Layman Returns

I saw this book when I was studying. The author was at Qidian. Because I used to have the habit of reading pirated copies, but for my own love, I downloaded Qidian! Later I learned that the author was coming to create the world, so I thought about coming all the way! But the starting point still needs to be updated, so I put it on hold! Now I have decided to read Chuangshi again, just for that moment of encounter when I was young (novel)! All in all, I like it very much.

But if you take a closer look, there is something really wrong. I don't know if the author is doing it for the word count or something else, but a work like this can win an award. Alas! I don't know what's wrong with people nowadays. I saw that the protagonist went to live in a house after selling the navigation website. I really don't know if it is a problem with the author's vision or other problems. If you are an ordinary person, there is nothing wrong with doing so. Building a home is a good means of preserving value. But as a latecomer and a reborn person, building a home may be the lowest means of preserving value. The house in Zhongguancun, bought in 2004, has increased seven or eight times in 2015. Is such a profit rate really high for a reborn person? Take what is said in the novel, even if you buy Baidu's original stock in 2004, you will get a tenfold return in the next year. As a reborn person, with tens of millions on mobile phones, you can achieve dozens of times or hundreds of times profit margins in anything you do. It is best to invest in the big players in the market, which is better than building a house.

I have been reading books for 20 years, and I have read all kinds of books~ There are many who still remember them freshly, but now there are more lay people~ Those who say scumbags are probably all women, men understand men~ In other words, we understand the author~ In fact, the book has many unrealistic settings and characters~ But as an online novel, this book has many things worth pondering~ Whether it is Chinese education, Chinese manufacturing, Chinese R&D, or human nature and social nature, this book actually talks about it~ It's a good book~ If you don't like this book because of the harem, please be considerate of your man~ Xu is marriage, Dong is the sweetness of first love, Hu is a man's confidant, Shen is a man's responsibility, Shen is a man's port, Beijing is a man's desire, Su is a man's dream~ It can be said that without these women, the complete story cannot be portrayed~ Including the people around me, Li is the brother, Brother Jin is the righteousness, Zhu is the right, and the one who took the photo is the love and the pursuit of freedom~ Everything here is depicting all aspects of the novel, and missing one of them would be boring~ Even if everything is known and done early, it is actually pointing out the problem, a common person, allowing a common person to slow down and grow slowly. Although later on, the content of the novel is somewhat hollow due to the author's exposure, but I have to say that this hollowness is more real, because the author is just an ordinary person and a common person~

After reading Lao Geng's book, I came to Chuangshi and realized that the book review section is really complicated. Can Lao Geng see the comments on Qidian... When I first saw Dian Niang's recommendation, I didn't think much of it, because I prefer books like fantasy, fairy tales, and novels, and I have always rejected urban-type books. But at that time, there was a book shortage, and Dian Niang happened to recommend Laity to me, and then I fell into the trap. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I have only read a small part of it, a chapter that is easy to remember, Chapter 555. In fact, I don't mean much by saying this, and I don't know what I want to express. I just felt a little uncomfortable after reading the book review section. I want to express something. I don't know what I said or what I want to express. I don't think Lao Geng will see this comment, because my account should have zero fans in Chuangshi. I don't know what else to say, I just hope that Lao Geng's harem can be opened and the heroine doesn't die. The harem can be opened, don't kill the heroine, The harem can be opened, don't kill the heroine Say important things three times

The first time I read a novel was Zhu Xian, so Zhu Xian is the best novel written in my mind. In the following years, I read countless novels one after another, among which Wireless Horror left a deep impression on me. Return of the Common Man is the only novel I have read in the past ten years that can be compared with Zhu Xian and Wireless Horror, and it is also the only novel I have paid to read. Life is endless, and common people are not. 😘

