Overtime Review

To be honest, the subject matter of your book really surprised me. I discovered this book in the afternoon or evening. In terms of the subject matter and your writing style, I feel that this book has the potential to be a great achievement, but the daily life of the protagonist you created is a failure. The previous daily life is not bad. I feel that it has nothing to do with my life. What, but I watched it. During the third live broadcast, I finished reading the three chapters and combined it with the senses I had read before. I am also a senior in high school from a relatively rubbish school, and I am about to become an adult. His three views made me very uncomfortable. When I read the book, I endured the discomfort. I felt that the protagonist did not have the basics. I can't tell what some of the things that it should be, but it's just too playful and too ridiculous. I think some chapters are okay when it comes to my sister, but later on I feel like it's not right. I even think it's just a prank. I have a sister myself, and I'm often very disrespectful to my sister, but I can be very proud of it. I said that my sister will tell me when something happens because she trusts me. There are many places where there are a lot of laughs, but the poison is really cruel. For example, the middle finger pointing up to the sky when building the island made me completely unable to stand it. I guess I was poisoned to death. I still don't know whether this is a daily type or a comedy type. Ah, I feel like I've talked a lot of nonsense. Basically, the subject matter is great, the writing is good, and there is no supporting role to reduce intelligence. This is the advantage. Disadvantages: The protagonist is too unreliable, has no three views, is exaggerated in daily life, and the protagonist's way of dealing with the outside world is exaggerated. I was so poisoned during the third live broadcast that I died and abandoned the book.

Once upon a time there was a mountain, and there was a temple on the mountain. In the temple there was an old monk and a young monk. One day, the old monk said to the young monk: "There is not much food in the temple. You can go down the mountain and turn some rice back." The little monk nodded, picked up the bag and went down the mountain, and never came back. The old monk waited alone in the temple for a year. Finally he couldn't hold it any longer, so he put a lock on the temple door and went down the mountain to find the young monk. The old monk climbed over the mountain and came to a vast desert stretching in front of him. He chanted "Amitabha" and did not dare to go forward. At this time, a caravan came by. Knowing that the old monk was going to cross the desert, he generously allowed him to join the caravan and took him across the desert. The old monk was extremely grateful and thanked the owner of the caravan repeatedly. The owner of the caravan waved his hand to him and said, "You're welcome. Bandits are rampant in the desert. I don't know if we can cross safely. I heard that some thieves still believe in Buddhism and will take you to try their luck." The old monk followed the caravan into the desert. The food brought by the caravan was all dried meat and strong liquor. The old monk kept his posture upright, abstaining from alcohol or eating any meat. He only ate the water and dry food he brought with him. Everyone in the caravan said that he was a virtuous monk. When they were halfway through the eight hundred miles of yellow sand, the caravan was captured by thieves, and everyone in the caravan lay dead on the spot. When the old monk opened his eyes, he saw the shining tip of the knife. He shouted. The man holding the knife was stunned and called: "Master." The old monk is not dead. He is very lucky. The young monk he is looking for is among the thieves. He has become the leader and married a wife. When the old monk saw the young monk drinking and killing people, he couldn't help but burst into tears and said, "You are a Buddhist, how can you be so vicious? How can you indulge in greed like this?" The young monk replied: "Buddha is neither cruel nor evil, so why do you want the world to respect him and fear him? Buddha has no greed and desire, so why does he want to accept incense from the world?" The old monk was speechless. The old monk was speechless and stopped blaming him harshly. The young monk continued: "Master, in the past year, I have been away from the mountain and have not returned. I have experienced all kinds of things and tribulations. When I first came down from the mountain, I didn't know the depth of the desert, so I entered it alone. I collapsed from dehydration in less than two days. The person who rescued me was a woman. I didn't know at the time that she was the daughter of a thief. Later I saw her holding a sharp knife, killing people and stealing goods, and I was shocked. I tried my best to persuade her not to do evil things, but she said, these eight hundred miles of yellow sand cannot feed so many people. Some people want to survive, and some people have to die. Would you rather be the one who survives, or the one who dies? It's just that he never kills anyone. I watched them kill group after group of caravans, and I was attacked by groups of thieves. I just enjoy dry food and water with peace of mind, and do not eat dried meat or strong wine, thinking that I am maintaining my integrity. But one day she said to me: 'Do you think that just drinking water and eating only solid food makes you superior to us? Did you know that clean water is snatched from the mouths of dying people, and dry food is taken from the packages of struggling merchants? ' At that moment I was blushing. Later, I ate meat, drank wine, and killed people with a knife. Later, I even broke the precept and married her. After the death of the old leader, I was elected as the leader by the thieves, and killing and stealing became commonplace. " The old monk sighed after hearing this and advised the young monk to go back with him. The young monk shook his head and said, "I can't go back, Master. Besides, the land behind the temple can only keep us two from starving to death. If I don't go back, you can eat alone. If I go back, we can only starve together." The old monk said that if people who follow Buddhism have less materialistic desires, there will be no big problem. The young monk shook his head and said, "Desire is a very scary thing. I heard that there is a famous dish in the southeast. The fragrance floats ten miles away, making everyone salivate after hearing it. The Buddha couldn't bear the temptation and wanted to jump over the wall, so it is called 'Buddha Jumps Over the Wall'. You see, Buddha also broke the precepts sometimes, not to mention me?" The old monk said: "That is just a dish name after all. How does it mean that Buddha will really jump out of the wall? I will wait until the day you are willing to return to the mountain." So, the old monk followed the young monk all the time. He watched the young monk leading the thieves to attack the caravan. He stood in the distance and said nothing, only waiting for everyone to die and then went over to bury the bodies. At first the thieves laughed at him, but he treated them calmly and never refuted. Later, the thieves began to respect him and called him master like a young monk. They helped him bury his corpse and learned the scriptures about salvation. No matter how powerful the thieves are, they cannot roam the desert forever. After they robbed and killed a rich caravan, they were targeted by others, and several groups of thieves joined forces to kill them. They panicked and fled all the way. When they finally escaped into a grotto, only four people were left, including the young monk and the old monk. Just when they had no way out and were desperate, the grotto collapsed, blocking out the pursuers. They let out a long sigh, but soon discovered that they would face an even greater desperate situation: in this cave that they could not get out of, there was only enough food for one person to eat for a few days. After knowing this, the old monk meditated facing the broken Buddha statue in the grotto without saying a word. The remaining three people knew that he was going to fast. The three people looked at the little dry food left, swallowed, and divided the dry food into three portions, one for each person, and no portion for the old monk. After the first day, the three hungry people devoured half of the food they had. No one touched the remaining half. They stared at each other's food like hungry wolves. The next day, they started fighting. The old monk sat in front of the Buddha, with muddy tears rolling out of the corners of his eyes. On the third day, the other two people died, and only the young monk was left. His eyes were red, clenched his fists, and walked step by step towards the old monk in front of the Buddha, and stretched out his hand... The old monk was horrified, and without thinking, he stabbed out with the dagger hidden in his body for self-defense. The little monk opened his eyes wide and slowly opened his outstretched hand - the last piece of dry food lay on his palm. Two days later, a passing caravan rescued the old monk from the collapsed grotto. By then he was already dying. The old monk followed the caravan out of the desert and returned to the temple. A few days later, he hanged himself from a beam in the temple. Before putting his neck into the noose, he kept thinking about what the little monk said before he died. He said: "Master, Buddha... Buddha jumped over the wall..."

