Douluo: after Dressing up as Tang San's Sister, He Meets Xiao Yan
by Moxiao Cat
About This Novel
[The full text of the new book is free until the end. Welcome to join in. I just want comments and tickets! ]A female college student from a modern ancient martial arts family, with immortal cultivation skills that are useless at home. Accidentally entering the world of the popular novel "Douluo Dalu", she turned out to be Tang San's biological sister Tang Ning? From the beginning, the identity of the male protagonist's biological sister destined her to be the group's favorite. But Tang Ning never dreamed that she would actually meet the male protagonist of Dou Po Cang Qiong who traveled through another world - Emperor Yan Xiao Yan. The most important thing is that she is actually just holding another golden thigh. Why was he taken away by the other party as his wife all of a sudden? Sure enough, someone just cut black! ***The other people in Shrek were speechless: When I go to school, you guys are spoiling me, or both brothers and sisters are spoiling me! People doing things? In the entire continent, the person who should not be offended the most is Tang Ning. She is the sister of Poseidon Tang San, and her status is extremely noble. He was also super powerful, a standard match for the Daughter of Destiny, what if it was someone that neither Tang San nor he could beat? Look at her special skill: the summoning of her husband! Come out! Emperor Yan Xiao Yan! Tang Ning: Thank you for the invitation. I am Tang Ning. I have my own plug-in for cultivating immortality skills, my all-powerful husband Yandi, and the master of hidden weapons like Poseidon Shura. Do you have any last words for those who dare to offend me? ***Note: Tang San is controlled by the younger sister, the doting sister character is not flamboyant, the main CP Tang Ning, Yan Emperor Xiao Yan, San Wu and other officials are not separated, the Shrek Seven Monsters are not black, the heroine is the beloved cutie of the whole group + the winner of life with explosive force value. Other things will depend on the situation, there will be my own original plot, please forgive me for any changes.
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Official(220)Scraped 21d ago
Urge for updates, Urge for updates, Urge for updates for updates
Great author, this book is so good, I want to ask for an update! If the author doesn't update, if you don't update, I won't read it. If I don't read, I won't have a monthly pass. If I don't have a monthly pass, the author will cry (the pictures are all of our cute and cute Ning Ning)
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When will Tang Hao's attitude change? In fact, I feel that the heroine's own attitude towards Tang Hao is also slightly wrong. The two parties have never communicated with each other. It is a bit unaccustomed to define things based on their own subjectivity.
The outline setting is very good, but the writing power is insufficient.
In terms of character group costumes and settings, it is very interesting and innovative. It has a good understanding of Tang Hao's mentality during his time in the Holy Soul Village. Unfortunately, there was a deviation in the early description of the heroine and Tang Hao. The author probably wanted to portray that the heroine and Tang Hao care about each other, but they are estranged due to deviations in their views on each other's behavior. This will pave the way for Tang Hao to make changes to his children's guilt. This will create a great sense of contrast as a highlight, no less than the crematorium of chasing his wife in romance novels. Unfortunately, the author's description of Tang Hao's creation has a lot of deviations. This deviation lies in the contrast and inappropriate words used to describe some of Tang Hao's psychological activities, such as in the original text: "His sister is a useless useless martial spirit" (psychological activities). Wouldn't it be a lot better if you changed it to his sister's martial spirit, which is the useless martial spirit? Some words really don't fit together. If one or two more words are added, the meaning of a sentence will be greatly deviated. And this passage in the article: "Sure enough, women are not as good as men. It's okay for my daughter to not be close to her family. She pretends to be well-behaved and clever, but in fact she is so jealous. It's really embarrassing! No wonder Wuhun is a cunning and weak creature like a fox. It's so appropriate!" It's even worse. As soon as this sentence comes out, the mental image of Tang Hao in the article is basically finalized in the readers. What image is it? Just like the idea of a male chauvinist in ancient Chinese feudal society, any modern normal person would be disgusted with such an idea. Don't think that revealing the secret settings and endings in advance can solve the problem. People's psychological activities are greatly affected by habitual thinking. Today you see a man with a sloppy face and swearing. No matter how bright and beautiful he is in the future, you will not have a good impression of him. In the past, your father discriminated against you. In the future, if he changes and becomes a good father, there will always be a gap between the two parties. Preconceptions in people's hearts are like a big mountain. Now it can only be a pity that the author used too much force in writing and broke the pen. If it were not shaped in such a way, this book would have done very well, and the setting was really good. If the author could read more useful ideas in the comments section and reword the article, he probably wouldn't have dissuaded many people in the first few posts.
The author will update it as soon as possible so that it will look good
I really like this book, especially Xiao Yan and Tang Ning.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please update soon!
I won't go into too much detail, if you want to see this kind of thing, don't miss it! ! It's really nice to see Chinese people not lying to Chinese people!
I hate Tang San! dislike! Tang San really is, I feel disgusting anyway!
