
Explosive Heroes Time Travel Game
About This Novel
Because I can't write a novel that lives up to my youth... So I find another way to fill in the gaps. You were originally an otaku, but unfortunately you were transported into the game; You are surprised to find that your cousin is also in this game; After a few days, the system exploded. Can you survive in this world?
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Official(1)Scraped 2d ago
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Don't really like this style. I always feel like you, the author, are not very good at writing stories. If you want to highlight the cruelty of this game, stop talking nonsense at the beginning and use more psychological description of the environment. If you don't want to highlight the cruelty of this game, but want to take the route of some passionate monster-smashing and cool writing, I think your writing is a bit too bland. Not very appealing. The overall writing style is also not up to standard. (...This is not the right person...I'm sorry, but I am really saying these things to you sincerely...If you feel uncomfortable, don't doubt it, it's all my fault...)
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 2d ago
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Don't really like this style. I always feel like you, the author, are not very good at writing stories. If you want to highlight the cruelty of this game, stop talking nonsense at the beginning and use more psychological description of the environment. If you don't want to highlight the cruelty of this game, but want to take the route of some passionate monster-smashing and cool writing, I think your writing is a bit too bland. Not very appealing. The overall writing style is also not up to standard. (...This is not the right person...I'm sorry, but I am really saying these things to you sincerely...If you feel uncomfortable, don't doubt it, it's all my fault...)









