like there is a framework, but the writing is messy, with feathers all over the place. On the contrary, it was quite fun when I was helping people tell fortunes in modern times, but then it became boring once the male protagonist appeared. In modern times, we also got a vampire and it became a hodgepodge. When writing romance novels, the biggest fear is that the deep feelings will be written as bloody. Without Lin Jiacheng's skills, it would be easier to write romance-free novels about cultivating immortals. Cultivation of immortals is an ancient Chinese culture, which is incompatible with Western vampires and the like. Putting the two of them together would be incompatible. The storyline was drugged for a while and the heroine was forgotten (in the end, it was discovered that it was not love), and for a while the heroine reshaped her body and became a child). It's too simple, it's too complicated and it doesn't look good.
I feel that the heroine is not vigilant enough and is plotted casually. She should have a strong vigilance. I feel that it is a bit unreasonable and she is plotted too easily.
I was attracted by the heroine's name. Yue.
My imagination is fine
More updates will not be enough.
It's really speechless. If you haven't watched it, please leave it. It's not worth wasting your time! ! !
Is the male protagonist Di Junhan?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I really can't get enough of it, author, hold on, come on
How come the essay about cultivating immortals is written like the essay about Gong Dou?
Can you take off the mask? It's so frustrating.
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Official(15)Scraped 22d ago
To be honest, I read it very carefully, but the writing was really messy. In the beginning, it was written that my apprentice likes me. I originally accepted this setting. But then I was told that I didn't like him, but just obsessed. As a result, I watched some vampires popping up and telling fortunes. It was a bit too messy, but overall, it's okay.
The writing is novice, the plots are many and confusing, and the cultivation of immortality is written as a romance
This article is a bit of a novice, so I can barely read it. The heroine's training is rarely described. Every time she contracts a spiritual pet, she will be upgraded quickly, and she will jump a few levels when she gets the chance. Many details are inconsistent: for example, her body was destroyed before she ascended, and she stayed in space for ten years. Liuli is two years older than her, so why is Liuli only 22 years old after her ascension? For example, her curse was said to disappear in the ancient world, but why is it still there in the future? There are many unexplained things, such as why her spiritual power level is only ten points? What are the benefits of having all her attributes? The rest is completely a romance novel. In the end, it was written that the male protagonist had been reincarnated a thousand times to find her, but unfortunately it still failed to express deep feelings. It feels like there is a framework, but the writing is messy, with feathers all over the place. On the contrary, it was quite fun when I was helping people tell fortunes in modern times, but then it became boring once the male protagonist appeared. In modern times, we also got a vampire and it became a hodgepodge. When writing romance novels, the biggest fear is that the deep feelings will be written as bloody. Without Lin Jiacheng's skills, it would be easier to write romance-free novels about cultivating immortals. Cultivation of immortals is an ancient Chinese culture, which is incompatible with Western vampires and the like. Putting the two of them together would be incompatible. The storyline was drugged for a while and the heroine was forgotten (in the end, it was discovered that it was not love), and for a while the heroine reshaped her body and became a child). It's too simple, it's too complicated and it doesn't look good.
I feel that the heroine is not vigilant enough and is plotted casually. She should have a strong vigilance. I feel that it is a bit unreasonable and she is plotted too easily.
I was attracted by the heroine's name. Yue.
My imagination is fine
More updates will not be enough.
It's really speechless. If you haven't watched it, please leave it. It's not worth wasting your time! ! !
Is the male protagonist Di Junhan?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I really can't get enough of it, author, hold on, come on
How come the essay about cultivating immortals is written like the essay about Gong Dou?
Can you take off the mask? It's so frustrating.
