Peninsula Novel Come True
by I Have A Strawberry Garden At Home
About This Novel
I just wrote a novel. I'm just a part-time streetwalker. I didn't want it to become true! ! ! Single female protagonist, HY
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Official(6)Scraped 16d ago
It's really good, is it an anime? Your
Very nice
I like it very much, and I also like this content.
Want to write a brush? Write a brush? The author is great🌚🌚💦
Just watched The Master? It's a bit surprising. Not many people write about babies.
It is still worthy of encouragement, but writing a novel is not a script. It is not a scene that is suddenly shouted in front of people. This is the problem of this novel. The transitions are relatively stiff, the description of the plot of the scene is relatively simple, and the writing is not smooth enough. Coupled with the frequent transitions, there is a sense of fragmentation. The content of Chapter 14 changes several times. If that doesn't work, the author can try female-channeled short stories, keeping the plot simple, describing the scenes more delicately and in detail, and writing less about psychological activities. You can let readers feel the inside by describing the external.
It's pretty good, but I get tired easily after watching it. I don't know how to describe it. It feels unfocused.
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Official(6)Scraped 16d ago
It's really good, is it an anime? Your
Very nice
I like it very much, and I also like this content.
Want to write a brush? Write a brush? The author is great🌚🌚💦
Just watched The Master? It's a bit surprising. Not many people write about babies.
It is still worthy of encouragement, but writing a novel is not a script. It is not a scene that is suddenly shouted in front of people. This is the problem of this novel. The transitions are relatively stiff, the description of the plot of the scene is relatively simple, and the writing is not smooth enough. Coupled with the frequent transitions, there is a sense of fragmentation. The content of Chapter 14 changes several times. If that doesn't work, the author can try female-channeled short stories, keeping the plot simple, describing the scenes more delicately and in detail, and writing less about psychological activities. You can let readers feel the inside by describing the external.
It's pretty good, but I get tired easily after watching it. I don't know how to describe it. It feels unfocused.
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Single heroine: Jo Mi-yeon
Heroine: Miyeon It's rare to see a book with a female baby as the main character. Recently, I really like female baby books. It's still a seedling at the moment. I'll save it for now and read it later.
The novel has a single heroine, Jo Mi-yeon. The beginning of the novel is a little confusing, and you need to calm down and read a few more chapters to understand it. Does it feel like body swapping like your name? The male protagonist is a hidden chaebol and became the director of Cube Company. He has no ambiguity with other female idols and has masculine ethics!
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