
Commander in the Apocalypse
by Duanmuheng
About This Novel
Infinite Summoning Stream Black rain strikes, and mutated monsters descend. The end of the world is coming, let's see how the protagonist gets the system. Summon troops and crush the zombie world at the end of the world. This is the author's first novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
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Official(104)Scraped 8d ago
I hope the author can see it.
There is still a little bit of fuss in the writing style, but overall it is pretty good. No matter how good the writing is, I just want to say keep up the good work! Then can you add punctuation marks? Is that okay? Otherwise it will look too uncomfortable. Starting from Chapter 19, I won't bother to add punctuation marks.
Sign in floor
Come on, come on, sign in, sign in, brothers, sign in
What the hell is this king?
Is this the end of ancient times? Didn't you go through all the hard work in society to cure your chuunibyou?
good
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
It is recommended to open the commander level
I suggest adding the protagonist's commander level. The higher the level, the more things are open, which makes it richer and more interesting. And the protagonist must also have a system resource pack that is refreshed on time like those red alert soldiers. The higher the commander level, the better the resource pack. There are also commander's exclusive costumes, which have better attributes according to the commander's level. Moreover, the exclusive clothing also has special functions. Otherwise, if any survivor sees a captain wearing casual clothes leading a group of soldiers to kill zombies, this scene will look weird, and it will also cause some bad things. In addition, the Red Alert Soldier can fight zombies. If other people join the battle, the system may be exposed for some reasons. If you really want others to join the battle, you must be separated from the Red Alert soldiers, and you must take certain precautions. Otherwise, giving them weapons cannot guarantee that they will not do anything (Author: If I say no, I won't. Me:... Author: No, I will not read your suggestion at all, so don't think of separating the Red Alerts from the survivors (*-*))
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I hope the author will come up with more rules! (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Update soon! 🙏🙏🙏
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Official(104)Scraped 8d ago
I hope the author can see it.
There is still a little bit of fuss in the writing style, but overall it is pretty good. No matter how good the writing is, I just want to say keep up the good work! Then can you add punctuation marks? Is that okay? Otherwise it will look too uncomfortable. Starting from Chapter 19, I won't bother to add punctuation marks.
Sign in floor
Come on, come on, sign in, sign in, brothers, sign in
What the hell is this king?
Is this the end of ancient times? Didn't you go through all the hard work in society to cure your chuunibyou?
good
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
It is recommended to open the commander level
I suggest adding the protagonist's commander level. The higher the level, the more things are open, which makes it richer and more interesting. And the protagonist must also have a system resource pack that is refreshed on time like those red alert soldiers. The higher the commander level, the better the resource pack. There are also commander's exclusive costumes, which have better attributes according to the commander's level. Moreover, the exclusive clothing also has special functions. Otherwise, if any survivor sees a captain wearing casual clothes leading a group of soldiers to kill zombies, this scene will look weird, and it will also cause some bad things. In addition, the Red Alert Soldier can fight zombies. If other people join the battle, the system may be exposed for some reasons. If you really want others to join the battle, you must be separated from the Red Alert soldiers, and you must take certain precautions. Otherwise, giving them weapons cannot guarantee that they will not do anything (Author: If I say no, I won't. Me:... Author: No, I will not read your suggestion at all, so don't think of separating the Red Alerts from the survivors (*-*))
Add more activities
I hope the author will come up with more rules! (ง •̀_•́)ง
renew
Update soon! 🙏🙏🙏
Ask
How many times does the author update a day? Will there be a burst of updates when it is published?












