Heaven Help

Heaven Help

by Calling In Vain

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124Kwords54chapters
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Ch. 54突如其来的结局(大结局)
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About This Novel

One day, a mortal appeared in the APP that posted bounty tasks among the gods. The Jade Emperor discovered a big bug in Tian Tiao. Immortals cannot harm mortals, but mortals can carry bricks straight to the Lingxiao Palace. Jade Emperor: I want to change the rules of heaven. Great God: The rules of heaven are not what you want to change, you can change them if you want. Holding the magic weapon of heaven, he is invincible in the mortal world. Relying on his status as a mortal, no one in heaven would dare to commit a crime. Jade Emperor: Someone come and stop this kid. Immortals: I can't do this! ... Book club group: 46410151

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Beicheng Pinellia96mo ago

Very good very good

The author keeps up the good work.

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Cola Monkey98mo ago

Great book!

Come on. . .

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yh96mo ago

It's over too quickly!

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鱼98296mo ago

I've played it so quickly and I haven't seen enough yet.

It's too little. The author should rewrite it.

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Beicheng Pinellia96mo ago

very good.

Work hard to produce a book similar to this one.

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幼儿园扛把子97mo ago

Not much to see.

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Yaojiu0299mo ago

The opening is simple and bright, good-looking and good-looking

I really hope I can read a few more chapters every day. I beg you to read more chapters! ! !

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96mo ago

It's a good book, it's so beautiful, of course I think so, but it suits my taste, so it's not bad.

It's beautiful. If there could be more, and the ending wouldn't be so hasty, I believe you would be better off.

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Where is the Warm Sun🍓 Not Charming?95mo ago

One person can achieve enlightenment - Comment: Heavenly Court Helps

Comment: As the saying goes: "When one person attains enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven." That is to say, if one member of the family becomes successful, everyone around him will benefit from it. The protagonist of this article is this enlightened man. After reading the full text, in my impression, the protagonist Liu Lei is a loser who was hit by a pie falling from the sky on the street. He was just looking for a part-time job when he came across such a weird software, and he reached the pinnacle of his life out of control. Although the author's imagination is very broad, there are loopholes in the plot. The beginning is very simple, being debt-collected is very ordinary, and the reason is a bit tacky. Then, while looking for part-time software, I actually came across this big pie: "Heavenly Help." Although it was also a task, it was true that I got a reward. However, isn't it a bit illogical for the male protagonist to curiously click on this before facing the most difficult thing for him at the moment? Could it be that in the author's eyes, being debt collector is just a boring gimmick? No real meaning? I think it would be more natural to start with a different beginning. If this software can solve the male protagonist's difficulties, such a deviation in logic is barely acceptable. However, after entering this software, the male protagonist received the reward "Sleepy Man" for the first time. This kind of operation of making the debt collector fall asleep and tear up the IOU by himself is really unheard of. Since the male protagonist is cornered, can a "sleepy guy" easily solve it? Can I understand it this way: "It's just emphasizing that the things given by the immortals can solve all difficulties?" Then why when the male protagonist asked these immortals in the software more than once if they could cure his mother's illness, the unanimous answer he received was: they cannot interfere in the affairs of mortals. This makes me a little confused. With such inconsistencies, what is the author's purpose? Is it just saying that after the protagonist receives brief help from the gods, he has to rely on himself in the end? In terms of reshaping the body of the male protagonist, the logic is also unsatisfactory. If we talk about reshaping the body, it is to pave the way for becoming an immortal later. Wasn't the process a bit too brief? This article makes me feel that it is about the male protagonist stumbled to the peak of life through repeated "lucky" events. If you had such a software, how would you use it? Book Reviewer: Nuanyang

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Drinking Will Make You Blush96mo ago

If you are confused, raise your hand.

What was he writing? I read a few chapters in confusion.

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