On the Self-cultivation of a House

I watched a little bit, and the protagonist gave his tenant a fruit. The tenants woke up. But the skill accidentally tore the clothes. Saw by the protagonist. Then another girl said very shamelessly that she wanted to tear down the protagonist. Just looking at it makes me angry. Very noob. Holy Mother. I'm not angry if I accept girls. But it's too pampering. They are about to tear down the main character. The pig's feet were still swallowed, and I didn't even want to give points. But it looks like a book written by a novice. So be it. The author quickly improved his writing skills. I recommend it. Shuangwen is popular right now, while Wudiwen has always been popular. But the author's writing style needs to keep up. Otherwise it would still be a mess. Don't pamper anyone. Except for my sister or brother. Otherwise, the number of people watching will be cut in half. Don't be too pampering either. What's more, it's also popular because it doesn't have a female protagonist. Or a chapter with a single female protagonist. The author's writing style needs to be improved.

The ending is too sloppy.

System - protagonist - patron = Party A - general contractor - subcontractor. The protagonist has a human mind but is not a human being, so the patron will think that this is a big opportunity. The system can assign tasks to the protagonist and then assign the protagonist to the patron. As the saying goes, I don't know what to say in one sentence, so I don't know what to write. Can the protagonist talk to the patron if he is bored? Thinking about it from the perspective of a patron, it is very desperate to have no power and strength in the end of the world. The appearance of the protagonist is a light shining on his land. The important point is that the protagonist is not a real person.

Old-fashioned cool writing, Xiaobai writing, another chicken book I read from Zhang

Is this the end? No way, no way!

You don't need to rush him. He hasn't updated it since 2020.

The protagonist behaves too badly and has a big heart. When he sees a woman, he only has desire.

Are you confusing the chapters?

Personal feeling) The character's favorability progresses too quickly The plot advances too fast Language organization is pretty good Good plot editing Nice idea Others: I think if you press the gun again, it can be used as a tank. I'm really ready to develop into TOG II I saw some people said it was a novice, so I gave it 4 stars.

Nice! It's the first time I read a novel where rebirth becomes an item's upgrade. It's quite interesting! Come on! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