Control the Beast, My Information is Refreshed Every Day

Those who don't know better think that they are paving the way for your teacher. He doesn't care about his own pets either. I am studying this and that, but I don't know what you are thinking. Do you have any brain? I can only read the first few chapters.

With a talent like the Eye of Insight, shouldn't the general evolutionary route be revealed?

Chapter 7 The protagonist has just made a contract to control a beast for the first time, and then a highly talented green tea female classmate with whom the protagonist has a bad relationship is assassinated. Our male protagonist does this: Then Ye Bai summoned the Thousand Transformations Silkworm from the secret realm in his body and stood in front of him. That was just a drill ant, slightly more powerful than an ordinary bullet. The Thousand-Change Silkworm's defense is enough to withstand the drill ant's attack. Ye Bai was betting that the Thousand Transformation Silkworms could withstand the attack of the drill ants. At this distance, without the blessing of the bullet ants, the attack of the drill ants was so strong that the Thousand-Change Silkworm suffered a little damage. At this time, Ye Bai raised his voice and shouted: "Teacher, help!" He was not worried that the Thousand-Change Silkworm would die as a result. Because the contract had just been signed, even if Qianbian Silkworm died suddenly, it would not cause much harm to Ye Bai.

Clicking into the comment area, I went to a bunch of good reviews. I think these people are really hungry. How can such an outrageous book be praised like this? For a nationally renowned professor to go to a middle school instead of a graduate school or university, it is just a matter of course and there is no logic at all. It doesn't matter that she is a strong person. The key is that she is a researcher. What convenience can a middle school provide? Also, I just said that there are only a few S-level ones in the country, and then an A-level one comes around the corner, which is really incredible. More abstractly, what is the teacher proud of when a student awakens his A-level talent? It's called being proud of students and happy to be alive. People have already commented on it, but they still don't know how to change it. Just write your own YY ​​novel

Fighter among garbage, garbage article

After reading for a while, I found that there were no particularly bad points at the beginning, but other book reviews said that all the results at the end were given to the teacher. Not to mention the huge poisonous points, such as the main character being a firefighter, the huge gap between the good and the villain, etc., I was too lazy to read further. Why is the logic of this article illogical? A well-known doctor teaches in a high school, and later explains that recruiting him with a high salary is bullshit. A well-known research doctor doesn't even care about the basic day and night factors when studying a small evolution. If you get stuck, ask the protagonist to remind you. He is a researcher in an NT bar, and he can discover such a large probability of collision. There is also the talent at the beginning. An A-level talent has shown you all the evolutionary routes. So why study it? Just copy the answers. Especially since there is a big boss who also has this talent. There are still so many things to study? Didn't you see through it in one second? Then there are the unreasonable hatred and routine slaps in the face of the supporting characters. The supporting characters are all mentally retarded, and the family pets take everything home regardless of the protagonist getting poorer and unable to support them. When the protagonist dies inexplicably, he still needs to be sensationalized and rescued despite being blind. It's hard to imagine that such dense poisonous points appear in just a few dozen chapters. It's hard to imagine that a book written in 2024 is so similar to a book that grew wildly in 2012.

It's a pity. When I read the new chapter, I suddenly feel that the author's condition is getting worse and worse, and the plot is getting more and more problematic. Only the protagonist can save the entire alliance, right? The upper management of the alliance cannot predict anything, and there are holes everywhere. Although writing novels must be dangerous wherever the protagonist goes, but this is too frequent, and the alliance cannot be destroyed. Let's not talk about the villain being so kind that even the core hinterland can be penetrated. The middle-level combat power is useless. The senior management asked a little Karami to go to Nantianmen. Such a big alliance has no back-up. The villain has to look for evidence even if he is angry. I have written before why the style of painting has become so strange, and the protagonist's parents suddenly become awesome. Forget it, I can only say that the latter part is not in my taste. Finally, the villain of this article is really awesome. If it weren't for the protagonist's fault, the alliance would have been destroyed long ago, and we can't handle the fact that other countries are still coming to cause trouble.

You seem to be very busy, right? Your country is in trouble. Your country can't suppress the villains, right? You have just completed a mission and the next mission comes out. You are a firefighter, right? The country revolves around you, right? All the key points are stuck with you. You leaked ahead of time. What kind of problems might arise? If the state personnel can't do anything, it's up to you to turn the tide. ***. A researcher gives orders every day. Are you a fool to go to war? Talents from one's own country were sent there even though they knew they would be in danger.

The first one can't keep his mouth shut. The second benefit is all kinds of disclosure. The third teacher. The master is a failure. So people with intelligence should watch with caution. .

There is another big problem. Your pet beast is too anthropomorphic. You need to understand why humans can contract pets instead of pets contracting humans. This shows that human IQ is at the top of all major species. So why do humans not understand the language and behavior of pets, but only first- and second-order plants can understand human speech and communicate. Do you want to use the IQ of real animals to talk about things? This is true, but you are writing about people as stupid. Since it is an article about modern science and pets, there should be animal and plant behavior. Linguistics and translation are subjects that must be learned from an early age, and pets also need to have classes because of the diversity of advanced organisms. This will be very cumbersome, but this is what a real world should be like, instead of blurring the concept by making humans stupid and animals smart. You said you have been polishing it for a long time. I can see that you can see the ideas and pet types and skills in the big chapter, but you still need to think more carefully about the details. If you don't polish it well enough, it will be too dramatic.