Douluo: My Voice Was Eavesdropped on Sun Girl
by Cats Who Don't Like To Drink Milk
About This Novel
I'm Tang San, and I'm very panicked now. My sister actually has a sun in her body. She will explode whenever her mood fluctuates abnormally, and the world will be over by then. What should I do if she's angry now? I'm waiting online. It's quite urgent. I am Tang San, I don't panic now, I can actually hear my sister's heartbeat, explosion? Impossible, see if I don't pamper you to heaven. "Brother, I haven't said anything yet, do you understand?" Tang Qingchen tilted his head and looked at his busy brother. It is impossible for my brother to understand me so well. "Sister, don't worry. Brother is here, so there will be no accidents."
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Official(112)Scraped 23d ago
I want to ask you a question.
Are there any other good-looking female Douluo? Douluo novels on male channels are too violent. They either torture one person or another. I can't stand it. I still like to take it easy. So as a result, I, a man, was forced to watch female videos. I'm looking for a relaxing Douluo novel. Don't torture me over and over again
Very pretty
Damn, who is the male protagonist? No lilies (fearful, crying)
uh-huh? Just looking at it, it's gone? What's next? Thank you for the update😭
作者大大请快点更新更新更新更新更新更新更新更新更新每天多更新几章一章不够看请快点继续继续继续更新多多的更新更新更新更新文章下
The character design has collapsed too much
When I see Xiao Wu, I don't want to read anymore. In this book, Xiao Wu becomes an impolite, sloppy, impulsive, and brainless person. Although the setting of the heroine is good, the supporting roles are really bad. There are many scenes, which can be changed, but it is so broken that I really can't stand it. The heroine is clearly set up to have such a good IQ, emotional intelligence, and no problem in dealing with people. She is calm, rational, powerful, real, and flesh-and-blood. Why do we have to discredit the original characters to set it off? It's totally unnecessary! Don't understand
Can the author use the holidays to update as soon as possible?
I hope the author will update it soon, preferably at least three chapters a day.
Good-looking, but a little lacking
Especially regarding the heroine's emotional line, I prefer her to be with Tang San
Anyway, I feel like I'm writing too slowly.
After writing more than 100 chapters, it has only been a year, and why is Xiao Wu so stupid? The writing is okay, but it feels like it's too long for this young age.
Although this is a female channel, you shouldn't be like that. 1. At the beginning of Holy Soul Village, in the first chapter, the martial soul awakens at the age of six, and it takes more than thirty chapters to get the first ring. It still follows the same route as the original work. You can imagine how many plots are mixed in. 2. The Mandala Snake King that appears in the Soul Hunting Forest for four to five thousand years is too outrageous. There are only a few in the Soul Hunting Forest that are more than a thousand years old. You just have four to five thousand years. 3. The protagonist is a jerk and cannot tell that he was an adult in his previous life. He wants to go shopping at the entrance of the Soul Hunting Forest, but he never thought that he and his brother Master do not have high combat effectiveness. A long and beautiful girl is walking at the entrance of the Soul Hunting Forest. Do you want to attract the enemy? In Soul Hunt, the Mandala Snake King was completely attracted to the protagonist. As a result, Tang San was almost dead. If you say "I am the sun", he is really not handsome at all and is very dramatic. 4. There is a problem with the three views. I don't know why I am so malicious towards the image of Wang Sheng, a work-study student who didn't have much writing in the original work. You can just discredit the main character. After all, it will have an impact on the plot. You need to move closer to the plot you want. A passerby character, a child, said that he was scheming to take advantage of Xiao Wu. It was the first time I saw such remarks in a fan. He also said that Wang Sheng and others should not resist when being bullied. Those who do not resist bullies will not bully because they find it boring, and other outrageous remarks. You are almost on the verge of failing the trial.
It's rotten, it's obviously rotten
Just when I thought the plot would slowly reach its climax, the heroine died inexplicably at the end without any warning or any foreshadowing. A lot of emotional foreshadowing was done in the previous chapters and the bonds between the Douluo characters and the heroine were cut off directly. Finally, it ended hastily, with a beginning and no end. It felt like a large part of the plot was cut off and the final result was directly attached, which made people feel uncomfortable. The whole story feels average at the beginning, but the special settings make people want to keep reading. Later on, the plot and plot become smoother, and the writing gradually gets better. It feels like a perfect foreshadowing, and it ends directly when the plot is about to reach its climax. I am confused and very regretful. Unfortunately, the plot is undoubtedly better. If the author of this book can maintain his status and finish it, then I will probably recommend it: once you can read the beginning, you will gradually be attracted. It is also a better work in fan fiction, so when this book is unfinished, I will have more anger and regret. This paragraph only represents my personal feelings and regrets about this work.
