
Run a Shelter
About This Novel
Before the doomsday, Liu Bie built a shelter under the guidance of the system, and the apocalypse began. Liu Bie farmed and raised animals in the shelter, and spent the doomsday happily.
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Official(9)Scraped 6d ago
Chapter 1 I hope the author can explain
6 large rooms plus a small park that can accommodate 30 people are only 100 square meters. Is it a room of 100 square meters or a park? No matter how small a park that can accommodate 30 people is, it is still 1,000 square meters. The author wanted to write a thousand square meters, but I missed it by 0. After reading these comments, there are not many supporters. Author, you have written a lot of chapters. I read three chapters and found two problems in three chapters. The first detail is not handled well. For example, the room and square in the first chapter are only written roughly. For example, how big is the park and how big is the room? Just write about the activity for thirty people. The park and the room are very big and have two floors with toilets. The second careless thing is that I uploaded it after writing it without even looking at it. There are few typos.
I don't know what he wrote, but my head was buzzing when I read it.
After you finish writing the book, read more for typos and fewer spellings. Reading your book requires you to make up your mind, which will cause heavy damage to your brain cells.
? ? ? ? ? ? Tghu
I hope the author will work hard
I can't stand people like me, they don't have any defense against others
Bad review............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It doesn't look good, it doesn't look good, it doesn't look good
Rubbish, all typos, I still can't understand what is written! ! ! ! ! ! !
Come on, author, come on
, I really can't stand it anymore, it's a shame to give the base to others. What kind of novel should I write? In my opinion, it is not as good as The Eunuch.
Can you be more prepared? Sheep-cutting happens frequently, not to mention relatives. Even brothers can turn against each other.
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Official(9)Scraped 6d ago
Chapter 1 I hope the author can explain
6 large rooms plus a small park that can accommodate 30 people are only 100 square meters. Is it a room of 100 square meters or a park? No matter how small a park that can accommodate 30 people is, it is still 1,000 square meters. The author wanted to write a thousand square meters, but I missed it by 0. After reading these comments, there are not many supporters. Author, you have written a lot of chapters. I read three chapters and found two problems in three chapters. The first detail is not handled well. For example, the room and square in the first chapter are only written roughly. For example, how big is the park and how big is the room? Just write about the activity for thirty people. The park and the room are very big and have two floors with toilets. The second careless thing is that I uploaded it after writing it without even looking at it. There are few typos.
I don't know what he wrote, but my head was buzzing when I read it.
After you finish writing the book, read more for typos and fewer spellings. Reading your book requires you to make up your mind, which will cause heavy damage to your brain cells.
? ? ? ? ? ? Tghu
I hope the author will work hard
I can't stand people like me, they don't have any defense against others
Bad review............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It doesn't look good, it doesn't look good, it doesn't look good
Rubbish, all typos, I still can't understand what is written! ! ! ! ! ! !
Come on, author, come on
, I really can't stand it anymore, it's a shame to give the base to others. What kind of novel should I write? In my opinion, it is not as good as The Eunuch.
Can you be more prepared? Sheep-cutting happens frequently, not to mention relatives. Even brothers can turn against each other.










