Mrs. Pin, One of Hou Men's Legitimate Daughters
by Ling Qiqi
About This Novel
The new article "The Dark Side's Beloved" has been published, dear friends, welcome to join in! After traveling through time, Gu Mingqing became the legitimate second daughter of the Zhongyong Hou Mansion of the Jin Dynasty. Gu Mingqing originally thought that from now on she would be able to live a leisurely life of "sitting and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court, smiling and watching the clouds rolling and rolling in the sky." Unexpectedly, her father was married into a married woman's house, and she was a poor child born to her original wife. Her status was embarrassing. Before Gu Mingqing had time to adapt to her new identity, she was married into a farmhouse by her stepmother. She had just stepped out of the tiger's den and into the wolf's den. However, her father-in-law said: "Father said that a man should love his wife. Madam, don't worry, I will love you from now on. Whatever is delicious or useful, I will stick to you first." The father-in-law who loves his daughter-in-law said: "Mingqing, my biggest regret is that I can't have a fair and tender daughter. , You are my daughter-in-law, not much different from a daughter-in-law. If the brat dares to bully you in the future, my father will definitely teach him a lesson!" My mother-in-law, who regards her daughter-in-law as her daughter, said, "I have been looking forward to it for so many years, and God has finally given me a good daughter-in-law. Mingqing, you will be my daughter-in-law from now on." Gu Mingqing touched her chin. This life is different from what she thought. She seems to have fallen into a trap!
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Official(282)Scraped 22d ago
There were too many scenes with Tang Jingjing. It felt like the heroine became the supporting actress in the end, and a lot of the chapters were about Tang Jingjing. The heroine became dispensable. Although she is an important supporting actress, she has too many roles.
I hope you will write about the female third in the back. Go in and write about the female third. Medical skills and art can save people like lives. Then I will follow it. If not, I won't be able to watch it anymore.
The heroine is so disgusting
The heroine is really a cold-blooded person. She lets Tang Jingjing act like a monster and does nothing, harming so many people. She is the most disgusting heroine.
I feel like it would be great if we have a third female lead who is kind and good at cooking. If we have a third female lead who can do medicine and art, it would be great. Do you think this is right?
Tang · Green Tea · White Lotus · Jingjing Garbage Mantra
1. I don't know 2. I don't have 3. I do this for her own good 4. You don't understand 5. Why do you think of me like this? 6. I thought you would understand me ... →_→Humph, little trash
Tang·Bailian·Green Tea·Jingjing finally received the lunch box
Everyone celebrates🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 Everyone is happy💕💕💕💕💕💕 In fact, I think that if the heroine tells Tang Jingjing that she has also traveled through time, she should behave herself after time travel. A seductress like Tang Jingjing deserves this fate. It is a shame for people who time travel and so on. We should verbally attack and destroy her soul to make her realize that she is just cannon fodder and Mingqing is the heroine. Of course this is just my idea, hehe~~~
You should learn from the great masters. Below I recommend a few great masters whose articles I have read to learn from.
Author, you are not prioritizing! What are male and female protagonists? ! Are the male and female protagonists the main people to be described? All plots must be written around the male and female protagonists, and other unimportant male and female matching matters can be dealt with in one go. At most, two more male, two female, and two more characters will be enough. What's going on now? ! Any of the seven aunts, eight uncles, Niu Xinghua, senior brother, master, step-sister, aunt, the prince, the prince, the general, the grandson, etc. Will take up the entire page, while the male and female protagonists are the little transparent ones in the corner, and will only be described in a little space. So the author probably doesn't know how to write about male and female protagonists. My brain is out of gas! When writing a novel, shouldn't you first have an outline and know how to write it? The male and female protagonists are not as plump as a passerby! I really don't know what it means. The more I read it, the more boring it becomes and I want to abandon the article. You should learn more from the great masters! I have seen the great gods praised by the article: Laughing Beauty, Spring Warm Smile, Jinhuang, Ding Mo, Zhizhi, Willow Leaves in Winter, Butterfly Shadow under the Moon, Qingge Yiyi, Lu Shijiu, Yun Ni, Listening to the Falling Flowers, etc. Recommend their articles. Maybe, maybe these great masters don't want to appear in other people's book review areas, but as an old bookworm, I know how heartbreaking it is when there is a book shortage, so I still want to recommend the works of these great masters for everyone to enjoy!
