Fairy, Would You Like to Discuss the Truth with Me?

The wind is fluttering, the snow is beautiful, I don't know how old I am in my dream, and it's hazy who can climb high in the world. The night is dim, the smoke is thin, there is a bridge between right and wrong, there are more reincarnations and one person is less.

This is a good book. It's rare to see a book like this. The protagonist has his own moral principles, but is decisive in killing. It's a bit astringent. I really like it. My suggestion is that I hope the author can write 1.5 Million+ words. 1. There are too many protagonists, including the Son of Destiny. If it is written like this, it will easily collapse later. I don't know what the author's plan is. I hope the rhythm can be controlled. 2. There are too many women to be recruited. According to the calculation of one Destiny Child, there are about 2-3. In fact, you will not be able to write them later. In fact, you only need to write out the characteristics of each character. Recruiting female characters can be slower, dealing with a protagonist can be slower, and the process of female characters being accepted by the protagonist should be written more. The plot written by Lu is actually quite good. In fact, it can be more detailed. I suggest that the number of female characters should be limited to 20 (actually I want to say 10, but considering that it is already quite a lot, forget it) 3. I don't know if the author has a small website. I recommend a book called Little Butter (Xian. Wife. Is. Evil. Vicious. Female. Match) which has been quite good in recent years. The descriptions in it are quite good. You can learn some of the plot transitions in it (forget about the yellow in it. Putting aside the yellow in it, it is actually a good novel). 4. Yellow can be written more secretly, so that it will not be easy to be reported by some defenders (or peers) 5. I hope the author will get better and better, keep it up (the muttering poems are actually pretty good (serious novels), you can check them out)

This protagonist is really decisive in killing (deciding in killing in that respect). The only drawback is that there are too many protagonists, and everything is prone to collapse. The overall quality is good, but the details are not enough in some places. It is recommended to describe more battle plots every time you kill. Readers will definitely enjoy the details of the battles, which are not enough to be mentioned in one sentence. For example, on the night of the battle with Wu Ren's wife, we couldn't see the details of the battle. After all, we fought all night. Of course, the most important thing is to reduce the number of protagonists, so this book will definitely be able to become a god.

The protagonist is the kind of pure and good person who murders, sets fire, destroys his family, kills his father, rapes his mother, and wastes his children.

Group group group group group The author creates a group

How can I put it, the ending is a bit hasty, but everything else is okay

There should be only one Destiny's Child in the same place and at the same time. It seems a bit ridiculous that you have several appearing at the same time.

🐍It's over, it's over, it's over

If it were updated faster, the data in this book might be better. 🤐Don't be such a Buddhist author, please update it quickly.

Why hasn't the previous version been updated? Isn't it great?