While making it difficult for Seo Sang-soo to do anything, he indulged himself everywhere. In order to put Seo Sang-soo in power, he forcibly arranged an accident at an amusement park. The funniest thing is that everyone blames Shan Rao. Then if there is a car accident when you pick someone up, do you blame the person being picked up? The logic is touching. If Shan Rao lets Bian Xuedao risk his life, then Shan Rao is wrong. But if something happens to him while riding a roller coaster, everyone around him will blame Shan? I really wonder if the IQ of these people is zero? The most disgusting thing is that even though he and Shan Rao are still a couple, Bian Xuedao showed Xu Shangxiu to people around him and the people in the company, implying that Xu is the boss's wife (Chapter 727), it's really disgusting! Where will you be alone? You can dislike it, you can break up, but don't hurt it! In the previous article, there was a Shangshan Scholarship, and the two women each took one word. They are obviously scumbags, so why are they pretending to be lovers? After becoming a bitch, you still need to erect a memorial arch? Disgusting. This is not a vulgar person, this is a scumbag! Obviously Seo Sang-soo was a mistress at that stage, but the original article also said that there was no resistance when Seo Sang-soo appeared, which really ruined the three views!

The lay people are ready to rewind. Are there any lay people who are on the same journey to watch it from the beginning? Reading other books is boring, so read this book from the beginning to relax for a while!

As a Reasonable Party book fan~! The premise of the books I have read is the plot setting, and the content description must be reasonable ~ no matter what genre ~! Books such as Mao Ni's Qing Yu Nian, Jiang Ye, and Book of the Destiny ~ Books like The Dancing Supreme Scoundrel, Devil's Law, and Face-Changing Samurai ~ Books such as Mo Wu's Dandy Talent, Beauty of the Country ~ Chang Shuxin's Remaining Sin, The Black Pot, Shanghai Spies, etc. ~ Yue Guan's Books such as Hui Ming, Jin Yi, and Ye Tianzi, etc., Books such as The Eye-catching Golden Eyes, Genius Fortune Teller, etc., Books such as The Hidden Murder of Angry Banana, and Son-in-law, etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc., Etc... What I want to say today is the ultimate ~ what extreme? ! The content setting, plot and emotional description of the characters in the book are the ultimate~! On this point alone, I only accept this book that Geng won't give in to, and ordinary people will turn it back! Although this book belongs to the rebirth YY genre, it has a fullness that many books don't have or don't have! And the story is very strong~! Sometimes I have to admire Geng's brain capacity. How much relevant information do you have to check and how many brain-burning reference books do you have to read to write so many chapters? ! Okay~ I don't know what to say~! There are countless words in my heart that I want to say to praise you, but I can't express them in words! In short, regarding the extreme delicacy of writing, I will convince you!

The writing of the book is okay, but the plot really doesn't support reading. The protagonist is obsessed with his wife in his previous life, and he hasn't yet decided whether there is a possibility of being with her. While thinking about it, he is having an affair with another woman. After getting a girlfriend, he goes to his previous wife and pretends to be affectionate. Anyway, the protagonist is a big scumbag. Basically, the characters in the book have a very clear purpose in everything they do and who they date.

