The Rebirth of a Little Peasant Girl Cultivating Immortality
About This Novel
In her previous life, she was the beloved eldest daughter of the sect. She was accidentally recruited in a secret realm, and her cousin in the clan colluded with a foreign clan to murder her. Once his body died and his soul was reborn, he gained two brothers who doted on his sister and were crazy about his sister. The eldest brother was mature and steady, acting like a brother and a father, while the second brother was gentle and gentle, acting like a brother and a friend. When she comes back strong, none of those who have hurt her will be able to escape. From some unknown time, a person appeared beside her, who always silently helped her when she needed it most. "You know, I have no other thoughts now." "I know, you have told me these words many times." "Since you know, then why do you..." "I also said that I will wait for you. Hatred will not always occupy your heart. When you turn around, I hope the person you see is me." "..." The happiest thing in the world is that when she suddenly looked back, he was still there in the dim light... Come to Yuewen's website to read more of my works!
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Official(12)Scraped 23d ago
I haven't read it. I hate rebirth and time travel books the most. If you can't fuck someone in this life, it means your IQ is worrying. If you are reborn, your IQ will increase. Please, it's just that you know that you have committed stupidity in your previous life. In this life, you forcibly reduce the intelligence of people who you couldn't fuck in your previous life.
It's not a fairy tale at all
This mess is not as sharp as an immortal cultivator. The heroine was stabbed with a dagger on the road without even realizing it. She is still in the foundation building stage and has no formation protection at home.
I can't stand it anymore, it's too modern
It is recommended to check in and stay in the claw. It is recommended to stay in the claw.
It's okay, author, keep up the good work and look forward to more exciting follow-ups!
Looking at the setting and the beginning, I thought it was quite interesting. However, when I really looked at it, there were too many problems. The biggest problem was the writing style. The description was too stiff and felt like keeping a running account, and there was no description of expressions. For example, the second brother was in pain when he took the bone-extending pill. His expression should be described at that time, such as the cold sweat on his forehead. What, there is only pale silent persistence, it is too weak, and the second brother is a time traveler, he is a wealthy businessman in modern times, with the level of a CEO, his scheming skills should be very powerful, and then the three brothers and sisters have an enemy who destroyed the family, the second brother's leg was also crippled by the enemy, and the three of them have to avoid being chased by the enemy, but the second brother saw the heroine I feel uncomfortable with killing monsters. I feel that the heroine kills too hard and is crazy. I keep thinking about how I am not used to killing in peaceful times. No, if the heroine doesn't do anything, the monsters will kill them. I want to return to the Buddhist system. I am really convinced. There is a family with a golden elixir behind me. I have three Qi practitioners who are chasing me. I don't want to practice to take revenge and return to the Buddha system. Yeah, it feels so stupid. It doesn't match his identity as the CEO. He's not a high school student or a junior high school student. He still needs to be persuaded by the heroine. Normal people with such enemies would not have peaceful thoughts. The dialogues also feel very weird. They are basically narrated in a running account, like reading an essay, without the feeling of reading a novel.
How can I put it this way? The brothers and sisters were very good together and quite interesting. But after the male protagonist appeared, everything went wrong. It would have been better without the male protagonist. This article would have been perfect.
Good luck to the author. Although I haven't read the rest yet, I hope the story behind it will be exciting Looking forward to it
good
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and I can recommend it. Keep up the good work, author!
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Official(12)Scraped 23d ago
I haven't read it. I hate rebirth and time travel books the most. If you can't fuck someone in this life, it means your IQ is worrying. If you are reborn, your IQ will increase. Please, it's just that you know that you have committed stupidity in your previous life. In this life, you forcibly reduce the intelligence of people who you couldn't fuck in your previous life.
It's not a fairy tale at all
This mess is not as sharp as an immortal cultivator. The heroine was stabbed with a dagger on the road without even realizing it. She is still in the foundation building stage and has no formation protection at home.
I can't stand it anymore, it's too modern
It is recommended to check in and stay in the claw. It is recommended to stay in the claw.
It's okay, author, keep up the good work and look forward to more exciting follow-ups!
Looking at the setting and the beginning, I thought it was quite interesting. However, when I really looked at it, there were too many problems. The biggest problem was the writing style. The description was too stiff and felt like keeping a running account, and there was no description of expressions. For example, the second brother was in pain when he took the bone-extending pill. His expression should be described at that time, such as the cold sweat on his forehead. What, there is only pale silent persistence, it is too weak, and the second brother is a time traveler, he is a wealthy businessman in modern times, with the level of a CEO, his scheming skills should be very powerful, and then the three brothers and sisters have an enemy who destroyed the family, the second brother's leg was also crippled by the enemy, and the three of them have to avoid being chased by the enemy, but the second brother saw the heroine I feel uncomfortable with killing monsters. I feel that the heroine kills too hard and is crazy. I keep thinking about how I am not used to killing in peaceful times. No, if the heroine doesn't do anything, the monsters will kill them. I want to return to the Buddhist system. I am really convinced. There is a family with a golden elixir behind me. I have three Qi practitioners who are chasing me. I don't want to practice to take revenge and return to the Buddha system. Yeah, it feels so stupid. It doesn't match his identity as the CEO. He's not a high school student or a junior high school student. He still needs to be persuaded by the heroine. Normal people with such enemies would not have peaceful thoughts. The dialogues also feel very weird. They are basically narrated in a running account, like reading an essay, without the feeling of reading a novel.
How can I put it this way? The brothers and sisters were very good together and quite interesting. But after the male protagonist appeared, everything went wrong. It would have been better without the male protagonist. This article would have been perfect.
Good luck to the author. Although I haven't read the rest yet, I hope the story behind it will be exciting Looking forward to it
good
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and I can recommend it. Keep up the good work, author!
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