Prehistoric: the Golden Crow Emperor, Robbed Sanqing at the Beginning

Anyone who has read the Great and Ancient World knows that the "Sage of Destiny" needs to grab the futon and the "Hongmeng Purple Qi" to obtain the Holy Secret, but the Great Dao is fifty and the Heavenly Evolution is forty-nine. To escape one of them is to become a variable. Today, the way of heaven has been determined, and there is no hope of harmonizing it... The protagonist may be the variable!太阳星第三只金乌,怼"鸿钧",抢"三清",揍"西方二舔",阴阳"女娲",誓不做"妖皇",成"法则圣人" Recruiting disciples "Six-eared Macaque, Kong Xuan, Dapeng, Yunxiao, Qiongxiao, Bixiao...". The author's ideas are clear and the plot is engaging. I would give it a perfect score of 8 out of 10!

Yang Chan's writing is too vicious. Even the Golden Crow Saint can be plotted. The protagonist's character is too stable. You have forced the saint to become a quasi-sage. Author, I can't stand it anymore. At least there are one or two saints left in the ancient world. All the saints went to chaos. What the hell is this? Zhunti and Jieyin both went to chaos. When the tribulations of Buddhism and Taoism traveled to the west, they still went to chaos? Ni Tianzhen didn't know that you were writing a fan story about Journey to the West. All the saints went to Chaos and left their clones. I can only say that the author's writing is... Rubbish. The early stage was well written, but by the time of Journey to the West, it turned into a piece of shit. Yang Chan married a mortal, and was brainwashed by mortals. She got pregnant before she got married? I rather like how the character is treated so lightly? Yang Chan is a monk. She makes a big formation when taking a bath. How can a mortal look at her body like this? Moreover, this man is so cowardly. He hides behind a woman and says that we have worshiped heaven and earth. We have become husband and wife. If it were me, Yang Jian, how could I be scornful of my sister who likes to peek at me so much? I will take your soul away and refine your soul forever until it collapses. Don't worry, I will not let your soul collapse, nor will I make you mentally crazy. Then I will break up the soul of my sister and make her worse than reincarnation. What do I care about the words of the gods? What do their words have to do with me? This is what I like about Yang Jian. He is good at being himself. He is not afraid of heaven and earth. He is as capable as Sun Wukong. I stopped reading this book and it felt like it was unfinished. People with different paths do not seek each other.

I persisted for 2 chapters, and the rest is up to fellow Taoists. If Taoists don't agree with each other, I'll go! ! ?

The previous writing was very good, but later on I was more obsessed with the girlfriend who traveled through time together. Journey to the West is over, Zhinu is forgotten, Zhu Bajie has taken revenge, Yang Chan is really poisonous, at least he is a disciple of the Golden Crow, and he has been plotted to marry a mortal. I was pregnant when I got married. In ancient times, they were only married after marriage. I guess they copied the lotus lantern later. Yang Chan and Yang Jian were both strengthened at the epic level. They were infinitely stronger than before. Ah, forget it, I can't stand it now.

I have to write about that dead lotus lantern, and that agarwood is so annoying. Let's just say that if I don't write about the lotus lantern, I won't be able to survive, or what? Is it necessary to write about the Baolian lantern and directly write about the evil calamity? Anyway, I can't stand it. The author simply doesn't want the monthly ticket, just wait until death

Let me share with you the most intense episode of the prehistoric era. Has been crushed by Douluo

The rest of the story is just like cramming the plot into the story. Do the Lotus Lantern and Weaver Girl have to be crammed in? The front part is very good, I think you are about to rush in. I didn't see the slightest bit of resourcefulness, and there is no logic at all in all the forced resourcefulness. I really don't know whether it's because of the plot, or because I have good grades in reading. I feel that I am awesome, and now I still have the poisonous point of Ling Xiao's girlfriend. I really don't know how you fill it up. The plot is so messed up that the writing becomes worse at the end. If you can't grasp it, you will finish it early. This is how it is written at the end of a good book.

You dared to change the Lich Tribulation Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors earlier, but you ended up posting this coward Liu Yanchang without changing a single word, which disgusted the readers.

What did you write later when it became more and more disgusting? I have to write about the two children of Weaver Girl and then arrange to be controlled to practice some exercises and have sex with many living beings. I won't talk about the men, but the women also have sex with many living beings. It's really disgusting. He also said that the morality of cultivating immortals is different from that of ordinary people. As long as the cultivation level is high, no one will say anything. It's so disgusting.

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I won't touch it anymore. Please brother, really, just one episode, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore 😭, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you, just one more episode (screaming) (twisted) (dark crawling) (crawling) (twisting) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (slowly retreating) (smashing things hard) (gnawing) (dark juicing madness) (crawling) (crawling) (quickly bending) (twisting and folding) (returning to the original and screaming)