If I travel to Douluo 1, I will definitely kill Tang San. If I travel to Douluo 2, the Peerless Tang Sect, I will definitely help Huo Yuhao help him become a god. When I get to Douluo 3, I will see if Tang Wulin can change his ways and kill his father. If I get to Douluo 4, I will make friends with Lan Xuanyu and kill Tang San! If you go to Douluo, you must definitely kill Tang San when he is a slave.
I didn't expect that the comments would be deleted, and so would the thoughts, haha 🙂 🙂
Urgent for more updates Urgent for more updates
Author, I really beg you, please update, update, update, it's not enough. If the author is great, if you post a few more pictures, I will empty my wallet.
Check in~
There is no clock in this book! ! Come~
The heroine is really good at acting. Is this called a sand sculpture? It's pretty good. Will it take off after contracting a mythical beast? Speechless, I have so many cultivators, why can't I see them? You can pull the pot to practice.
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Official(220)Scraped 21d ago
Urge for updates, Urge for updates, Urge for updates for updates
Great author, this book is so good, I want to ask for an update! If the author doesn't update, if you don't update, I won't read it. If I don't read, I won't have a monthly pass. If I don't have a monthly pass, the author will cry (the pictures are all of our cute and cute Ning Ning)
Want to ask
When will Tang Hao's attitude change? In fact, I feel that the heroine's own attitude towards Tang Hao is also slightly wrong. The two parties have never communicated with each other. It is a bit unaccustomed to define things based on their own subjectivity.
The outline setting is very good, but the writing power is insufficient.
In terms of character group costumes and settings, it is very interesting and innovative. It has a good understanding of Tang Hao's mentality during his time in the Holy Soul Village. Unfortunately, there was a deviation in the early description of the heroine and Tang Hao. The author probably wanted to portray that the heroine and Tang Hao care about each other, but they are estranged due to deviations in their views on each other's behavior. This will pave the way for Tang Hao to make changes to his children's guilt. This will create a great sense of contrast as a highlight, no less than the crematorium of chasing his wife in romance novels. Unfortunately, the author's description of Tang Hao's creation has a lot of deviations. This deviation lies in the contrast and inappropriate words used to describe some of Tang Hao's psychological activities, such as in the original text: "His sister is a useless useless martial spirit" (psychological activities). Wouldn't it be a lot better if you changed it to his sister's martial spirit, which is the useless martial spirit? Some words really don't fit together. If one or two more words are added, the meaning of a sentence will be greatly deviated. And this passage in the article: "Sure enough, women are not as good as men. It's okay for my daughter to not be close to her family. She pretends to be well-behaved and clever, but in fact she is so jealous. It's really embarrassing! No wonder Wuhun is a cunning and weak creature like a fox. It's so appropriate!" It's even worse. As soon as this sentence comes out, the mental image of Tang Hao in the article is basically finalized in the readers. What image is it? Just like the idea of a male chauvinist in ancient Chinese feudal society, any modern normal person would be disgusted with such an idea. Don't think that revealing the secret settings and endings in advance can solve the problem. People's psychological activities are greatly affected by habitual thinking. Today you see a man with a sloppy face and swearing. No matter how bright and beautiful he is in the future, you will not have a good impression of him. In the past, your father discriminated against you. In the future, if he changes and becomes a good father, there will always be a gap between the two parties. Preconceptions in people's hearts are like a big mountain. Now it can only be a pity that the author used too much force in writing and broke the pen. If it were not shaped in such a way, this book would have done very well, and the setting was really good. If the author could read more useful ideas in the comments section and reword the article, he probably wouldn't have dissuaded many people in the first few posts.
The author will update it as soon as possible so that it will look good
I really like this book, especially Xiao Yan and Tang Ning.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please update soon!
I won't go into too much detail, if you want to see this kind of thing, don't miss it! ! It's really nice to see Chinese people not lying to Chinese people!
I hate Tang San! dislike! Tang San really is, I feel disgusting anyway!
If I travel to Douluo 1, I will definitely kill Tang San. If I travel to Douluo 2, the Peerless Tang Sect, I will definitely help Huo Yuhao help him become a god. When I get to Douluo 3, I will see if Tang Wulin can change his ways and kill his father. If I get to Douluo 4, I will make friends with Lan Xuanyu and kill Tang San! If you go to Douluo, you must definitely kill Tang San when he is a slave.
I didn't expect that the comments would be deleted, and so would the thoughts, haha 🙂 🙂
Urgent for more updates Urgent for more updates
Author, I really beg you, please update, update, update, it's not enough. If the author is great, if you post a few more pictures, I will empty my wallet.
Check in~
There is no clock in this book! ! Come~
The heroine is really good at acting. Is this called a sand sculpture? It's pretty good. Will it take off after contracting a mythical beast? Speechless, I have so many cultivators, why can't I see them? You can pull the pot to practice.
