Montana Rancher

The content is good, but it's a pity that it's not divided into sections. It doesn't look very comfortable.

Author, are you sure you are writing about a realistic social framework? Not a fantasy novel? Instead of the following, wealthy families, hermit families, and martial arts sects are emerging one after another, I just want to read this relaxing farming novel in peace, and the National Security Bureau has already appeared.

That character shouldn't be childish. He speaks without thinking through his brain. He doesn't look like someone who came out of an orphanage and worked hard for so many years.

The character of the protagonist is too funny, and he likes to play pranks too much. Using such a changeable character to control emotions and interact with characters or things makes the plot very inconsistent, and makes the causes and results of both characters very contradictory. Firstly, the expression is unclear, and secondly, they cannot be understood, which makes the readers feel very stiff and inexplicable. I hope the author can be more detailed and clarify the dialogue between characters and things, as well as the extension of the plot line.

Really impressed! How come you don't know what punctuation marks are used in character dialogue? Not to mention how well written the content of this book is, the use of punctuation marks makes it very uncomfortable to read.

I have been reading this book for so long and it was so hard for me to read it for the first time. I don't even need to "divide" the dialogues of the characters. No matter how wonderful you write the content of the book, it will be in vain. I hope you can improve it.

People with trypophobia cannot read this book.

Can the author break it into paragraphs? Dazzled

It looks good and updates quickly. Otherwise, tell me the address and I will send the blade there.

I feel like the main character has a mental problem and I can't stand it anymore.