Pastoral Fun in Space

I've read 200 chapters, and it's a treasure-hunting space novel that I like. (Collecting treasures) However, I always feel that the heroine does not have much wisdom and courage. Everything is taken out without hesitation. And it feels like the heroine is nothing without A Li. I like resourceful heroines. Also when dealing with maids and so on, they are all influenced by their behavior and language. Wherever the heroine goes alone, the maids will pester her to follow her. The heroine will follow the arrangements of the guard Zhang Ji. Writing this way, it feels like the heroine has no majesty and no right to speak. It is better for the heroine to travel with these people from the beginning. This won't make the heroine appear to have no opinions. After all, the heroine was a soldier in her previous life. You should have a stable and independent personality, right? There is also the author's poor writing style and character description. I still don't know what the heroine and the people around her look like. The appearance and emotional description of the characters are not delicate enough. The form of writing is a bit like writing a diary, like a running account. Sometimes it jumps too fast and makes people a little confused. I believe most people like male and female protagonists who are sinister and resourceful. But there are many aspects that I like, such as having both parents and relatives loving each other. Except for the people in the old house, of course. Space collection series. Keep up the good work, author. You can do it. [Emot=default,64/]

Today I heard a senior say that one thousand words per chapter is more in line with the habits of our readers. I have never paid attention to this issue before. Now I want to ask everyone's opinions. If you think one thousand words is better, I will post it like this from tomorrow

I can't stand it anymore. The space is a good space, but I took the male protagonist. I feel dizzy and poisoned every day. I really vomited. The male protagonist is really good. How did he survive without meeting the female protagonist before? The heroine keeps something every time, and she gets tricked every time. This is not as good as other people's running accounts. It would be better not to have the male protagonist, and just write about farming and practice the exercises with the family, and the female protagonist's exercises are basically practiced by everyone.

Am I the only one who thinks the article is not smoothly connected and the writing style is immature?

A little cutie asked me, Yun Qiao is the Phoenix Queen, and I want to read the story of their life. I originally wanted to write it in a side story, but the space is too big, so I thought of opening a new book to interpret their story well. Please pay attention to me~ Of course, I must first finish writing Su Manqing's love and hatred

I just want to say that it is unreasonable to have the house in my father's name. If my father is just an overly filial man, he will be in big trouble.

After reading Chapter 316, I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore. I can personally understand the care for the heroine's family, but I can't accept it. This is simply not caring, but harming people. And the heroine is always chirping, why can't she improve her strength to protect her family? Maybe the heroine hasn't met a strong person yet and doesn't have a sense of crisis. I hope to see a change in the heroine's character. ＿Don't criticize if you don't like it~~~~~~~~ Personal feelings

I think this book is very well written. Every character is unique and distinct. And the whole book is very smooth to read, so it gets full marks. Keep up the good work. Hahahahahaha

I feel like the heroine is too nosy, and just accepts people who are nosy. The male protagonist is too weak. The female protagonist keeps giving him things, but she is still so weak.

After reading, who is that mysterious voice?