The writing skills are good, the writing attitude is good, the supporting characters and villains are not crazy, and the story line is basically OK, it is considered a good book. But there are many shortcomings. Only by forcing myself to follow the author's logic can I avoid drama. Otherwise, the protagonist will be contradictory from the beginning to the end, even though he is world-class and famous, he will still be contradictory, which is abnormal. The plot is too hard, especially the emotional line, which comes suddenly and is not at a loss. Xu, as the heroine, appears throughout the entire article, but her mere appearance has no sense of co-production and no contribution to promoting the direction of the plot. It seems that the author felt that Xu had not been written about for a long time, so he quickly asked the protagonist to find Xu and give Xu two scenes. Dong Xue's appearance, disappearance, reappearance, being pushed, and being taken into the harem are typical representatives of this "hardness". The time span spans 6 years, and there is no ink to describe Dong Xue in the middle. He appears and disappears and reappears abruptly. He is as protective as a jade and is willing to fight for the favor of the harem. It is awkward no matter how you look at it. Fan Qingyu is even more inexplicable. Her physiological needs are understandable, but this character is neither likable nor necessary. It is clearly stated that the protagonist treats her as a scumbag, but there is still a lot of space to describe her growth history. If you have this kind of skill, you might as well give this treatment to Guan Shunan. A character who was so vividly portrayed before just disappeared with a "Bye". These two characters appeared suddenly and were taken away too quickly. After they were taken away, a lot of ink was used to fill in the flesh and blood of the characters. It was too late, so it was a drama! Zhu Dezhen, such a character appears inexplicably, and is inexplicably asked by his father to marry the protagonist. Inexplicably, a lot of chapters begin between the two of them. There is also Su Yi, a supporting character throughout the whole play. Near the end, she inexplicably fell in love with the protagonist, and gave her some space, but nothing came of it. Similar ones include Guan Shunan, Meng Jingji, etc. These characters were covered with a lot of words and space, but in the end they didn't have the ending they deserved. It felt like so many prefaces were all nonsense, so it was a drama! All of the above gave me the feeling of two words: extra drama! For the sake of length, the author worked hard to create characters and conflicts and add drama to the story. Also, the supporting characters are too weak. Although their IQs are online, there are basically no one-turn enemies for the protagonist. Zhu Haishan, the only one who could rival the protagonist, was written off in less than two appearances. I feel that there could be a better way to handle it, and it might be better not to even write about the appearance of this character. So I say that if you want to enjoy reading it, you must not bring your own thoughts and emotions and forcefully accept the author's logic, so that you can continue reading it happily. Modern writing is easy but difficult to write. It is easy to write because everyone has some life experience that can be carved out, but difficult to write because there are many rules and regulations that cannot be overcome. It is not like traveling through the history of another world, where you can have unlimited imagination. I think the author's failure lies in this. There is a love line and a career line. The career started too fast. After half a novel, the male protagonist became famous all over the world. The female protagonists were so confused that they couldn't get along with each other. I guess the male protagonist and the author were also confused. One moment, he was a small fortune worth tens of millions, and the next moment, he was an invisible rich man who bought a winery for a billion dollars. Goldfinger broke the sun and couldn't fix it no matter what. But I guess the reason why this book is so popular is because the protagonist is so awesome and not stupid, which makes many readers happy. After all, most rebirth novels are about moisturizing things quietly, making money in a low-key way, and finally ending up with fame. However, the emotional scenes are really unbearable. Except for Shen Fu who supported the protagonist a few times after she became famous, the other female protagonists all appeared just to appear. Cutting off the scenes will not affect the overall situation. The most aggrieved person should be the male protagonist. Other rebirth novels quickly correct their mentality and start their own new life. Our male protagonist is always looking for his old life in the new life. The author doesn't know what he's thinking. If he wants the male protagonist to enjoy the blessings of everyone, he should downplay moral constraints. Our male protagonist is obsessed with morality with one hand, nostalgia with the other, and beauties with the other. He wants to catch and harden with several hands. In the end, everyone is screwed. He is moral, but he accepted five women, and he is casual, but he rejected several better ones. The male protagonist is very pitiful, he is already so twisted, and the author keeps stuffing him with women, for the next 500 chapters (Zhu Dezhen), and for the next 100 chapters (Su Yi), it is still a love triangle, forcing the male protagonist to be at a loss for words and can only say "I am not a thing", and the comment section is full of people calling the protagonist a scumbag ~ I guess the author Ye Dou couldn't help but write it wrong. This ending is really bad. He used one chapter to write off Zhu Dezhen, the perfect woman who spent hundreds of chapters describing it. (A small character who couldn't be beaten suddenly appeared to kill the protagonist. Zhu Dezhen stopped the disaster, crippled, and chose to freeze herself.) It ended in a hurry. He didn't even give the heroine a proper title, and he didn't get married. The male protagonist was worried about life and death throughout the whole text and didn't explain it. It ended like this... I haven't seen such a sober and refined piece of shit in many years. The 140 yuan was not wasted! The author's writing skills are good, and his character description is good, but his writing (storytelling) skills are not good, it is too hard and incoherent. If this book could not add so many dramas, cut the 1,500 chapters down to around 800, and refine the characters and story, it would be a classic. It would be a pity.