
Red Alert: the Apocalypse of Another World
by Hjf1111
About This Novel
There are no crystal cores everywhere, no evolvers on the streets, no zombies that can't even be killed by missiles, and no bases with multiple restrictions. This ensures the rationality of the apocalypse to the greatest extent. (P. S. Not recommended for reading)
What Readers Think
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Official(10)Scraped 1d ago
Ask the heroine a question
Is there no heroine? I'll get back to you later. Thanks.
Dear readers, I am slowly revising the manuscript (the previous chapters). After the revision is completed, there will be changes in some aspects. I hope you understand.
Let's change the outline immediately.
Wrong sentences, too many typos, and unreasonable settings. I haven't seen any problems with the overall frame of the story line. After reading it for a hundred chapters, if the writing is smooth, there will be basically no problems. The main purpose of the novel is the reading experience, allowing a magnificent world to form in the reader's consciousness. The biggest problem with this book now is that it is not smooth to read, and the picture that is just being formed is easily broken, so some settings in the outline need to be changed, and the sentences need to be adjusted.
good
There are too many bad sentences and many unreasonable places. The author should seriously correct them.
Are you a eunuch?
Are you a eunuch? Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh
Speechless
The third golden chapter is just listening to the protagonist's inner nonsense. There's so much nonsense.
Write well, come on, author, I think highly of you.
My five-star evaluation of this book is due to typos. There are a few typos and a few typos. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.
Is the author still alive? Make up characters
A eunuch? Make up the number of words Make up the number of words Make up the number of words
update update update
Update, update, update. The update is a bit slow. The author greatly appreciates it.
I wanted to read a book
I originally wanted to watch it, but the introduction said it was not recommended! Then I won't watch it 🤡🤡🤡
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 1d ago
Ask the heroine a question
Is there no heroine? I'll get back to you later. Thanks.
Dear readers, I am slowly revising the manuscript (the previous chapters). After the revision is completed, there will be changes in some aspects. I hope you understand.
Let's change the outline immediately.
Wrong sentences, too many typos, and unreasonable settings. I haven't seen any problems with the overall frame of the story line. After reading it for a hundred chapters, if the writing is smooth, there will be basically no problems. The main purpose of the novel is the reading experience, allowing a magnificent world to form in the reader's consciousness. The biggest problem with this book now is that it is not smooth to read, and the picture that is just being formed is easily broken, so some settings in the outline need to be changed, and the sentences need to be adjusted.
good
There are too many bad sentences and many unreasonable places. The author should seriously correct them.
Are you a eunuch?
Are you a eunuch? Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh
Speechless
The third golden chapter is just listening to the protagonist's inner nonsense. There's so much nonsense.
Write well, come on, author, I think highly of you.
My five-star evaluation of this book is due to typos. There are a few typos and a few typos. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.
Is the author still alive? Make up characters
A eunuch? Make up the number of words Make up the number of words Make up the number of words
update update update
Update, update, update. The update is a bit slow. The author greatly appreciates it.
I wanted to read a book
I originally wanted to watch it, but the introduction said it was not recommended! Then I won't watch it 🤡🤡🤡










