The Host Always Likes to Disconnect

At the beginning of the new book, the male protagonist is a bit arrogant. The female protagonist is originally the leader of interstellar pirates, and her personality should be unique. The two people have different positions, and now they are tied together to do a task. The story should be very interesting. I look forward to their falling in love and killing each other . You have to work hard for Huo Huo. I look forward to their emotional drama!

Very beautiful and the story is very novel✨ I just added the bookshelf and it took me an hour and a half✨ Especially in the second world, I laugh out loud like pigs from time to time🌚 In the end, I woke up my mother🌚 Give me a fat beating😭 (I don't care, author, you have to comfort me and give me a hug~

Huohuo's new book is here. I was already attracted by the introduction. I highly recommend it! I wish Huo Huo better and better as he writes and his new book will sell well! [Emot=default,67/]

The reason I gave it an okay rating is because the writing is basically coherent, and it's not a matter of technical ability, but a matter of plot design. This actually improves very quickly. After all, many people have ideas that they can't write. At least you can still write well. As long as you carefully refine the plot or create an outline and find someone to cooperate with and discuss the writing, you can still look forward to the future. The most important thing is the problem of broken character. The heroine does things inexplicably. On the surface, she seems to be simple and crude, but in fact, she looks far away from the near, causing many logical loopholes, so that the character is a bit broken. In future writing, the author should do a good job in character design and portraits, and the plot should also think more about how to better fit the characters. For example, in the first story, the heroine is a star thief, gambling... You have also written who will do the settlement and take away the proceeds. Isn't it better to just steal it? The mission was completed neatly and neatly, which immediately established the heroine's high-ranking image. In the end, he had to gamble, and the innocent recommender who kidnapped him was allowed to starve to death in the warehouse? Even if you are gambling, if you have the money to open such a big casino, winning three to five million yuan will not go to the extent of killing people and buying goods. Otherwise, only one loses and no one wins. Who would dare to go to his house to play... Wouldn't it be nice to secretly collect evidence and then take the money and leave? He also went to the casino to provoke... You have to win 60 million arrogantly and piss them off. It's not enough to attract so much hatred. You also have to expose yourself in your own name and make a big deal out of it (don't tell me that you cleaned up the upload traces or something like that. Just compare your shooting angle with the casino surveillance and you will be exposed! Not to mention that the heroine has such a high-profile real name and goes to provoke...). As a result, both the black and white have noticed the heroine's whole family, exposing all the siblings to danger... I can't stand it at this point, because no matter how I edit it later, the previous ones can't be rounded off, alas. Just like when you are asked to draw a beautiful woman, you insist on painting it like a flower, but you can still make the flower painting come alive... Fortunately, he still has the ability. I hope the author can improve his ability to control the plot in the future. Wish you an early improvement

📣📣I wish Huo Ge's new book a great sale! 📢📢📢

I've been reading it for a long time. I've been reading it for the past half month. Now I look at it and find that the book is gone? What happened?

Not bad! Come on Hellfire

I finally read Huo Huo's new book, keep it up, I found the beginning very interesting, and I hope the subsequent plots will become more and more exciting!

Ah ah ah ah. Fortunately, the recommendation tickets haven't been sent out yet today.

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