This article is long enough, and there are many weird characters appearing. Every excellent supporting character is written in great detail. Although these people did not end well, their lives were very exciting. In comparison, the male and female protagonists are a bit bland and have no protagonist aura at all, which makes me often forget that they are the protagonists. There are too many branches and too thin branches, and the main stem grows too slowly. It is like writing a composition, and the embellishments are too lengthy and elaborate, making the theme unclear.
I don't know what the meaning of the character Tang Jingjing is. Is it just to make people hate me? It's boring.
I hope Tang Jingjing ends up miserable. Although she was not responsible for the deaths of those people, it was all because of her. How many lives were lost? So disgusting Tang Jingjing
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Official(282)Scraped 22d ago
There were too many scenes with Tang Jingjing. It felt like the heroine became the supporting actress in the end, and a lot of the chapters were about Tang Jingjing. The heroine became dispensable. Although she is an important supporting actress, she has too many roles.
I hope you will write about the female third in the back. Go in and write about the female third. Medical skills and art can save people like lives. Then I will follow it. If not, I won't be able to watch it anymore.
The heroine is so disgusting
The heroine is really a cold-blooded person. She lets Tang Jingjing act like a monster and does nothing, harming so many people. She is the most disgusting heroine.
I feel like it would be great if we have a third female lead who is kind and good at cooking. If we have a third female lead who can do medicine and art, it would be great. Do you think this is right?
Tang · Green Tea · White Lotus · Jingjing Garbage Mantra
1. I don't know 2. I don't have 3. I do this for her own good 4. You don't understand 5. Why do you think of me like this? 6. I thought you would understand me ... →_→Humph, little trash
Tang·Bailian·Green Tea·Jingjing finally received the lunch box
Everyone celebrates🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 Everyone is happy💕💕💕💕💕💕 In fact, I think that if the heroine tells Tang Jingjing that she has also traveled through time, she should behave herself after time travel. A seductress like Tang Jingjing deserves this fate. It is a shame for people who time travel and so on. We should verbally attack and destroy her soul to make her realize that she is just cannon fodder and Mingqing is the heroine. Of course this is just my idea, hehe~~~
You should learn from the great masters. Below I recommend a few great masters whose articles I have read to learn from.
Author, you are not prioritizing! What are male and female protagonists? ! Are the male and female protagonists the main people to be described? All plots must be written around the male and female protagonists, and other unimportant male and female matching matters can be dealt with in one go. At most, two more male, two female, and two more characters will be enough. What's going on now? ! Any of the seven aunts, eight uncles, Niu Xinghua, senior brother, master, step-sister, aunt, the prince, the prince, the general, the grandson, etc. Will take up the entire page, while the male and female protagonists are the little transparent ones in the corner, and will only be described in a little space. So the author probably doesn't know how to write about male and female protagonists. My brain is out of gas! When writing a novel, shouldn't you first have an outline and know how to write it? The male and female protagonists are not as plump as a passerby! I really don't know what it means. The more I read it, the more boring it becomes and I want to abandon the article. You should learn more from the great masters! I have seen the great gods praised by the article: Laughing Beauty, Spring Warm Smile, Jinhuang, Ding Mo, Zhizhi, Willow Leaves in Winter, Butterfly Shadow under the Moon, Qingge Yiyi, Lu Shijiu, Yun Ni, Listening to the Falling Flowers, etc. Recommend their articles. Maybe, maybe these great masters don't want to appear in other people's book review areas, but as an old bookworm, I know how heartbreaking it is when there is a book shortage, so I still want to recommend the works of these great masters for everyone to enjoy!
This article is long enough, and there are many weird characters appearing. Every excellent supporting character is written in great detail. Although these people did not end well, their lives were very exciting. In comparison, the male and female protagonists are a bit bland and have no protagonist aura at all, which makes me often forget that they are the protagonists. There are too many branches and too thin branches, and the main stem grows too slowly. It is like writing a composition, and the embellishments are too lengthy and elaborate, making the theme unclear.
I don't know what the meaning of the character Tang Jingjing is. Is it just to make people hate me? It's boring.
I hope Tang Jingjing ends up miserable. Although she was not responsible for the deaths of those people, it was all because of her. How many lives were lost? So disgusting Tang Jingjing
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