National Hunter Era

I really don't understand why I wrote this heroine. I would rather not have a heroine. I'm really speechless. Without this thing, it would be five stars. With this thing, I don't even want to watch it.

The settings of this book are really good. Some of the insertions are satisfactory, but some aspects of the settings are not satisfactory. For example, the points you get from the monsters you kill are limited, and how to buy food and equipment. You said that equipment is a system reward. Good, but the bad thing is that you are live broadcasting. The audience is not blind. You hunt with others to get points, and others get limited food and equipment. However, the protagonist gets much more physical objects and equipment than his companions. How to explain to the audience? You can never tell the audience that I am the chosen one. I have my own system and so on, right? There is a problem with your logic, it is very realistic and very direct, but what I have to praise is that when others are writing all kinds of fan fiction, you are able to write apocalyptic novels, especially the originality of apocalyptic novels.

Author, you are going too far. What do you mean when you write the male protagonist like this? Do you want to say that our male protagonist is still pregnant, or is he a eunuch? I am speechless. Let me tell you, if you don't take this Korean woman in after this, I will go to your house with a 40-meter machete for two days.

I hope the author can pay attention to the issue of system rewards. First of all, why did the audience not react when the protagonist suddenly had an awesome equipment in his hand? Why did the audience suddenly turn around when they couldn't speak Korean just now? Seeing this, I really can't hold on. The rewards given by the system are too inconsistent. Or the author can add a sentence to rationalize the system rewards so that others will not notice and automatically ignore them.

I don't like it, so instead of teaming up with people from my own country, I team up with foreign countries. Helping others instead of helping yourself is annoying, and may be a bit angry, but that's it. At the beginning, people from my own country asked to join, but instead of joining, they joined the Koryo people.

The subject matter is good, but the author seems to have ignored that there are many smart people, and there are live broadcasts. The appearance of the protagonist's equipment can easily be found to be unreasonable. Since each country has a dedicated observation team, it should be easy to calculate the protagonist's hunting points and use of props. It will be a matter of time before the plug-in is exposed.

You can also take a look The protagonist's personality is okay, neither Madonna nor dark. The plot is okay. If you are bored, you can watch it.

The plot is developing too slowly. There are still so many levels and scripts. You are still writing the Novice Village with more than 100 chapters. How much do you want to write?

If you want to open a harem, just open it directly Why create a protagonist who won't mess around with his wife? In fact, the character is sleeping with other people behind his back.

It's a very good setting, and the general character of the protagonist is pretty good, but it's a pity that it was ruined by a woman. I'm really speechless. Are all the current authors just LOu bitches who have never seen a woman? The more I looked at it, the more disgusting it became. I couldn't hold on anymore and gave up.