Net King: Liu Qianxun
by Mo Yingyue
About This Novel
I traveled to the world of the Net King and became Liu's sister. It's great! But here comes my true destiny, Apple Kunimitsu!
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Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
Hey, when will it be updated?
In addition to the character's confession, there is also a growth experience that jumps too fast.
For example, in the first few chapters, didn't Tezuka like Chihiro when he was a child? So cultivate feelings. If you jump too fast like this, it can easily lead to misunderstandings. They only met once when they were children. Therefore, we should also write a little about what happened when they were young. If you are not used to writing about things that happened when you were a child, you can just briefly mention it. Just say: I just played at his house a few times when I was a child, or kept in touch when he was away. That's fine, it just increases feelings anyway.
I think the novel you wrote is pretty good among fan fictions, but I think some chapters should be added, such as character confessions, to make the article fuller.
Come on! I support you. I will always support your novels.
Come on, big, you must update it well, it's really beautiful😘😘😘
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 5d ago
Hey, when will it be updated?
In addition to the character's confession, there is also a growth experience that jumps too fast.
For example, in the first few chapters, didn't Tezuka like Chihiro when he was a child? So cultivate feelings. If you jump too fast like this, it can easily lead to misunderstandings. They only met once when they were children. Therefore, we should also write a little about what happened when they were young. If you are not used to writing about things that happened when you were a child, you can just briefly mention it. Just say: I just played at his house a few times when I was a child, or kept in touch when he was away. That's fine, it just increases feelings anyway.
I think the novel you wrote is pretty good among fan fictions, but I think some chapters should be added, such as character confessions, to make the article fuller.
Come on! I support you. I will always support your novels.
Come on, big, you must update it well, it's really beautiful😘😘😘