Very nice
The reasons why I like this book are: 1. The character of the heroine in it. 2. This is not like the harem in male videos, it is not that messy. ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔ
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Official(112)Scraped 23d ago
I want to ask you a question.
Are there any other good-looking female Douluo? Douluo novels on male channels are too violent. They either torture one person or another. I can't stand it. I still like to take it easy. So as a result, I, a man, was forced to watch female videos. I'm looking for a relaxing Douluo novel. Don't torture me over and over again
Very pretty
Damn, who is the male protagonist? No lilies (fearful, crying)
uh-huh? Just looking at it, it's gone? What's next? Thank you for the update😭
作者大大请快点更新更新更新更新更新更新更新更新更新每天多更新几章一章不够看请快点继续继续继续更新多多的更新更新更新更新文章下
The character design has collapsed too much
When I see Xiao Wu, I don't want to read anymore. In this book, Xiao Wu becomes an impolite, sloppy, impulsive, and brainless person. Although the setting of the heroine is good, the supporting roles are really bad. There are many scenes, which can be changed, but it is so broken that I really can't stand it. The heroine is clearly set up to have such a good IQ, emotional intelligence, and no problem in dealing with people. She is calm, rational, powerful, real, and flesh-and-blood. Why do we have to discredit the original characters to set it off? It's totally unnecessary! Don't understand
Can the author use the holidays to update as soon as possible?
I hope the author will update it soon, preferably at least three chapters a day.
Good-looking, but a little lacking
Especially regarding the heroine's emotional line, I prefer her to be with Tang San
Anyway, I feel like I'm writing too slowly.
After writing more than 100 chapters, it has only been a year, and why is Xiao Wu so stupid? The writing is okay, but it feels like it's too long for this young age.
Although this is a female channel, you shouldn't be like that. 1. At the beginning of Holy Soul Village, in the first chapter, the martial soul awakens at the age of six, and it takes more than thirty chapters to get the first ring. It still follows the same route as the original work. You can imagine how many plots are mixed in. 2. The Mandala Snake King that appears in the Soul Hunting Forest for four to five thousand years is too outrageous. There are only a few in the Soul Hunting Forest that are more than a thousand years old. You just have four to five thousand years. 3. The protagonist is a jerk and cannot tell that he was an adult in his previous life. He wants to go shopping at the entrance of the Soul Hunting Forest, but he never thought that he and his brother Master do not have high combat effectiveness. A long and beautiful girl is walking at the entrance of the Soul Hunting Forest. Do you want to attract the enemy? In Soul Hunt, the Mandala Snake King was completely attracted to the protagonist. As a result, Tang San was almost dead. If you say "I am the sun", he is really not handsome at all and is very dramatic. 4. There is a problem with the three views. I don't know why I am so malicious towards the image of Wang Sheng, a work-study student who didn't have much writing in the original work. You can just discredit the main character. After all, it will have an impact on the plot. You need to move closer to the plot you want. A passerby character, a child, said that he was scheming to take advantage of Xiao Wu. It was the first time I saw such remarks in a fan. He also said that Wang Sheng and others should not resist when being bullied. Those who do not resist bullies will not bully because they find it boring, and other outrageous remarks. You are almost on the verge of failing the trial.
It's rotten, it's obviously rotten
Just when I thought the plot would slowly reach its climax, the heroine died inexplicably at the end without any warning or any foreshadowing. A lot of emotional foreshadowing was done in the previous chapters and the bonds between the Douluo characters and the heroine were cut off directly. Finally, it ended hastily, with a beginning and no end. It felt like a large part of the plot was cut off and the final result was directly attached, which made people feel uncomfortable. The whole story feels average at the beginning, but the special settings make people want to keep reading. Later on, the plot and plot become smoother, and the writing gradually gets better. It feels like a perfect foreshadowing, and it ends directly when the plot is about to reach its climax. I am confused and very regretful. Unfortunately, the plot is undoubtedly better. If the author of this book can maintain his status and finish it, then I will probably recommend it: once you can read the beginning, you will gradually be attracted. It is also a better work in fan fiction, so when this book is unfinished, I will have more anger and regret. This paragraph only represents my personal feelings and regrets about this work.
Very nice
The reasons why I like this book are: 1. The character of the heroine in it. 2. This is not like the harem in male videos, it is not that messy. ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔ
