Miracle Doctor Farm Girl: the General Wants to Marry by Force

Fortunately, I didn't spend much time watching it and got impatient, so I pulled to the back and took a look. The male protagonist actually had a child with his concubine. How disgusting it is to think about it. Those who are being plotted cannot accept it. I hope the part I didn't see will say that the child is not the male protagonist. I just don't understand. Don't authors read other people's writings? The more you read it, the more you will know which ones the public readers like. I dare say that 99.99% Of people who like to read time travel stories are mysophobic and like the male and female protagonists to be clean. It's okay to write about a mistress, but it's okay to touch someone else's male protagonist. If you touch it, it will bring down the score for your own story. Who can't see through this simple truth?

The plot develops too fast. I like the fact that the heroine has a strong and decisive character, but sometimes strength is not the point. And didn't the heroine's mother say that she has a fierce personality? Even after the death of the heroine's father, she should be more aggressive. She is not afraid of affecting the heroine's reputation because of her fierce personality. She is her daughter's only support. Every time Others humiliated the mother and daughter, the hostess didn't dare to let go, they looked cowardly, and it was unreasonable to open a small farmhouse in the countryside. Even if everyone in the village had some extra money, they couldn't eat in restaurants every day. How much could be done with half a tael of silver in the countryside at that time? Wouldn't it be nice to build a house in the countryside with the money for a few meals? And the details are not perfect. When the heroine cooks, it feels like there are all kinds of ingredients. Fruits and other things are available at your request. Even if you go to the street to stock up once, how long can you keep them? Maybe I am a new author, and I understand that the writing is not mature enough, but after all, it is a new book that has just been published. I hope that the following plot can attract readers, express their feelings, and make small comments. It does not mean that DaDa's writing is not good, but I hope that DaDa can write better and better! !

I have the following suggestions for this book: ...

Ah Da is better than the male protagonist. He doesn't speak and just looks at you silently. He has no father or mother. How wonderful.

The male protagonist is useless and useless. His parents are so perverted that they can be killed.

Wonderful from beginning to end, a good online novel

What's going on? I don't want to read this. Isn't the heroine quite smart? Why is she getting stupider the more she writes?

Song Xiaowu was originally obsessed with Li Changsheng, and she did all the humiliating things to please him just to make Li Changsheng happy. Even on a rainy day, because Li Changsheng wanted ginseng, she coaxed her father to go up the mountain to look for him, but she slipped and fell off the cliff and died! The talent here had just died, and Li Changsheng over there saw that the Song family could no longer extract any profit and came to break off the engagement. At this time, the heroine who was wearing the clothes changed her usual style and asked Li Changsheng to kowtow and wipe her face all the way like she did before. She also had to return the money that her father originally gave to the Li family to repair the wedding house before she returned the money. Because her father was gone, neither her grandma nor her second uncle liked the heroine and her mother. The heroine took the time to ask the village chief to separate the family, and separated from the Song family. After the separation, the heroine lost weight at home during this period according to her own plan. She used this time to open a small restaurant to earn some money. Unexpectedly, the business was quite good. In addition, she did hunger marketing, and her life was very fulfilling and happy every day!

There are too many scenes with one little maid (Tui Er)

This book is very beautiful.