Mortal Girl Cultivation to Immortality
About This Novel
[Big Heroine + No CP + Plot Streaming] A mortal's life span is only a hundred years, only cultivating immortals can lead to immortality. Xu Yuxiu, a mortal girl, was born sick and weak. At the last moment of her life, she met an immortal and worshiped in the immortal gate. From then on, she got rid of her serious illness and embarked on a colorful road of cultivating immortality. Is this a turning point in her fate, or a dream she had before her death?
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Official(22)Scraped 20d ago
The heroine really can't understand it. Let's say she is 7 years old, and her mind is not as naive as that of a 7-year-old child who doesn't understand anything. However, the heroine can't comb her hair. Even if she is weak, combing her hair doesn't take much physical effort. It feels like it is a forced setting for the plot. The heroine practices cultivation, chooses a place to damage other people's territory, and is caught lying and the subsequent plot. I don't know what the author wants to express. Is it humorous and fun? Anyway, I only feel... The follow-up trip to Jing Lake was also very fascinating. I tried the magic trace array and understood the heroine's first practical operation. I also used the water of Jing Lake to practice spells. But when you have people here and still play the carving array in this place, which is highly concentrated and cannot be disturbed, you blame others for not disturbing it. It's really... A group of cultivators don't say whether they can break the formation, but the heroine has just started to use the formation and has no awareness of the formation at all. She also thinks that the monsters really can't understand it and forcefully subdue it.
It's hard to judge the heroine
The heroine is so disgusting. To be honest, I haven't read it for a few chapters. How old is the heroine? Let's not talk about whether her mind is that mature at 7 years old. I think what the heroine is doing is quite disgusting. She practices spells in the sect randomly, disturbs others' rest, and lies when others come to find her. Moreover, she is practicing within the sect, and the place belongs to everyone. Just because the heroine practices there, no one is allowed to come here. When she comes, she must teach each other a lesson. How can she be a heroine?
I really don't understand why the heroine squatting on a tree and hiding in a cave can be hidden from a bunch of people with higher cultivation level than her. Don't they use their spiritual sense to observe the surroundings? He couldn't even notice a second-level Qi Refining monk sneaking up behind him. What a waste. There are also practicing spells, but they say that the movement they make is too great and they cannot practice. After all, there must be a special place to practice, otherwise those monks in the late stages of Qi refining would not learn spells or practice them, and they would be speechless. Then I hid my cultivation because it was too high-profile. There was no other reason. I really couldn't explain it in a few words. Anyway, the more I read, the more irritated I get. I can't stand it after reading 30 chapters!
Average. The heroine has an average image. She is a bit confused in her actions. The foreshadowing is not completed.
Hard to say
I feel like the author's writing, character, and worldview collapsed after I learned it. The core of the article is confusing, why the heroine cultivates immortality, what are the reasons for all the events, and what is the final purpose. It's all confusing and the ending is rushed.
Why does the heroine seem to have no mouth... She just watches others slander her...
Do you have a CP? Author, please tell me in advance.
Not good-looking
If it doesn't look good, don't fall for it. There are many flaws.
This framework is really bad. An ordinary person who has become a pest can use storage bags. It is really no brainer.
It's very good-looking, there is no cheating step by step, it is very comfortable to watch, it is best not to have any CP, the love and love is not good-looking.
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Official(22)Scraped 20d ago
The heroine really can't understand it. Let's say she is 7 years old, and her mind is not as naive as that of a 7-year-old child who doesn't understand anything. However, the heroine can't comb her hair. Even if she is weak, combing her hair doesn't take much physical effort. It feels like it is a forced setting for the plot. The heroine practices cultivation, chooses a place to damage other people's territory, and is caught lying and the subsequent plot. I don't know what the author wants to express. Is it humorous and fun? Anyway, I only feel... The follow-up trip to Jing Lake was also very fascinating. I tried the magic trace array and understood the heroine's first practical operation. I also used the water of Jing Lake to practice spells. But when you have people here and still play the carving array in this place, which is highly concentrated and cannot be disturbed, you blame others for not disturbing it. It's really... A group of cultivators don't say whether they can break the formation, but the heroine has just started to use the formation and has no awareness of the formation at all. She also thinks that the monsters really can't understand it and forcefully subdue it.
It's hard to judge the heroine
The heroine is so disgusting. To be honest, I haven't read it for a few chapters. How old is the heroine? Let's not talk about whether her mind is that mature at 7 years old. I think what the heroine is doing is quite disgusting. She practices spells in the sect randomly, disturbs others' rest, and lies when others come to find her. Moreover, she is practicing within the sect, and the place belongs to everyone. Just because the heroine practices there, no one is allowed to come here. When she comes, she must teach each other a lesson. How can she be a heroine?
I really don't understand why the heroine squatting on a tree and hiding in a cave can be hidden from a bunch of people with higher cultivation level than her. Don't they use their spiritual sense to observe the surroundings? He couldn't even notice a second-level Qi Refining monk sneaking up behind him. What a waste. There are also practicing spells, but they say that the movement they make is too great and they cannot practice. After all, there must be a special place to practice, otherwise those monks in the late stages of Qi refining would not learn spells or practice them, and they would be speechless. Then I hid my cultivation because it was too high-profile. There was no other reason. I really couldn't explain it in a few words. Anyway, the more I read, the more irritated I get. I can't stand it after reading 30 chapters!
Average. The heroine has an average image. She is a bit confused in her actions. The foreshadowing is not completed.
Hard to say
I feel like the author's writing, character, and worldview collapsed after I learned it. The core of the article is confusing, why the heroine cultivates immortality, what are the reasons for all the events, and what is the final purpose. It's all confusing and the ending is rushed.
Why does the heroine seem to have no mouth... She just watches others slander her...
Do you have a CP? Author, please tell me in advance.
Not good-looking
If it doesn't look good, don't fall for it. There are many flaws.
This framework is really bad. An ordinary person who has become a pest can use storage bags. It is really no brainer.
It's very good-looking, there is no cheating step by step, it is very comfortable to watch, it is best not to have any CP, the love and love is not good-looking.