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I've read more than 50 chapters, and this beginning is so bad that I can't even watch the rest.

To be honest, I read this novel mainly to read the reviews. Really. . Reviews of this book are more funny than joyful and more interesting than novels. .

The author is great. I think the husky setting is a big failure (personally, whisper bb). I personally think the real dog is really annoying. Of course, the book is still very interesting.

How can I put it this way? The protagonist's character makes me feel tight-chested and too weak. Also, the protagonist's parents are too ungrateful. I don't know what to say. It's not a rant, just a small expression.

I just read the first few chapters, emmm, how can I put it this way, a sophomore in high school, all the family members are still alive, unlike other novels where an orphan starts a work-study program and has more than 3,000 savings, but his family can't even eat meat. What the hell is that? Is it possible that inflation in Chengdu is so severe?

"You're so scared!" Chen Yu glanced at Li Liang with disdain: "Bald head, let me tell you, we are mixed school students, don't be cowardly, don't be afraid, what will happen even if you are caught? If you have the ability, expel me!" Li Liang was shocked. "You don't know how high my level is now. The principal is protecting me. I'm not bragging to you. I haven't skipped classes very often during this period. What can he do to me?" Li Liang stepped back step by step in fear. "Look at how cowardly you are, are you worthy of your bald head? During this period of time, I have noticed that our class teacher doesn't like me. He targets me at every turn and makes a fool of himself. When I graduate in the future, let him see what an unexpected surprise is..." Before he finished speaking, a hand suddenly appeared on Chen Yu's shoulder. He saw the head teacher, Niu Lanshan, Principal Pang, and his biological mother standing at the back door of the classroom, staring at him without blinking... "..." Slowly turning his head, Chen Yu silently took out his mobile phone and dialed 120 emergency number in airplane mode. "Hello? Are there any beds in the nearby hospital? Is the WiFi fast?"

Technology is necessary for contemporary development. With technology, we can do things that ancient people could not do. This is the charm of technology. It's just that technology products are not ready to use as soon as they are invented. They require reviewers to go through a series of evaluation checks before they can be used. Chen Yu is one of the video reviewers who specializes in evaluating quantum computers, nuclear fusion reactors and other time-traveling technologies. The reason why Chen Yu was able to get involved with these Super Dimension technology products was because the review video he sent attracted Super Dimension promoters, so Chen Yu got a serious job. At first, Chen Yu did not believe in the existence of time and space, and that the other party wanted to deceive him, a high school student, but he finally gave in to the facts. Even though it sounded outrageous, the technology of time and space did exist. It was different from ordinary technology. Its emergence was a major discovery for mankind and a necessary discovery. Because it is a different time and space, it is necessary to travel through time and space to deliver contracts and products. Because this super time and space allowed Chen Yu, who originally wanted to give up working in this industry, to embark on this road again. Even though this road was not so easy, Chen Yu persisted. For Super Dimension Technology, Chen Yu must promote them well in order for the contract to continue to take effect. If the video does not achieve good results, Chen Yu will face the risk of terminating the contract. The technological products of Time and Space are unimaginable to people on earth, because it is just a small children's toy, but it actually contains elemental substances. It is unimaginable that such a dangerous item is actually a children's toy, and Chen Yu has to deal with these seemingly simple but dangerous things.