Peninsula Novel Come True

Peninsula Novel Come True

by I Have A Strawberry Garden At Home

Length:
986Kwords470chapters
Latest:
Ch. 470New Book! ! !
Activity:
Updated 11mo agoScraped 1mo ago
6Comments
2.6KFavorites
766Fans
8.1QD Score

About This Novel

I just wrote a novel. I'm just a part-time streetwalker. I didn't want it to become true! ! ! Single female protagonist, HY

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书友
书友20231004984_eD31mo ago

It's really good, is it an anime? Your

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YIAIZW35mo ago

Very nice

I like it very much, and I also like this content.

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▹ Empty the Magazine°✨15mo ago

Want to write a brush? Write a brush? The author is great🌚🌚💦

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娃袜瓦哇34mo ago

Just watched The Master? It's a bit surprising. Not many people write about babies.

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Restrain30mo ago

It is still worthy of encouragement, but writing a novel is not a script. It is not a scene that is suddenly shouted in front of people. This is the problem of this novel. The transitions are relatively stiff, the description of the plot of the scene is relatively simple, and the writing is not smooth enough. Coupled with the frequent transitions, there is a sense of fragmentation. The content of Chapter 14 changes several times. If that doesn't work, the author can try female-channeled short stories, keeping the plot simple, describing the scenes more delicately and in detail, and writing less about psychological activities. You can let readers feel the inside by describing the external.

书友
书友20230904251_bd32mo ago

It's pretty good, but I get tired easily after watching it. I don't know how to describe it. It feels unfocused.

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